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oh you accepted it without quoting or commenting on em.. Dx lolifailed
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So...

Whose interested in this big plot device I'm dropping on y'all? I gotta explain it before we start...

(and loli failed?... isn't that a good thing? U no Pedo?)

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Basic plot Device:

Head Arrancar baddie(App coming later) has stumbled across something amazing. The 6 shards of the soul of the strongest hollow ever too exist. It's reffered too as the god of all hollow's and it's shards now take the color of 6 differently colored gems. These Shards do absolutely nothing at first glance... or for anyone just merely touching them... But the Head Arrancar baddie decided to experiment with this "Myth" and see if these litlte colorful gems were anything more than just legend.

He had found that by being in posession or by having them embued into your soul's inner-hollow, that your body will surpress that Inner hollow until further development of your power. By unleashing that power with emotion, that inner hollow-section of your soul will then be different in some way. Not all of his dirty experiments produced results that were just greater in strength. Some didn't change too much at all.

But then he decided something really sickening. Why not put this too the ultimate test? Creating an Inner Hollow inside of someone's soul was an easy task through his Arrancar powers, and without messing with it, his powers manipulated that hollow for his combat moves. However, he could use this on someone just before they became a soul reaper and used a Gem on them too supress all of it. The finished ressult happened too be a Shinigami of a good caliber who didn't have any scent of hollow power. Until a certain threshold of Bankai was slipped, and emotions Driving them too call up some more strength than they really had.

Unleashing Primal power that wasn't really either Shinigami or Hollow power. The Spirit energy of the Great Hollow god was that of 6 different colors, scents, and emotions. Unique was his talent to manipulate his emotions too bring forth these specific powers. They are seperate now, the Great hollow god had been dead for so long that many think his existince was that of a spooky tale.

The Experiments were a Success. Head hollow baddie was pleased and then used 2 more Gems on Shinigami-in-training and embedded 3 of his other Gems inside Hollow masks of young hollows, feeding them till they became powerful enough too unleash their power (The gems supressing their actual hollow powers, due too their passive effect previously mentioned.) Creating Arrancar whose Ressurecion form resembled more of a Bankai in how they usually changed in shape and size. (Like Byakua's bankai making his one sword into many giant ones, then into Trillions of tiny blades... That creepy fighter dude's Weapon became those Two[or three..idk] weapons... That Bear guy made that giant samurai thing O_O... you get meh drift) (5 Gems left. You can decide the emotion/color whatever... Rage/Red is taken.)

I'll post the App with the Rage Shard soon after I hear the peoples reaction... The 2 shinigami apps can still be part of the soul society if they want, the SS will definently need it O_O

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[quote name='Makoto Nanaya' timestamp='1320802667' post='5627430']
[color=#008080][font=comic sans ms, cursive][size=4]Sweet. I call making a hollow with the Despair/Black shard. (Gives me an excuse to shout [i]ZETSUBO!!!!!!!!!!!![/i] repeatedly)[/size][/font][/color]
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Lol... So when Experiencing Great Despair... he activates his powers? (didn't see a black shard coming... but oh well =P Lets see your take on him. Just remember... the Head Arrancar Guy Is someone these 3 Shard-Arrancars look up too and greatly respect... like a Good Father.)

Username:Techi
RP Name: Hiro Takamaru
Race: Renegade Shinigami [shard of Rage]
Age:534
Personality: Hiro will remain in his shinigami form and invisible to humans for as long as he doesn't need to become visible to humans. He relaxes alone, feeling betrayed by his whole little circle of friends and his entire society. Kindness is extended to the weak, he does this so he is able to regard himself as nothing like an animal. His hate is easilly provoked, jumping to bankai to deal with problems when he is angry. Irrational decisions upon being taunted or mocked. If a shinigami stumbles into his path alone, the shinigami may be attacked. Will kill hollows too.
Appearance: He is found wearing a dark blue and thin sweatshirt over his cold hard chest. The hood comes down over his face only to reveal his nose, mouth and jaw. Jagged long red bangs poke their way down the hood-line and sway side to side. Hiro is tall, but would be slightly shorter than ichigo. He is built like a soft-core body-builder do to the consistent training the the mixed Kido-martial arts he helped create. His skin is a cold and bold white. His eyes are a haunting green, often to be found lighten in the dark. He would be found in dark bluejeans and black shoes.
Bio: Hiro died at the age of 24, soon being discovered for his deep-seaded shinigami abilities. He was a strong mixed martial artist, forgetting the names of his styles. In a year, he was decided to become a shinigami and targeted secretly by the mysterious new Arrancar leader for his dark testing. With the unknown affliction to him now passively taking effect, Hiro is taken under the wing by a young Shinigami woman who was a pro at Kido spells and energy mastery. He soon walked in her steps, following her in her court guard duties, but not joining any of the 13 squads yet. Shortly after he joined the 4th squad, himself and his young woman guide/master had started development upon a mix of combat skills[Martial arts] and kido control. This violent mixture resaulted in a deadly assault-method. Hand-to-hand combat with energy fueled strikes at specific areas. Destroying vital spots and exploding defense-weakness. This style would flourish for a little while, Hiro teaching it to many other shinigami students before the head captain at the time decided that it was actually too dangerous and banned further training and deployment. This didn't bother Hiro too much, the trecherous traitership of the guide/master he was starting to fall for was. This woman called Hiro and some friends out to a not-usually traveled place near the gate of their disctrict. She asked hiro how much he knew about her, his friends were confused and so was she. She then asked Hiro if he ever felt different. He'd reply with a no. She then killed all of his friends that were there with strength he's never seen her use. She was under the control of a Hallow this whole time through it's strange unique power. How long was she a spy for the Arrancar? Hiro didn't know. He then started to fight her with his Shikai, he couldn't do a Bankai yet. In their fight his blind rage began to solidify into a mask on his face. It was sort of like a Hollow mask, but with a glowing red gem in the middle. He wasn't a Vizard, he didn't feel anything like a Hollow. His bankai broke out like a bad case of hives and he killed her on the spot. The mask dissappearing as a few captains arrived on scene and captured him too be prosecuted. Found guilty for being a Hollow and killing all his friends and the woman, he was going to be destroyed. He escaped using the raw strength and speed of his bankai, retreating through the Senkaiman and not killing anyone on his path of destruction. He came to the human world 4 years ago, and has started his own street-life as a hooded young man who is mistaken as a teenager in the middle of some random big city.
Zanpakuto Name: Gekido Sēji
Zanpakuto Appearance: A Filed down Jagged katana with a foot and a half long blade and normal zanpakuto hilt and guard that his hidden well and oddly up his sleave.
Shikai Release Phrase: Be Victorious! For me, Sēji.
Shikai Appearance: Gekido becomes Red Biomechanical gauntlits that has 3 inch long blade-claws for each knuckle.
Shikai Abilities: Hiro's Strength and speed become greatly enhanced. Along with his durability.
Bankai Release Phrase: "... Gekido."
Bankai Appearance: Hiro's whole body begins to be covered by the biomechanical suit of armor. His eyes a deep red and his hair elongated. This never happens when his sweat shirt is on. His hair may become longer or not, depending on if the armor gets past 50%. Depending on how much anger he feels, his vision will become distraught and he loses control as a hollow mask with a red gem appears on it.
Bankai Abilities: Summoning upon his rage, Hiro can become 10x stronger than his shikai appearence, the armor immeadiately taking his arms. As the process goes on, it's speed determined by his hate and anguish, Hiro starts to become even stronger. This exponential growth can become outstanding.
Abilities: Several different martial arts. Ability to punch forward spiritual pressure through his fists or palms. His Kido-combat skills allow him to draw forth from his enemies spiritual pressure(a tiny tiny fraction of a fraction, this being even more stronger due to the important) a Shock-wave attack that can explode from the inside of the object hit. Can suck up weak hollows like soup, regenerating his energy.
Short Beginning: Hiro Watched the damp streets of these humans like he has so many years before. Things change, he didn't pick up on these subtle details when he first got here, but now he's a pro. The simple people in a simple neighborhood, working simple jobs and living in simple homes with simple families. Is that the case? To the outside eyes, yes. But Hiro knew otherwise. His trained eyes picked up the little spirit boy running from the giant bug-like hollow a few streets away. Was it the Hollow attacks here that made this place not so bland or fun? In Hiro's case, yes. But that wasn't all of the excitment. Hiro leaped in from high above the Hollow as it cornered the boy. Landing on the things back, Hiro administered several fatal blows to the hollow before biting into the hollow and allowing it's body to revert into wild energy. Most of the dispersed before he got a chance to swallow it all. He used his zanpakuto to release this kid from the world and send him to the soul society. "This is my life, the excitement of the human's secret gangs and neighborhood scandal has become a part of that... And thats why it excites me!" Hiro spoke in his mellow voice to his imagenary friend that he thought was documenting his life.

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Carnifex app incoming. I think it's only fitting that La Primera not be one of the shardlings.

[b]Username:[/b] Ketodama
[b]RP Name:[/b] Carnifex
[b]Race:[/b] Arancar
[b]Position/Rank:[/b] Primera Espada
[b]Age:[/b] 11,603
[b]Personality:[/b] Carnifex, despite his name being Executioner in Latin, is a very laid-back sort of person. More often than not he can be found taking a nap out in the white sands and mostly being left alone, though always accompanied by his Fracciones. When confronted with an one who wishes to fight him, he'll more often than not attempt to persuade them to simply take a nap with him. Those that refuse and choose to insist that he fight them discover how he earned his name. He fights and kills without mercy and without regret, almost always making a meal out of those he defeats through one way or another.
[spoiler=Appearance:] He appears to be Mediterranean in origin, having the light olive skin prevalent among the residents of that region. Physically, he bears a light, athletic build that one would expect from someone who intends to keep in shape and exercises regularly to that end. He is entirely unscathed, his skin actually bearing a bit of shine to it, as though it were the healthy coat of a dog. He wears a variation on the typical arrancar garb, that being that he wears a pair of loose-fitting pants and a shirt that seems like it would be fitting for special occasions. The colors are different as well, the clothes being primarily black with white trim on them and a red sash tied 'round his waist. His shirt opens towards the left side of his chest via a silent zipper which is always partially opened to expose the four centimeter diameter hole directly over his heart. His hair is coal black and hangs down to his lower back, neatly groomed to keep out of his face and hang perfectly behind him. His eyes are always and always have been blood red, perhaps granting him a haunting appearance. Towards the back of his lower jaw on either side remain the pieces of what was once his mask, being pitch black with several razor-sharp teeth depicted fitting perfectly over each other. When he speaks, his voice bears the almost lyrical notes of an Italian accent.[/spoiler]
[b]Bio:[/b] Carnifex, like all hollows, was once a human. He was born in Italy near the end of the fourth century and lived into the fifth century. When the goths invaded in 408, he was one of those killed. In death, he watched as his wife and daughter were raped and murdered. The anger and hate he felt then drove him to madness and he became a hollow, killing every one of the barbarians in his home and devouring their souls. Shortly afterwards, he was confronted by a Shinigami and devoured them as well. He lived on in that way for five thousand years, far removed from the conflcit in Karakura town as he stayed in or near Italy, picking up on the changing language and accent. He eventually completely switched over to living in Hueco Mundo, keeping the Italian accent he had developed as he did so. There came a time when he grew in power to the point of becoming a Vasto Lorde and reached the level of power required of an Espada on his own. This eventually earned the attention of the actual Espada (around 2000 years before the start of this RP) and they decided to find him. When they did so, the previous Primera Espada found something about him he didn't like and fired a Cero at Carnifex, only to find it devoured by a mouth which opened up directly in front of it. That day also held the former primera's final battle in which he was slain and Carnifex took his place.
[b]Zanpakuto Name:[/b] Rey de los Muertos
[b]Zanpakuto Appearance:[/b] Rey de los Muertos appears as a thick, pure white broad sword about two and a half feet in length and five inches wide with a stylized cross-guard bearing an intricately detailed skull on either side, and a larger one as the pommel. It rests within a very plain scabbard of the same color which is angled across Carnifex's back at 45 degrees with the hilt down by his right hip.
[b]Resurrección Release Phrase: [/b][i]"Sound the Death knell, Rey de los Muertos!"[/i]
[spoiler=Resurrección Appearance:] Upon the release of his Resurrección, Carnifex is briefly concealed as what seems to be a pitch black mist envelops him and is revealed as a silent and unfelt breeze pushes it away from him. His fingers, thumbs included, transform into six-inch long claws which bear invisible sections to allow them to continue functioning as fingers. In addition, his body becomes covered from the neck down in a sort of carapace-like armor which fits as if it were his skin and a long tail emerges from the base of his spine, covered in the same carapace material and bearing sections which allow it to move and whip about freely. Finally, the fragments of his mask extend across the base of his chin and below his lower lips, giving him the appearance of possessing a beard of black bone.[/spoiler]
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Abilities:[/b] Carnifex's strength, speed, and agility are increased substantially upon the release of his Resurrección. In addition his movements become much quieter, producing noise equivalent to his normal movements if he were several meters from whoever is listening while he remains almost directly in their face, and this extends to the sound of his Sonido as well. Finally, he gains the ability to unleash bursts of absolutely black energy which, upon contacting anything which is not a Zanpakutou, or the equivalent of one, will reduce the target to dust but not entirely. If it strikes one's arm, only their arm will become dust.
[spoiler=Segunda Etapa Appearance:] Segunda Etapa brings about a substantial change in Carnifex's form. His toes grow out claws identical to those on his hands, minus the sectioning of course. From the tip of his tail a full double-edged crescent blade emerges, six inches wide and three feet across on either side; down his back two rows of half-crescent blades emerge from just below his neck all the way down to just a few inches from the beginning of the blade emerging from his tail. These blades begin being their larges, eight inches in length, at the highest point on his body and reduce to their smallest, an inch and a half long, at the lowest on his tail. Finally, the remnants of his mask completely extend across the lower half of his face to complete a mouth which contains many teeth, all of them sharp as razors. From where the canines would be, a pair of five-inch fangs just as sharp as the other teeth grow forth, poking down over the bottom of the mask.[/spoiler]
[b]Segunda Etapa[/b] [b]Abilities:[/b] His agility, speed, and strength are increased exponentially over that which he possesses during his Resurrección. In addition, he has the added ability of unleashing the bursts of energy at a greatly increased rate and with greater potency. The blades across his body, yes that includes the big one on his tail, and the claws upon his hands and feet have a similar effect to these blasts though certainly more potent, able to eat into a Zanpakutou or equivalent surface a little bit with each strike and reduce much larger portions of less resistant surfaces to dust. Finally, every single movement he makes during this release is absolutely silent and even his Sonido produces no sound.
[b]Abilities:[/b] As with all Espada, he is able of using all of the basic forms of Cero as well as utilizing a very quiet form of Sonido. In addition, if he is targeted by a Kido-based attack, a mouth will simply open on whatever portion of his body is being targetted and absorb the energy. He can open multiple mouths at once on different portions of his body.
[spoiler=Fracciones:]
[spoiler=Alexandra]
[b]RP Name:[/b] Alexandra
[b]Race:[/b] Arrancar
[b]Position/Rank:[/b] Fraccion
[b]Age:[/b] 23
[b]Personality:[/b] Something of a spas at times, Alexandra tends to be affectionate to almost anyone she comes across that isn't trying to kill her. She has the same opinion of fighting as her master, preferring to avoid it if possible but showing no mercy if it is unavoidable. She can often be found combing or otherwise grooming her master's hair, being the reason that it is so clean.
[spoiler=Appearance:] Alexandra wears a simple robe in the style favored by the Arrancar, with the exception that hers bares the same color scheme as her master's. She is thinly built, in the way that one would expect a dancer to be. Her hair is tied back into a long, tight braid which hangs half-way down her back, and her skin bears the light tan of one who spends a fair amount of time in the sun. The remnants of her own mask form an unbroken circlet across her forehead, though they are white rather than black.[/spoiler]
[b]Zanpakuto Name:[/b] Bailarina
[b]Zanpakuto Appearance:[/b] Bailarina appears as a staff, upon either end of which is a crescent blade about six inches in length. This staff can be broken apart into three sections connected by chains.
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Release Phrase:[/b] [i]"Dance with me, Bailarina[/i]."
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] Bailarina's Resurrección produces a unique change in Alexandra. Her robe becomes a sort of skin-tight suit akin to what a gymnast wears, still black in color mind you, with an accompanying skirt which reaches half-way down her thighs. Upon her feet a pair of dancing shoes with a four inch blade upon the top and either side of them akin to that present on a Kris. The remnants of her mask also solidify into a crown bearing three points towards the front which curve back over the top of her head.
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Abilities: [/b]The Resurrección increases Alexandra's agility and speed quite substantially, making an already graceful dancer an even greater threat upon the battlefield as she litterally dances about and strikes with lethal precision. As if this were not enough, every strike from the blades upon her shoes briefly sends a pulse of incredible pain through the whole of the target's body, as well as reducing the mobility of whatever limb is struck.
[b]Abilities:[/b] As a dancer, Alexandra is naturally incredibly graceful and agile, able to dance easily around the strikes of her foe and strike around their guard. As with most Arrancar, she is skilled in the use of Sonido and Cero.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sylvia]
[b]RP Name:[/b] Sylvia
[b]Race:[/b] Arrancar
[b]Position/Rank:[/b] Fraccion
[b]Age:[/b] 34
[b]Personality:[/b] Sylvia could be described as a tomboy and she doesn't really care about it. Despite this she tends to be rather critical of "unmanly" things that her master does, such as letting Alexandra play with his hair. She also tends to be brutally honest, not bothering to conceal her opinion even if it could be hurtful to someone else. She can come across as rude, but she does care quite a bit about her master and fellow fraccion.
[spoiler=Appearance:] This one bears a more muscular build, that of a martial artist, and wears a pair of tight fitting shorts and a tank-top, copying the color scheme of her master, whilst her hands and feet remain bare. Her mask remains covering the whole of her bottom jaw, though it is white unlike her master's, and bears the more traditional style of teeth seen in such masks. It seems to be the lower-half of a frown or grimmace.[/spoiler]
[b]Zanpakuto Name:[/b] Asesina
[b]Zanpakuto Appearance:[/b] Asesina takes on the appearance of a pair of axes single-bit axes which bear an arced blade across the front and a four-inch spike jutting out from the back. In addition, a six-foot cord connects the two weapons at the base of the hafts.
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Release Phrase:[/b] [i]"Rip them to shreds, Asesina!"[/i]
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] When she releases herResurrección, Sylvia's garb transforms into something more similar to a Karate student's clothing done in black with a white sash tied 'round her waist. Her hands and feet now become covered in bone-white material similar to that which her mask fragment is composed of, and her mask extends to form a sort of head guard akin to those worn by begining students of the martial arts during sparring matches, though the lower portion with its teeth remain.
[b]Resurrección[/b] [b]Abilities: [/b]Her speed is increased quite a bit and her strength is as well, though to a marginally lesser degree. The most astounding change is the increased toughness of her body, being able to shrug off all but the most powerful strikes from bladed weapons as if they were nothing. The final change is that if she strikes an opponent, no matter how it is done, the area immediately covered by the blow begins to heat up. Upon receiving three strikes in the same location, the foe's body will burst into flames though the fire will only cover the afflicted area.
[b]Abilities: [/b]Being a martial artist, Sylvia is quite strong and fast, able to deflect many of her enemy's blows with ease and then beat them into the ground with a flury of strikes without much grace. As with Alexandra, she is skilled in using both Sonido and Cero.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Short Beginning:]
As was his fashion, Carnifex had found a nice dune a good ways out from the fortress of the Arrancar upon which he could relax for a while. He was laid back with his head just over the top of the dune, not really alone as his Fracciones were accompanying him as they always did when he made his way out into the dunes. Not far off from where he lay, Sylvia had seated herself in a lotus and was deep in meditation, whilst Alexandra sat with her master's head in her lap and was busy combing his hair to the point of perfect straightness and holding a pair of scissors in the hand which was not busy holding the comb and clipping away whatever split ends she found. After a short time, Sylvia seemed to lose patience with the whole thing.

"Master, how can you tolerate her doing that to you?" She stated rather flatly, "Most men wouldn't let a woman anywhere near their hair."

"Sylvia, you assume that I am interested in being like most men," Carnifex replied in his almost lyrical accent, "In doing so, you are mistaken. However, I am rather curious as to why you find such enjoyment in my hair, Alexandra." As he said this, the young woman grooming him let out a quiet giggle which he could not help but smile in response to.

"You have such wonderfully soft hair, master." Came Alexandra's reply as she once more began to comb Carnifex's hair as she hummed a quiet tune to herself. This brought a chuckle out from her master's throat whilst Sylvia simply scoffed and turned away before returning to her meditations. The roman turned Espada simply lay there, now closing his eyes to avoid the boredom of staring at a featureless blue sky.[/spoiler]

[b]Carnifex App. Arrived.[/b]

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Dx.. your plot device makes me wish i didn't already have 3.. . hm.. I guess I could work with multi character posts and get through with a fourth though If you'll let me? ^^'

may I reserve a Shinigami with Blue/Anxiety
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Yes.

@Keto: Shardlings =/= Espada =P So you're right.

(also reserving pink/jealousy for sharded Arrancar.) 3 apps left un-reserved? Or 2? ... I'm thinking 2..

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@Techi: would it be plausible to have him as a Captain of 3rd division if during the bio the way his power awakened ws an anxiety attack whilst with the captain and lieutenant in a hollow attack in which he killed it an reverted before found passing the bankai test to become captain a few days/weeks/months/years later?

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You may have your shard-shinigami be a captain. (their powers in bankai don't really force out the mask or anything O-O but an anxiety attack would most sertaintly make him go bankai and mask )

=P get it?
There is shikai-> Bankai-> Mask =O of which they don't ever get too call upon or anything a vizard could have done, though with a little practice, Harnessing emotion is easy too control it =O See where I'm going?

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