ITT: Rodrigo returns to Written Cards

[CDDRodrigo]

Trying to make support for understupported archetypes

[color=#ff8c00][b]Underworld Factory Controller[/b][/color]
Machine/Tuner
DARK/4*/ATK 1200 DEF 1800
During the turn this card is Normal Summoned: You can Normal Summon 1 "Cyberdark" monster in addition to your Normal Summon or Set. you can only gain this effect once per turn. When this card on the field is destroyed: Add 1 "Cyberdark" monster from your Deck to your hand.

[b][color=#ee82ee]Deceiving Umbra[/color][/b]
Trap/Counter
Activate only if you control a face-up Synchro Monster that used a "Cyberdark" monster as its Synchro Material. Negate the activation and the effect of a Spell, Trap, Spell/Trap effect, or Effect Monster's effect and destroy the card.

[color=#ff8c00][b]Flamvell Rhymer[/b][/color]
Pyro/Effect
FIRE/1*/ATK 0 DEF 200
You can dsicard this card; All face-up "Flamvell" monsters you conrol are unnafected by your opponent's card effects until the end Phase. You can activate this effect during either player's turn.

[color=#00ff00][b]Assault Explosion[/b][/color]
Spell/Normal
Return 1 "/Assault Mode" monster from your hand or Graveyard to the deck and target 1 card on the field; Destroy the target and draw 1 card.

[Resident Fascist]

Rhymer makes Flamvells like tier 1.5 lol

[Agro]

Underworld factory makes Trish. I LIKE IT. Run it casual Dark Simorgh and we have our fun.

Umbra's like a chariot on steroids... except I don't want to have a Cyberdark on the field to use it!

What Shard said about Rhymer, and the effect pretty much forces you to wait a turn, seeing as there are only a select amount of Synchro monsters you can summon that turn (Crimson Blader, BRD, etc.)

Assault Explosion is a better AMA card, but I still dunno if I'd run it ever.

Oh, and welcome back to Written. Maybe I'll post a thread to celebrate xD

[CDDRodrigo]

[quote name='Order-Sol' timestamp='1325168423' post='5736624']
Rhymer makes Flamvells like tier 1.5 lol
[/quote]

that's the point lol

thanks for the comments

[Toffee.]

[quote name='Order-Sol' timestamp='1325168423' post='5736624']
Rhymer makes Flamvells like tier 1.5 lol[/quote]
Not exactly.
Sure giving Rekindling a RotA is nice and all, but you cant Summon any non-FIRE monsters the turn you use that effect.

Regardless, its still a nice support card.

[.Nu-13]

Controller makes +0 Synchros. Maybe make it if it's destroyed. Umbra, as I said on MSN, has a very narrow activation window and doesn't seem that useful. Rhymer is...broke. Sure, there is a drawback, but you can just like, wait until the next turn? Assault Explosion on the other hand is actually really solid :3

[CDDRodrigo]

Thanks, made changes, what do you think now? :3

[Agro]

Rhymer's a bit more like what Umbra was. A card with a small activation window. Though with Flamvells, it's certainly a lot larger.

[.Nu-13]

You got it wrong. Cyberdark play in most cases:

1. Summon a Cyberdark.
2. Use its effect, revive Phalanx.
3. Synchro

Only 2 is a window where you can activate Umbra. Because if your opponent has Warning, they will Warning the Cyberdark or the Synchro. And Prison and such, you don't control a Cyberdark anymore.