Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 [center][font=courier new,courier,monospace][img]http://www.iaza.com/work/110918C/iaza12049470411200.png[/img][/font][/center] [center][color=#666666][font=tahoma,helvetica,arial,sans-serif][size=3][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=1]Credit to Inferno Knight LC[/size][/font][/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][font=tahoma,helvetica,arial,sans-serif][size=3][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=1][size=4][color=#008080]Hello, my name is Alexandra. Were you expecting my Uncle? Well, he is hiding from Daemon at the moment. I'd love to see him get his butt kicked by Daemon, but he won't come out of his bunker. That is where you come in. I want you guys to find a way to get him to come out of his bunker and throw the first punch. The three that have the best attempt get a reward.[/color][/size][/size][/font][/size][/font][/center] [center][spoiler=What you really will be doing][/center] [center][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4][color=#008080]Create a Trap Card that forces a monster to attack.[/color][/size][/font][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=How your cards will be graded][/center] [center][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4][color=#008080]I do grading different from my Uncle. I put more value on Playability and Balance than he does. Creativity is nothing as long as the card does its job. I hope you guys understand.[/color][/size][/font][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]Card Grammar: ?/25[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]Playability: ?/35[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]Balance: ?/40[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]Total: ?/100[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Prizes][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]1st Place: 200 Points and 2 Likes[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]2nd Place: 150 Points and 1 Like[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]3rd Place: 100 Points[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Deadline][/center] [center][color=#008080][font=courier new,courier,monospace][size=4]I need this done before he finds out what I'm doing. I'll give you guys until 5PM (PST) on the 4th to submit your cards.[/size][/font][/color][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Contestants][/center] [center][color=#008080][size=4][font=courier new,courier,monospace]1. Clear Vice Dragon[/font][/size][/color][/center] [center][color=#008080][size=4][font=courier new,courier,monospace]2. Darkplant - FEAR[/font][/size][/color][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/9589/393677c.jpg[/img] [quote]Activate if you control a face-up Rank 5 or higher Monster. All Monsters on the field are changed to Attack Position and must attack during the owner's Battle Phase. All monsters on your opponent's side of the field gain 1000 ATK. If an Xyz Monster you control battles: Negate the effects of the monster it attacks/is attacked by. During each of your Standby Phases: Pay 1000 Life Points. If you cannot: Destroy this card.[/quote] This is some of the strangest wordings I've ever done. O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 [color=#008080]I believe you. Card accepted.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/4818/115072l.jpg[/img] When your opponent declares an attack against a monter you control: Special Summon this card in Attack Position; it is treated as an Effect Monster Card (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 8/ATK 3000/DEF 0). This card cannot attack. During each of your opponent's Battle Phases, your opponent must attack this monster with at least 1 monster he/she controls, if able. If not, during the End Phase of that turn, destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls. (This card is still treated as a Trap Card.) Made it pretty good on purpose, yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 [color=#008080]Darkplant is accepted.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 Hello alexandra! I'm in. Card will be up 2mrw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 Striker has a niece..? Kay, I'm just gonna bring Daemon here so we can sort this all out ;3 Card will be up when I deem it necessary. >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 [color=teal]sgrug4, accepted. Passion Pit, Daemon knows already. Uncle Nate wanted me to stay in C/O. Originally it was The Treehouse. Also, accepted[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 [color=teal]A low turnout? Makes finding the top 4 that much easier.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 4, 2011 Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 Any chance you'll let me turn mine within the next hour or two? I had a little mix-up as to when the card was due. That and I've had a lot on my plate the past few days. I'll edit this post with it, but it will be up real quick. [spoiler='Here it is if you'll still accept it'] [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee395/AggroDrago/WithOneWayOut-2.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 [quote name='Passion Pit' timestamp='1323001401' post='5685236'] Any chance you'll let me turn mine within the next hour or two? I had a little mix-up as to when the card was due. That and I've had a lot on my plate the past few days. I'll edit this post with it, but it will be up real quick. [spoiler='Here it is if you'll still accept it'] [img]http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee395/AggroDrago/WithOneWayOut-2.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [/quote] [color=teal]I'm extending the deadline to 5PM today, so you are fine.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted December 4, 2011 Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 Sorry i'm late! [spoiler= My Entry] [IMG]http://i40.tinypic.com/2nl7oci.png[/IMG] [/spoiler] I hope the lore was big enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted December 5, 2011 Report Share Posted December 5, 2011 I know, 3 hours and 47 minutes late, but I still pray for acceptance into this contest: [img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/743/457688.jpg[/img] Activate this card when you Normal Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster. All monsters in face-up Attack Position gain 500 ATK. During each of your opponent's Battle Phases, your opponent must attack, if able. If your opponent inflicts Battle Damage; Draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2011 [color=teal]Accepted. Cards should be graded tomorrow.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 Alright, I'm done with the persona for now. Questions about the scores come to me by PM. [spoiler=101100111000] Card Grammar: 23/25 Playability: 33/35 Balance: 38/40 Total: 94/100 [b]Still doing good, especially for a newb. Keep it up.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=sgrug4] Card Grammar: 24/25 Playability: 35/35 Balance: 40/40 Total: 99/100 [b]WHAT THE HECK!!! You forgot a semi-colon in your Card Grammar btw.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Passion Pit] Card Grammar: 23/25 Playability: 33/35 Balance: 39/40 Total: 95/100 [b]You got PWN'd by sgrug again.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Darkplant - FEAR] Card Grammar: 24/25 Playability: 35/35 Balance: 40/40 Total: 99/100 [b]Same comment as sgrug's[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Clear Vice Dragon] Card Grammar: 25/25 Playability: 34/35 Balance: 40/40 Total: 99/100 [b]Rank 5 restriction prevented perfection in a sense that few Rank 5s are ran. Otherwise, WHAT THE HECK!!![/b][/spoiler] 3 way tie for first, with all 3 of them getting near-flawless scores? I'm going to try and get a guest judge to help break this tie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 [quote name='Mr. Striker' timestamp='1323149846' post='5690212'] Alright, I'm done with the persona for now. Questions about the scores come to me by PM. [spoiler=101100111000] Card Grammar: 23/25 Playability: 33/35 Balance: 38/40 Total: 94/100 [b]Still doing good, especially for a newb. Keep it up.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=sgrug4] Card Grammar: 24/25 Playability: 35/35 Balance: 40/40 Total: 99/100 [b]WHAT THE HECK!!! You forgot a semi-colon in your Card Grammar btw.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Passion Pit] Card Grammar: 23/25 Playability: 32/35 Balance: 39/40 Total: 96/100 [b]You got PWN'd by sgrug again.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Darkplant - FEAR] Card Grammar: 24/25 Playability: 35/35 Balance: 40/40 Total: 99/100 [b]Same comment as sgrug's[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Clear Vice Dragon] Card Grammar: 25/25 Playability: 34/35 Balance: 40/40 Total: 99/100 [b]Rank 5 restriction prevented perfection in a sense that few Rank 5s are ran. Otherwise, WHAT THE HECK!!![/b][/spoiler] 3 way tie for first, with all 3 of them getting near-flawless scores? I'm going to try and get a guest judge to help break this tie. [/quote]Why can't I shake the feeling I shouldn't have said anything? Anyway, I'll PM you for fixes/why points marked off yada yada. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 I don't know if I should be saying this (for my own score) but I'm honest and want to give my rivals fairness. It's "Rank 5 or higher". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 [quote name='Clear Vice Dragon' timestamp='1323158628' post='5690303'] I don't know if I should be saying this (for my own score) but I'm honest and want to give my rivals fairness. It's "Rank 5 or higher". [/quote] I saw that. I bring my observation when I say Rank 3 and 4 are the most used. A -1 is usually a little observation applying to the card, or a doubt in balance in the sense of the power creep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 Okay, sorry. A tiny little misunderstanding >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted December 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 [quote name='Clear Vice Dragon' timestamp='1323183048' post='5690496'] Okay, sorry. A tiny little misunderstanding >.< [/quote] It's fine. I understand the need to have a score justified. That is why I enjoy this job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 I. HATE. SEMICOLONS. IMMA TAKE 1ST GRADE GRAMMAR AGAIN. EDIT: I just saw my mistake. [b]During the End Phase:[/b] [img]http://troll.me/images/jackie-chan-whut/jackie-chan-whut.jpg[/img] [img]http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv138/Kairouseki/1234931504682.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1323216907' post='5691604'] I. HATE. SEMICOLONS. IMMA TAKE 1ST GRADE GRAMMAR AGAIN. EDIT: I just saw my mistake. [b]During the End Phase:[/b] [/quote]CALM. THE F*CK. Down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='Passion Pit' timestamp='1323218811' post='5691682'] CALM. THE F*CK. Down. [/quote] No u. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1323224858' post='5691979'] No u. [/quote]I am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='Passion Pit' timestamp='1323226588' post='5692095'] I am. [/quote] kkkkkkkkk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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