Darkfire

[Agro]

[size=3]These are straight from my fan-fic, some cards I haven't used yet and the ones I add sooner or later certainly won't have been shown, so spoilers to some of you. I just need to get back in the mood to write and figured this would be it.

Some of you may remember these cards when I posted some in the RC section a few months ago. Well, they've been edited and more have been added. Comment and Suggestions please.

Darkfire Avian
DARK / Level 3
[ Pyro / Tuner ]
When this card is Normal Summoned: target 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard; shuffle it into your Deck.
ATK / 500 DEF / 700

Darkfire Colt
DARK / Level 4
[ Pyro / Effect ]
If this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard: Special Summoned it; destroy 1 Attack Position Monster on the field. If Special Summoned this way: banish it when it leaves the field.
ATK / 1900 DEF / 700

Darkfire Swordsman
DARK / Level 4
[ Pyro / Effect ]
You can discard this card from your hand to the Graveyard: send 1 "Darkfire" Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. If this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard: Special Summon it; destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way: banish it when it leaves the field.
ATK / 1700 DEF / 800

Darkfire Dragion
DARK / Level 7
[ Pyro / Synchro / Effect ]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Darkfire" Monsters
Once per turn, you can discard 1 card: target 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck; draw 1 card.
ATK / 2700 DEF / 1700

Rising Flame
Trap / Counter
Activate only when an Opponent activates the effect of a Spell/Trap card that would destroy a face-up "Darkfire" Monster on the field. Negate the effect of the card and destroy it; shuffle 1 DARK Monster from your Graveyard into your Deck.

Sudden Inferno
Trap
When an Opponent's Monster declares a Direct Attack: target 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard; shuffle it into your Deck: negate the attack; banish the top 3 cards of your Deck.

[spoiler='Not Yet Used in Fic']
Darkfire Explorer
DARK / Level 3
[ Pyro / Effect ]
Once per turn, you may discard 1 card: target 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard and Shuffle it into your Deck OR send 1 Pyro-type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.
ATK / 1300 DEF / 1200

Darkfire Soul
DARK / Level 2
[ Pyro / Effect ]
When this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard, you may banish it instead: target 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard; special Summon it. That card's effects are negated.
ATK / 0 DEF / 0

[color=#ff0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Artillery
DARK / Level 3
[ Pyro / Effect ]
When a "Darkfire" Monster Battles, you can discard this card from your hand to the Graveyard: Destroy the monster that battled with that "Darkfire" monster at the end of the Damage Step.
ATK / 500 DEF / 500


[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Berserker
DARK / Level 4
You can discard 1 Pyro-type monster: Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 "Darkfire" monster from your Graveyard to the Deck: this card can attack twice during the Battle Phase.
ATK / 1600 DEF / 1300

[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Nephilim
DARK / Level 4
[ Pyro / Effect ]
You can send 1 Pyro-type monster from your hand to the Graveyard: Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. The effect of "Darkfire Nephilim" can only be activated once per turn.
ATK / 1900 DEF / 500

[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Oni
DARK / Level 1
[ Pyro / Tuner ]
If this card is returned from the Graveyard to the Deck: Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard: Draw 1 card.
ATK / 400 DEF / 200

[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Daruma
DARK / Level 5
[ Pyro / Effect ]
Once per turn, you can discard 1 card: Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Darkfire" Monster from your Graveyard.
ATK / 2300 DEF / 1200

[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Archefiend
DARK / Level 5
[ Pyro / Effect ]
When this card is returned from the Graveyard to the Deck: Special Summon it. If Summoned this way: This card gains 1000 ATK.
ATK / 1700 DEF / 500

[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Priest
DARK / Level 2
[ Pyro / Tuner ]
If this card would be returned from the Graveyard to the Deck: Special Summon it. If Summoned this way: once per turn, you can discard 1 card: return 1 banished "Darkfire" monster you control to the Graveyard; banish 1 card in your Opponent's Graveyard.
ATK / 800 DEF / 1300


Darkfire Phoenix
DARK / Level 8
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Darkfire" monsters
When this card destroys a Monster as a result of Battle: select up to 2 Spell/Trap cards your Opponent controls and destroy them. During the End Phase of the turn this card was destroyed: you may return 1 other "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard to the Deck; Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.
ATK / 3300 DEF / 2400


[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Devil
DARK / Level 5
[ Fiend / Synchro / Effect ]
Once per turn, you can return 1 "Darkfire" monster in your Graveyard to your Deck: inflict 1000 points of Damage to your Opponent's Life Points. When this card leaves the field: target 1 "Darkfire" monster in your Graveyard other than "Darkfire Devil" and Special Summon it.
ATK / 2400 DEF / 2000

[color=#FF0000][b]NEW![/b][/color] Darkfire Angel
DARK / Level 10
[ Fairy / Synchro / Effect ]
1 DARK Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner Pyro-type monsters
Pyro-type monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle other than "Darkfire" Angel. Every time a monster leaves the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 500. Once per turn, you can select 1 Pyro-type Monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it.
ATK / 3500 DEF / 2500

Dark Renewal
Spell
Return 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Darkfire" Monster from your Graveyard. It is banished during the End Phase.

Darkfire Plains
Spell / Field
Once per turn, you can discard 1 card: send 1 "Darkfire" Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard OR select 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into the Deck. All Pyro-type monsters gain 300 ATK.

Shadowflare
Spell
Shuffle 1 "Darkfire" Monster into your Deck; send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.
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[~Tico~]

Weren't these made by Everett because, as Ryouta puts it, " the rest of ‘em out there weren’t good enough for him”?

[Agro]

Turns out I have a reader. That's the explanation that the other characters perceive, correct. Can you comment on the cards themselves?

[Agro]

Bump

[Agro]

BUMP NAO

[evawin]

Avian looks good.

Colt has a few wording issues. For example, the effect should probably read something like "If this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard, Special Summon it and destroy 1 Attack Position monster on the field. If this card was Special Summoned this way: banish it when it is removed from the field."

Swordsman as well. "You can discard this card from your hand to the Graveyard to send 1 "Darkfire" Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. If this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard: Special Summon it and destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way: banish it when it is removed from the field."

I like Dragion (did you mean to spell it that way? ). "Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to select 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck. Then, draw 1 card."

Riting Frame; the Magatam of the Darkfire. Glorious! "Activate only when an opponent activates the effect of a Spell or Trap card that would destroy a face-up "Darkfire" monster on the field: Negate the effect of the card and destroy it. Then, shuffle 1 DARK Monster from your Graveyard into your Deck." Not negating the activation, huh? Interesting... >:3

Sudden Inferno seems a tad weird considering the archetype so far. Perhaps some other cards are in store... >:3c. "When an opponent's monster declares a direct attack, target 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck; negate the attack. Then, banish the top 3 cards of your Deck."

[Agro]

[quote name='evawin' timestamp='1320390450' post='5616331']
Avian looks good.

Colt has a few wording issues. For example, the effect should probably read something like "If this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard, Special Summon it and destroy 1 Attack Position monster on the field. If this card was Special Summoned this way: banish it when it is removed from the field." [b]That's not good OCG.[/b]

Swordsman as well. "You can discard this card from your hand to the Graveyard to send 1 "Darkfire" Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. If this card would be returned to the Deck from the Graveyard: Special Summon it and destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way: banish it when it is removed from the field." [b]It's leave the field now, or did you not know?[/b]

I like Dragion (did you mean to spell it that way? ). "Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to select 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck. Then, draw 1 card." [b]You shouldn't even be using 'to' anymore, and it's 'target' not select. And yes, I DID mean to spell it exactly like that, because if you'd look it up, there already IS a Darkfire Dragon in the game.[/b]

Riting Frame; the Magatam of the Darkfire. Glorious! "Activate only when an opponent activates the effect of a Spell or Trap card that would destroy a face-up "Darkfire" monster on the field: Negate the effect of the card and destroy it. Then, shuffle 1 DARK Monster from your Graveyard into your Deck." Not negating the activation, huh? Interesting... >:3

Sudden Inferno seems a tad weird considering the archetype so far. Perhaps some other cards are in store... >:3c. "When an opponent's monster declares a direct attack, target 1 "Darkfire" Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck; negate the attack. Then, banish the top 3 cards of your Deck."
[/quote]You might want to read up on the new OCG, because much of your suggested changes were for the old format. Thanks for commenting anyway.

[Synchronized]

Nephilim is broken beyond belief. How you could even think such a card wouldn't absolutely destroy anything and everything confuses me.

[Agro]

[quote name='Star' timestamp='1320418671' post='5616533']
Nephilim is broken beyond belief. How you could even think such a card wouldn't absolutely destroy anything and everything confuses me.
[/quote]Eh, I'll limit it to Pyro-type instead and only allow once per turn.

BTW, I just noticed in Priests wording:

If Summoned this way: once per turn, you can discard 1 card: return 1 banished "Darkfire" monster you control to the Graveyard; banish 1 card in your Opponent's Graveyard.

So if summoned this way, you automatically get to return 1 banished "Darkfire" monster, but you can also discard 1 card to banish a card in the opponent's Graveyard. It's not pulled into it automatically. Stupid Konami making card making difficult.

[Synchronized]

[quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1320418875' post='5616543']
Eh, I'll limit it to Pyro-type instead and only allow once per turn.

BTW, I just noticed in Priests wording:

If Summoned this way: once per turn, you can discard 1 card: return 1 banished "Darkfire" monster you control to the Graveyard; banish 1 card in your Opponent's Graveyard.

So if summoned this way, you automatically get to return 1 banished "Darkfire" monster, but you can also discard 1 card to banish a card in the opponent's Graveyard. It's not pulled into it automatically. Stupid Konami making card making difficult.
[/quote]

Even once per turn is kind of insane, but it's better than what you had before. One DARK monster and an unlimited number of times, are you trying to encourage 5 Xyz's at once?

[Agro]

[quote name='Star' timestamp='1320421022' post='5616630']
Even once per turn is kind of insane, but it's better than what you had before. One DARK monster and an unlimited number of times, are you trying to encourage 5 Xyz's at once?
[/quote]I'm encouraging not using Tengu to do it.

[Agro]

WHAHA! bump

[Agro]

I'll keep bumping it.

[Agro]

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