some of my stuff #2

[lightswornGENEX]

decaying pillar of atlantis
effect
rock
water
level 6
ATK 0/ DEF 3000

effect: While this card is in face-up attack position, this card cannot be selected as an attack target.


Angered Serpant
effect
reptile
earth
level 4
ATK 1800/ DEF 1000

effect: Your opponent cannot flip-summon any monsters.


Imperial Lancer
effect
light
warrior
level 4
ATK 1500/ DEF1500
effect: Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to activate 1 of the following effects:
Gain 2000 life points
Look at your opponent's hand and any face-down monsters on your opponent's side of the field. Return any tuner monsters to the bottom of the deck in any order you desire.

[lightswornGENEX]

please provide feedback.

[lightswornGENEX]

please provide feedback.about my cards.

[lightswornGENEX]

please provide feedback about my cards.

[lightswornGENEX]

are people just ignoring this on purpose?.....the only possible legitimate reasons would be that i am still new to this forum(as this is my 3rd thread)...or my cards are so awful that people just ignore it(but then again, if this were true, if no one provides feedback, i won't know if or why they are not good.)....

[BFG Studios]

*reads dates* whoa... idk why this hasn't been commented on yet... guess just bad timing? ... anyway, dont worry buddy, i'll comment!

overall, a lot of things need to be capitalized like the Attributes (LIGHT, EARTH, etc.), Type (Warrior, Reptile, etc.), and the Level (Level #) ..... but that all is minor...
for the cards themselves, all of their effects are simple... which, dont get me wrong, that is perfectly okay... just that its always nice to have a longer effect to make it unique from other cards already made...

1st card seems simple enough, but even so, it might be OP'd since it cannot be attacked while in attack pos., and that the def is 3000... kind of reminds me of labyrinth wall, except with an effect... so i guess that was is ok... 8/10
2nd card is even more simple, so much so that it could be a vanilla... so since its so simple, i cant really rate on the effect, so its a pretty good card though... 8/10
3rd, even though its 2 cards, 2000 may be much... but i wouldnt know completely... plus the second effect for it with the tuners is a weaker effect, so people may or may not choose the first effect more often... but still, good ideas... 8.5/10

And i know you're new, but the OCG, the card grammer that makes it official is always nice to have when its proper... its really hard to get right all the time, but i can help... if you want...
1st = [b]When this card is in face-up Attack Position: This card cannot be targeted for an attack.[/b]
2nd = [b]As long as this card is face-up on the field: Your opponent cannot Flip Summon any monsters.[/b]
3rd =
[b]Once per turn: You can discard 2 cards; activate 1 of the following effects:[/b]
[b]•You gain 2000 Life Points.[/b]
[b]•Look at your opponent's hand and any Set monsters; place any Tuner Monsters to the bottom of your opponent's Deck.[/b]

Hopefully that all helped... and good luck making more cards

[lightswornGENEX]

[quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1324415273' post='5719629']
*reads dates* whoa... idk why this hasn't been commented on yet... guess just bad timing? ... anyway, dont worry buddy, i'll comment!

overall, a lot of things need to be capitalized like the Attributes (LIGHT, EARTH, etc.), Type (Warrior, Reptile, etc.), and the Level (Level #) ..... but that all is minor...
for the cards themselves, all of their effects are simple... which, dont get me wrong, that is perfectly okay... just that its always nice to have a longer effect to make it unique from other cards already made...

1st card seems simple enough, but even so, it might be OP'd since it cannot be attacked while in attack pos., and that the def is 3000... kind of reminds me of labyrinth wall, except with an effect... so i guess that was is ok... 8/10
2nd card is even more simple, so much so that it could be a vanilla... so since its so simple, i cant really rate on the effect, so its a pretty good card though... 8/10
3rd, even though its 2 cards, 2000 may be much... but i wouldnt know completely... plus the second effect for it with the tuners is a weaker effect, so people may or may not choose the first effect more often... but still, good ideas... 8.5/10

And i know you're new, but the OCG, the card grammer that makes it official is always nice to have when its proper... its really hard to get right all the time, but i can help... if you want...
1st = [b]When this card is in face-up Attack Position: This card cannot be targeted for an attack.[/b]
2nd = [b]As long as this card is face-up on the field: Your opponent cannot Flip Summon any monsters.[/b]
3rd =
[b]Once per turn: You can discard 2 cards; activate 1 of the following effects:[/b]
[b]•You gain 2000 Life Points.[/b]
[b]•Look at your opponent's hand and any Set monsters; place any Tuner Monsters to the bottom of your opponent's Deck.[/b]

Hopefully that all helped... and good luck making more cards
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