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Nathanael D. Striker

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f*** it. I'll help you out

[spoiler='Entry']http://partneryahoo.photobucket.com/albums/ee395/AggroDrago/BlazeIgnitionDragon-1.jpg[/spoiler]
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If this card is used as Fusion Material for the Fusion Summon of a Pyro-type or Machine-type Fusion Monster: you can discard 1 card; add 1 Normal Trap card from your Deck to your hand OR activate 1 Normal Trap card from your hand. Each player can only use the effect of "Blaze Ignition Dragon" once per Duel.
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[quote name='Passion Pit' timestamp='1322029690' post='5660778']
f*** it. I'll help you out

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If this card is used as Fusion Material for the Fusion Summon of a Pyro-type or Machine-type Fusion Monster: you can discard 1 card; add 1 Normal Trap card from your Deck to your hand OR activate 1 Normal Trap card from your hand. Each player can only use the effect of "Blaze Ignition Dragon" once per Duel.
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Accepted Aggro.

I'm going to start judging now, but you can still enter until noon (PST).

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[quote name='En Almhjbat Wahd' timestamp='1322073130' post='5661375']
My second card is a Fusion of the first, and the first one is worthless on its own.
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I just chose one and graded it. Unless you can make another card in about an hour, you're stuck with the score you get.

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[quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1322084402' post='5661679']
It's done!
[spoiler=My Card]
[img]http://i41.tinypic.com/215rf6.png[/img]
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Hope the Text is big nuff. I enlarged it.
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Late much? I'll grade it, but try to make it on time. I put warnings up on the status bar and in this thread.

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[quote name='Mr. Striker' timestamp='1322086758' post='5661762']
Late much? I'll grade it, but try to make it on time. I put warnings up on the status bar and in this thread.
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It's not late! Its the 23rd. I thought we had the whole 23rd O_O

EDIT: You didn't judge yet ;D

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[quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1322090205' post='5661922']
It's not late! Its the 23rd. I thought we had the whole 23rd O_O

EDIT: You didn't judge yet ;D
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Yea, movies and such prevented me from posting the results until now. Also, I sometimes make the time deadline after the date deadline. I shall now close this with these results. As usual, the top 3 get an extensive review. Just to point out, there were 6 people receiving a score of 90 or higher, so it was a close one especially since both 1st and 2nd were a point off and broke the high score record.

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Verz Salamandra][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 14/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 23/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 20/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 26/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 83/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Renji][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 17/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 18/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 22/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 28/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 85/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Clear Vice Dragon][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Must be Special Summoned by Xyz Summon, and cannot be Summoned in any other way. Once per turn[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b], i[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]f this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]b[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]anish up to 3 [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]m[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]onsters with the same Type from your opponent's hand or [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]G[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]raveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]:[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4] Return all monsters in the banished pile to their owner's [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]D[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]ecks[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]; b[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]oth players take 100 damage for each card returned.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Oh wow, you suffered a minor fall from grace. Capitalization errors dragged down your Card Grammar a bit. I can see this card in an Anti-Meta Deck because it does counter DW and Fableds well. It can also counter Six Sams, but they aren’t around that much anymore. I find the use of banishing to burn quite interesting, but not much practical use. Balance is fine, except for the hand peek if you banish from the hand.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 18/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 21/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 25/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 29/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 93/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Merciless Overlord Knic][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 18/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 19/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 17/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 16/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 70/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Koshej][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 10/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 10/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 15/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 15/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 50/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Blue-Eyes493][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 18/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 22/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 22/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 28/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 90/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Vladamier2ndAttempt][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 20/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 25/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 20/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 20/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 85/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Darkplant - PAIN][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Once per turn: You can detatch 1 Xyz Material [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]from this card[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]. While this card has no Xyz Materials: You can destroy this card [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][i](you can activate this effect during either player's turn)[/i][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]. If this card was destroyed: You can select 1 card on the field; Destroy it.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]My good sir, another fine card you have brought. Your Card Grammar is once again near flawless thanks to a minor wording error. The italics are for an uncertainty of wording, but I think that is to make the effect SS2. The playability of this piece is exceptional. I think that this could be used as a way to dump LIGHT and DARK monsters while having a beatstick avalable. The efect is a bit bland, but I like seeing a Xyz Monster’s effect not relying on the immediate aftermath of detaching an Xyz Material. I see nothing wrong with balance, which is a good thing.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 19/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 25/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 22/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 30/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 96/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=En Almhjbat Wahd][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 15/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 15/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 20/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 25/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 75/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Passion Pit][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]If this card is used as Fusion Material for the Fusion Summon of a Pyro-[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]T[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]ype or Machine-[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]T[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]ype Fusion Monster: [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]Y[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]ou can discard 1 card; add 1 Normal Trap [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]C[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]ard from your Deck to your hand OR activate 1 Normal Trap [/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][b]C[/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]ard from your hand. Each player can only use the effect of "Blaze Ignition Dragon" once per Duel.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Your Card Grammar was near flawless; Some capitalization errors, but nothing that hampered the way I understood the effect. I believe that the main way anyone would use this card would be for the Chimeratech OTK, which requires Machine-Type monsters to Summon, but other ways are possible. I enjoy seeing Fusion Support because it is rare in the age of Synchros and Xyzs; this card helps that cause nicely. The balance is near flawless because the matter of activating the Trap from your hand; thankfully it is restricted to a Normal Trap. Overall, I believe you have done a great job with the requirements at hand.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 19/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 25/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 25/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 28/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 97/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=Jaxcob][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 18/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 23/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 23/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 28/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 92/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4][spoiler=sgrug4][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Card Grammar: 19/20[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Playability: 23/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Creativity: 22/25[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Balance: 28/30[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]Total: 92/100[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]1. Passion Pit[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=4]2. Darkplant - PAIN[/size][/font][/color]
3. Clear Vice Dragon

For your records, I'm doing a series leading up to the end of the year. You can find out more in my profile. Thanks for participating.

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[quote name='Blue-Eyes493' timestamp='1322096046' post='5662103']
What was wrong with my OCG?
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If this card attacks a Fiend-Type monster: Destroy that monster without applying damage calculation [i]and have this card gain 100 ATK.[/i] If this card was to be destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: [b]Y[/b]ou can send 1 "Energy Fairy" monster from your hand to the Graveyard, instead.

Italics- I see where you are getting at, but it doesn't sound right and I can't think of a better wording
Bold: Error

Like I said, this thing was close. I hope you join the next one.

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[quote name='Verz Salamandra' timestamp='1322096370' post='5662121']
Can I know what was wrong with my card? I simply want to know so I can improve in the future.
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I'll point out your Card Grammar to you.

[color=#008080][size=4][font=comic sans ms,cursive][color=#008080][size=4][font=comic sans ms,cursive]When this card is Normal Summoned: Special Summon [b]1[/b] FIRE monster with 200 DEF [b]([/b]from your hand or [b]G[/b]raveyard[b])[/b], except "Blazing Salamandra". When a FIRE monster on your side of the field is destroyed: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's [b]L[/b]evel x300. When this card is destroyed [b]by[/b] battle: Special Summon [b]1[/b] FIRE monster with 200 DEF [b](from ???)[/b] in face-up [b]D[/b]efense [b]P[/b]osition.[/font][/size][/color][/font][/size][/color]

It is implied that it is Special Summoned to your side of the field. It is a +1 when Summoned. Also, you can get both burn and a new monster when this card is destroyed. Those were the things that took points off. You were close to the average, which was 84. I hope you had a good time and I hope you join the next one.

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