Verz Bahamut Archtype - Demidra

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

This is far from a new idea but, an archtype focused on reducing Life Points by effect at the expense of battling. Named after the spell 'Demi' in the Final Fantasy series, for now they are DARK Psychic monsters depicted as a cult of humanoid figures wrapped in dark clothes and the usual junk, but when I named the spell card Cripple Mist I thought about bringing them out as a series of Beast Warriors called 'Cripplers' instead (Cripple being a move in FFX2 that did the same thing as Demi). But the idea of Beast-Warriors being unable to attack is stupid, so... we'll see.

First six cards, tell me what you think and we'll see how it goes.

[spoiler=Monsters (6)]
VBC-018 [b]Demidra Quarterblader[/b]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
****
Psychic/Effect
Once per turn: If your Life Points are lower than your opponents; you can reduce both players Life Points by 1/4. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during a turn you activate this effect.
ATK 1800 / DEF 450

VBC-019 [b]Demidra Halfdrainer[/b]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
****
Psychic/Effect
Once per turn: If your Life Points are lower than your opponents; you can Discard 1 card to reduce your opponents Life Points by 1/4, then increase your Life Points by the amount lost. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during a turn you activate this effect.
ATK 1400 / DEF 350

VBC-020 [b]Demidra Dividejumper[/b] [color=#8b4513]Rare[/color]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
*****
Psychic/Effect
When an effect that reduces your opponents Life Points resolves successfully; Special Summon this card (from your hand).
ATK 2200 / DEF 1100

VBC-021 [b]Demidra Halfcurser[/b]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
*****
Psychic/Effect
Once per turn; If your Life Points are lower than your opponents; you can target 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it. When this effect resolves successfully; reduce both player's Life Points by 1/4. You cannot conduct your Battle during a turn you activate this effect.
ATK 2400 / DEF 1200

VBC-022 [b]Demidra Bouncer[/b]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
**
Psychic/Effect
Once per turn; you can target 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls and destroy it. When this effect resolves successfully; reduce your opponent's Life Points by 1/4. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during a turn you activate this effect.
ATK 800 / DEF 200

VBC-023 [b]Demidra Defender[/b]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
****
Psychic/Effect
If your Life Points would be reduced by a card effect; they are not reduced, and this card's Level increases by 1.
ATK 550 / DEF 2200
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[spoiler=Xyz Monsters (1)]
VBC-044 [b]Demidra Crosslasher[/b] [color=#daa520]U.Rare[/color]
[color=#4b0082][b]DARK[/b][/color]
*****
Psychic/Xyz/Effect
2 Level 5 Psychic Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material; reduce your opponents Life Points by half. Then Special Summon 1 monster from your hand or Graveyard whose ATK is less than that amount. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect.
ATK 2300 / DEF 1150
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[spoiler=Spells and Traps (4)]
VBC-057 [b]Cripple Mist[/b]
[color=#008080][b]SPELL[/b][/color]
Normal Spell
Reduce your Life Points by half, then reduce your opponents Life Points by 1/4. You cannot conduct your Battle during a turn you activate 'Cripple Mist'.

VBC-058 [b]Cripple Curse[/b]
[color=#008080][b]SPELL[/b][/color]
Equip Spell
You must discard a card to activate this card. A monster equipped with this card cannot attack or change Battle Position. A player controlling a monster equipped with this card reduces their Life Points by 1/4 during their End Phase.

VBC-068 [b]Reduction Rate of Exchange[/b] [color=#a9a9a9]S.Rare[/color]
[color=#800080][b]TRAP[/b][/color]
Continuous Trap
Once per turn: If either players Life Points are reduced by a card effect; draw 1 card.

VBC-069 [b]Counter Crippler[/b]
[color=#800080][b]TRAP[/b][/color]
Normal Trap
If a Demidra monster you control is attacked: Negate that attack, then reduce both players Life Points by 1/4.
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[NeoRWBY65]

I like these guys. Are you going to make more?

Are any of the later ones going to increase their levels, as right now you only have one card that is a viable candidate to use as Xyz material for Crosslasher

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

[quote name='Tigerstar10' timestamp='1325733720' post='5748919']
I like these guys. Are you going to make more?

Are any of the later ones going to increase their levels, as right now you only have one card that is a viable candidate to use as Xyz material for Crosslasher
[/quote]

There are more monsters pencilled in, just wanted people to see about the original idea first (and there is another Lv5, and a 4 than can increase to 5.)

Glad you like.

[NeoRWBY65]

[quote name='Verz Bahamut' timestamp='1325734875' post='5748996']

There are more monsters pencilled in, just wanted people to see about the original idea first (and there is another Lv5, and a 4 than can increase to 5.)

Glad you like.
[/quote]

I thought so. Will he be able to only increase his level while your life points are below your opponent's?

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Updated with 5 new cards.

Still not too happy with these yet.