The Lost World

[823=chan]

[spoiler=Plot]

Once, there was a blue-and-green marble, floating in space. Life flourished there, and a race called Humanity arose. It became a prosperous civilization, but one with war bubbling under the surface. When War erupted, the humans destroyed themselves, and left three races to try to live.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Rules]

1. Standard YCM

2. NO HUMAN APPS!

3. If you read the rules, you will add a sample at the end of your app under ?.

 

 

 

Apps:

[spoiler=Vomma]

The Vomma are related to the Humans, and are intelligent.

Name:

Rank (hunter, warrior, defender, queen, ruler):

Appearance (exoskeleton color, claw size, eye color & size, height, weight):

Skills (speed, power, intelligence):

?:

 

 

 

[spoiler=Dominants]

The Dominants are evolved from the wolves of the past, and mostly live in packs.

Name:

Pack:

Appearance (fur color, eye color, claw size):

?:

 

 

 

[spoiler=Stavin]

The Stavin live in the ruins of human cities, and build machines out of scrap. they are typically two-four feet tall.

Stavin

Name:

Machine (assists you in combat)(describe):

Appearance (fur color & length, height, eye color)

?:

 

 

 

[spoiler=My App]

Stavin

Name: Shabur

Machine: Mecha Dog: Mecha Dog is a 4-foot robotic dog that is made of scrap metal, with glowing red eyes and 6-inch claws. Shabur cleans him at every chance.

Appearance: Shabur has short white fur, often dirtied from working on Mecha Dog. He's about two feet tall, on the short side, and ha purple eyes.

?: Shabur was working on Mecha Dog, when the radar beeped. It showed some malevolent life forms approaching. He readied the guns...

 

 

[Sp1at]

Name: Hunter Risk

Rank: Hunter

Appearance (exoskeleton color, claw size, eye color & size, height, weight): Risk has a sort of greyish blue exoskeleton, and has quite large claws which is why he is considered a Hunter. Risk has fully black eyes and is an average size for a Vomma. Risk is 4'8 and weights 60 pounds

Skills: Speed

?: Risk is rushing his bow. He is about to approach the Stavin with a problem concerning the their water and food supply. And if they want food and water without searching for it then they need to consult with Stavin, because ever since the Humans run out they have taken over their supplies of food.

[bury the year]

Please read the section rules, add what's missing and beef up your plot a bit more. 24 hours to fix.

[823=chan]

just kill it... its dead.

[bury the year]

Well, someone's being a defeatist.

 

LOCKED.