Crystal Remnants Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 I tried editing to maybe make things as different as I could while still going for the same idea. As for the eidetic memory, I understand what you mean. I've come across people whose apps follow all of my usual standards, but are made so that they sort of clash with the ideas I had for my RP. I'm hoping my app fits the bill better. I also changed the height, since you are right about the average height thing, and the fastest runners aren't even 6 feet tall in real life. Basically I tried to dumb him down in certain areas, while not making him a total idiot, and I gave him a lot more unappealing traits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 (notices now) Alright, I'll editz. Should be done tonight or tomorrow morning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Rinne, have you read my edited app yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 @Dharc: Didn't notice, but I'll get to it tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Alright, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 I normally wouldn't play a girl, but if you need some, I guess I'll give it a shot. By posting this, I am stating that I have read the rules and plot of the RP and know what I am getting into. I also will not complain if my character gets denied or asked to be changed.[spoiler=Ed00001 – Flora Scadlock]Full Name: Flora Amane ScadlockAge, Birthday: 23, March 7Gender, Sexuality: Female, X (According to the table on the link, I can do this right?)Occupation: VeterinarianAppearance: Flora has a height of about 5 feet and 6 inches. She is very slender, and weighs about 115 pounds. Her light skin is pale, and soft to the touch. Flora has long, shoulder length hair, which is dark brown and full. She lets it hang down straight, but it covers her right eye by just enough for it to still be seen. Her eyes are bright green, and have a subtle shine about them.Clothing: Flora will usually wear a pink skirt with a tight cyan belt around it. Underneath that, she will wear black tights with a pair of blue trainers on her feet. Her top is a thin white longsleeve shirt underneath her plain cyan shortsleeve shirt. She will sometimes put on a pair of reading glasses, which she wears for the sole reason that they look good. They are non-perscription.Personality: Flora is extremely shy, and will usually be unable to converse if put in the spotlight, or if meeting new people. Even when speaking loudly, she is seemingly quiet, but when actually yelling, she will become excessively loud.She has many fears, and is also known to jump at the sight of her own shadow. Flora is the epitamy of kindness. If you were to look up kind, caring, nice, or anything like that in the dictionary, her picture would be the result. If her patience is pushed far enough, her frustration steadily builds into a very uncharacteristic fit of extreme rage. When this happens, you don't want to be around her. When needed, she can bring up the courage to be surprisingly intimidating, but this rarely happens. When Flora warms up to a person, or people, she can become very cheerful, talkative, and less inept in her social interactions.Family & Friends:Richard Scadlock, 29, Brother.Crystal Scadlock, 58, Mother.John Scadlock, 62, Father.Arty, 3, Pet dog and best friend.Theme Song: MagicPete – “Healing Touch”Skills: Flora is very agile and quick on her feat, she is also very, very good with animals, so much so that she appeals to most of the animals she meets. Also slightly technologically adept. Uncanny knowledge of sewing.EDF: [spoiler= ]L0 – Invigoration: Increased physical factors, mostly involving stamina and endurance (not so much strength), as well as a quicker relative rate of recover for minor injuries and illnesses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Ed00001, -Dharc-, you are both ACCEPTED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Thank you very much, Rinne. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted December 30, 2011 Share Posted December 30, 2011 · Hidden by Crystal Remnants, December 30, 2011 - Stupid question Hidden by Crystal Remnants, December 30, 2011 - Stupid question So should I assume I'm still pending then? Link to comment
Cozmosus Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 That's great, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Hey Rinne, just wanted to let you know that I did make edits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Reserve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Remnants, you are ACCEPTED, and Hydra, you're reserved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Thanks so much! It's been a long time since I've seen a well-done RP that's actually interesting, so I'm glad to be a part of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 By posting this, I am stating that I have read the rules and plot of the RP and know what I am getting into. I also will not complain ifmy character gets denied or asked to be changed.[spoiler=Quiksilver – Liam Carmichael]FullName: Liam Anthony CarmichaelAge,Birthday: 23Gender,Sexuality: Male, 3Occupation: Aspiring writer / valet Appearance: Liam is tall and lanky, with any fat that might have developed long since gone due to a strict regiment of dieting and jogging. While fit, he is by no means a bodybuilder, and most people tend to underestimate Liam because of his peaceful demeanor and unremarkable face. His hair is a dirty shade of blond, cut short and and to the point. Eyes like the sea gaze out of a typically Irish face, with molded features and a overwhelmingly ordinary visage. Clothing: Liam's usual outfit is casual and fitting, composed of a ordinary white T-shirt with a maroon hoodie pulled over that. A pair of worn, old jeans usually make up the rest of this outfit along with a pair of beat-up old sneakers, the latter of which somehow or other always end up unlaced. Personality: Liam is a dreamer. Ambitious, imaginative and naive to a fault, he alternates between having his head in the clouds and writing furiously on his laptop. His main fault is he can never follow through on his ideas; a procrastinator by nature and lazy by upbringing, he can almost never commit to what he's doing. His laidback, jocular manner also has a part in this - he can never seem to take things seriously.He's passionate about the things that he does, and holds writing in the highest esteem. He's not afraid to admit his burgeoning career as a writer nor is he afraid to trade fists when someone mocks him for it. Usually, however, he is the live-and-let-live type. He's never the one to start a fight, though as he's clever enough to use his slight frame to his advantage, he might be the one ending them. Family&Friends:Anthony Carmichael, 54, father.Elizabeth Carmichael, 53, mother.Delany Kettering, 26, older sisterHaley Bennett, 23, on-off girlfriendJoshua Greene, 23, best friendThemeSong: Skills: Liam is very good at writing, and has been known to write very compelling and vivid situations in his stories. He also has an uncanny ways with languages, and speaks both English and German with a smattering of Spanish as well. Reading people is also a speciality of his, and he knows how to placate someone or piss them off.EDF:[spoiler=][b]L0 –Invigoration[/b]:Increased physical factors, mostly involving stamina and endurance (not so much strength),as well as a quicker relative rate of recover for minor injuries and illnesses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 I like~! Quicksilver, you are ACCEPTED. Now, as a random note, I think I'm just going to act as GM for this RP, meaning that you guys will get one extra character slot before I close registration and start this thing up. :'D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra of Ages Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 By posting this, I am stating that I have read the rules and plot of the RP and know what I am getting into. I also will not complain if my character gets denied or asked to be changed.[spoiler=Hydra of Gentlemanliness – {Gabrielle Ashwood}]Full Name: Gabrielle AshwoodAge, Birthday: 28, January 2Gender, Sexuality: Male, 4Occupation: Accountant / Organized Crime Fence Appearance: Gabe is a rather short man, standing at about five-and-a-half feet at the absolute highest, with a gaunt bodytype and a hollow, pulled looking face. His features are, individually, youthful and bright- but combined, they're dragged down by the tiredness in his eyes, the lack of meat on his cheeks and the sicklyness of his skin. He has a small amount of muscle mass on his body, though it's notably untempered- and generally, visible only because tiredness and undernourishment have eaten away any excess fat he had around them.His eyes are a sullen dark brown, though they have a surprising amount of depth to them- despite being unremarkable, they tend to draw attention from the rest of his features. His hair is a thick dark black, slightly curly and allowed to grow slightly past his ears, though still kept trimmed into an orderly design- he grows very little facial hair, and that he does is shaved off almost immediately. His nose is simple but sharp, and tends to direct the rest of his face; while Gabe normally appears weak and almost fragile, he is very good at conveying threats without words when people stare him directly in the face. Clothing: Gabrielle's normal wardrobe is a strange sort of fusion between business casual and back-alley chic- a white dress shirt with the first and second buttons left undone and a black pair of office pants, covered by a grey military greatcoat with a number of pockets to it. Gabe doesn't make much of an effort not to appear as a shady individual, but nor does he make an effort to make an impression- his entire wardrobe seems to consist of what he simply had at the time to throw on that was mildly appropriate to the situation at hand. Attached to his lapel is a strange black pin, which marks his status to the less unsavory members of society that may wish to do business. Personality: Gabrielle might be generously described as nihilistic, or simply bored with life; while not lazy in the slightest, the man has little ambition for himself- what he does is more often for other people, though even that's a bit rare. He lacks strong reactions, and is capable of taking basically any situation in stride, no matter the context- none have seen him truly angry, or sad, or even particularly happy for the matter. While this hurts his ability to empathize with others, he is still very capable of recognizing and responding to the emotions of others- indeed, his lack of own emotion seems to allow him to examine that of others even more closely. Gabe can tell a lot from a single look, and can often manipulate a scenario based off of a slight bit of uncertainty a person may feel while standing up to him.Gabrielle's work ethic allows him to achieve at basically anything he puts his mind to, even if he doesn't appear to have much enthusiasm for the job at hand-in particular, he's very good at numbers and spreadsheets, as well as recognizing patterns or trends. He has the startling ability to recognizes situations very shortly after finding himself in them, and synthesizes new data very quickly- in a stressful situation, he is perhaps the greatest person to have around. Unfortunately, his lack of ambition leads him to squandering his time in most cases- he almost never takes the initiative without someone directing him to do it first, though it's less a preoccupation with laziness as it is an ability to get familiar in his lifestyle very quickly.When speaking, Gabe waxes intelligently and rarely makes idle conversation- in general, he's rather quiet unless he has something specific in mind to say. He doesn't get into conversations very often, most of his speech being made up of simple statements of facts.Family & Friends:Michael Ashwood, 23, BrotherSusana Mariner, 21, CousinTheodore Sorell, 23, Co-WorkerJoanna Pierce, 25, Client / Gang MemberDevin Johns, 38, Client / Gang MemberJoshua "Knives" Oscars, 63, Client / Gang MemberTheme Song: Masakazu Sugimori [Ghost Trick Official Sound Track] – “A Captive of Fate” Skills: Gabrielle is incredibly good with mathematics, able to do complex calculations via mental math without tools. Even more than that, he is very good at intimidation without words- Gabrielle has a complex knowledge of human emotion, and is able to use that to his advantage. Finally, Gabrielle is exceptionally innovative, even under stressful situations- he is capable of thinking of unorthodox solutions and ideas without much prompting, and is exceptionally efficient in whatever his plans lead him to.[spoiler= EDF]L0 – Invigoration: Increased physical factors, mostly involving stamina and endurance (not so much strength), as well as a quicker relative rate of recover for minor injuries and illnesses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Oooh, I like. He'll be fun with the plot later on. Hydra, you're ACCEPTED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Random Dude Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Can I get a reserve? I'll post an app Tomorrow probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Reserved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustyowl Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 I would like to reserve please, if you're still accepting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Locking after realizing I didn't plan enough - apologies for getting so far in and only noticing it now. (Blame it on trying to make an original world RP.) Please PM me if you need to confront/whine/accuse me of being incompetent. :"3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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