benguinboo Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Prologue Long ago 3 giant dragons roamed the earth, they were called the element dragons, and they destroyed everything in their way.The first was called the volcano dragon, the second was called the hydro dragon, and the third was called the storm dragon.They were once eggs, like all dragons, laid by a dragon called the multi-element dragon.This dragon is probably the most dangerous ever!!A brave warrior called Yami slayed the element dragons and locked them in a chaos chamber.He was actually the king of that time!!He also slayed the multi-element dragon, and put him in his own chaos chamber!He wasn't really a warrior, he was a duelist, and he defeated them by using his powerful duel monsters.They have been trying to break out ever since, and they might do so soon!!! Fan Fic CardsI will make up my own cards along the way. I will post them at the end of the chapter that their first used in!! FormatsI will be posting what people say like this out of battles "said" he said. And when its in battles I will be posting it like Said:said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Chapter1Getting a duel with Zane Truesdale "Hurry up Sy were going to be late for class" called Jaden, running hurriedly to Duel Academy."I'm trying!!!" Syrus cried, lagging behind him.A few minutes later... "I'm so tired" puffed Jaden "how about you, Sy?"."Ugghh" said Syrus, staring in front of him "Um"."Whats the matter Sy?" Jaden said, as he turned his head to where Syrus was looking.Jaden had just found out.Standing in front of them was a cross Dr.Crowler, with a frown on his face and crossed arms!"What do we have here?"he asked"two slifer slackers?, detention both of you!!""But" wimpered Jaden."No buts, hurry up and go to class before I have to make you duel, and if you lose, you will be expelled" Interupted Dr.Crowler, pointing to a door.Chancellor Shepherd was teaching today.Jaden and Syrus stepped in warily, trying not to be noticed."Get a move on" spat Dr.Crowler, pushing them down the steps.When they had made it to their seats, Chancellor Shepherd asked "does anyone have an idea to make the school better?".Chumley raised his hand and said "make every day grilled cheese day".Chancellor Shepherd sighed"Does anyone have any sensible ideas?" he asked.All the one hundred people who had their hands up, sank down, except Jaden's, of course."Yes Jaden" murmered Chancellor Shepherd."Why can't we make all the dorms into one big one?" he asked"Jaden that is the funniest thing I have ever heard" chuckled Chancellor Shepherd."But if you want it that bad then you can sit by Chazz for the rest of the lesson"."Sweet" said Jaden when he was there "I'm sitting by an Obelisk Blue".Chazz sneaked a bit of paper out of his cloak and drew a little scribble on it."Chancellor Shepherd does not have an enourmous nose Jaden" said Chazz, holding up a scribble of him with a very big nose."Jaden!!" said the Chancellor seriously "I've already heard about you being late, so I am going to prepare a duel for you, and if you lose your expelled!!".Jaden gulped."I am going to choose who you are going to duel against with this hat" said Chancellor Shepherd, pointing to a hat with 8 pieces of paper in it."two of these cards say slifer red, two say ra yellow, two say obelisk blue and two say other" he said sternly "I will pick one and you will duel against someone from that group".The Chancellor fumbled around the hat and said "you will duel against someone from... obelisk blue"."Who wants to duel Jaden from Obelisk Blue?" he asked.Zane rose his hand slowly."Zane it is then"."Even sweeter" cried Jaden in excitement."It will take place tommorow in the Academy Stadium, everyone is aloud to watch!!!" To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 in the next chapter its the first duel!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 The chapter is short but good none of the less Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 best ever you get one rep! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 I hate it when people use the characters from the anime without actually continuing the series, not using the characters in a whole new series Also Zane was a third year obelisk blue (before he graduated), he wouldn't be in the first year class and Sheppard doesn't teach 0/10 and if you give me a negative rep for pointing out the obvious Ill give you 4 negative reps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 that mean so shut up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Chapter2The mystery man After school Jaden rushed to dorm, played a few practice games with Syrus and went to bed.He couldn't stop dreaming about the duel.16 hours later."Oh no" cried Jaden, glancing at the clock "Sy, come on" he said dragging him out of bed "we are going to be late for class, and my duel.When they got there Dr.Crowler grabbed Jaden by the neck and threw him into the Academy's duel arena.Zane was waiting there, and Jaden stepped up the steps to face Zane. Duel Time Jaden Yuki VS Zane TruesdaleJaden and Zane:DUEL!!!Jaden:I will go first and I'll start by heating things up with Elemental Hero Burstinatrix in attack position!!! and I'll lay down a face-down to end my turn!!! Zane:I Special Summon Cyber Dragon in attack mode, and as that was a Special Summon, I Summon Cyber Tamer in attack mode also!!!Cyber Tamer, attack Burstinatrix! Jaden:Not so fast, I activate the trap card A Hero Emerges. I select 1 card from my card at random, and I get to special summon.(It turned out to be Elemental Hero Clayman in defense mode).Aggghhh. Jaden:3500Zane:4000 Zane:now Cyber Dragon, destroy Clayman!! I set a spell card and end my turn. Winged Kuriboh spirit:waaaiii IN Jadens mind: I know I'm in a tight spot, lets hope I get a lucky draw. Zane:I end my turn Jaden:hahahaha. I activate miracle fusion to Summon Elemental Hero Rampart Blaster in Defence position. And I use Its effect to deal you 1000 direct damage!!! I lay down two more spells and end my turn. Jaden:3500Zane:3000 Zane:Draw!!! I activate Cyber Fusion to fuse the Cyber Dragon on the field with the one in my hand to summon Cyber Twin Dragon!!!!Cyber Twin Dragon, attack!!! Cyber twin dragon destroyed Rampart Blaster. Now attack again and directly. Jaden:I use the trap mirror force to destroy your Dragon!! Zane:I use de-fusion so my monster does not get destroyed. I end my turn. Jaden:Draw. I activate The warrior returning alive to get Clayman back in my hand. And I use polymerization to fuse him with Sparkman to summon Elemntal Hero Thunder Giant. Now I use his special ability to destroy one Cyber Dragon and im going to attack Cyber Tamer I lay down two face downs and end my turn. Jaden:3500Zane:2300 Zane:DRAW!!! I use premature burial x2 to bring back Cyber Dragon and Cyber Tamer. Now I use another Cyber Fusion but added with the Dragon in my hand, its Cyber End Dragon!!! Now Cyber End Dragon, attack. Jaden:3500Zane:700 Jaden:I activate Hero Barrier and A Hero Emerges. I summon Elemental Hero Knopse, and your attack is blocked. Zane:I end my turn Jaden:I activate The Eye Of A Hero and I pick ... Deck Searcher. And I use it to add another Knopse to my hand, and I'm going to summon it straight away. Now, both Elemental hero Knopse, attack directly. Jaden:200Zane:WIPEOUT DUEL SET JADEN YUKI WON!!! "Good duel" said Zane, walking of in disbeleif."Yes, I won" Shouted Jaden, punching the air.Chancellor Shepherd was just going to congratulate him when he asked "where is Syrus". " He must be in trouble I gotta help" he said, sprinting as fast as he could.A shady, dark figure stopped him, he said "I know where your friend is, he is in great danger". "Just tell me where he is" Jaden screamed angrily. "ok, I will guide you" said the figure. He pulled a shiny gold thing that looked like a key out of his long brown cloak. "This is the millenium portal key" he said "If I put this key in a special lock, it will show you where your friend is". "Then do it" said Jaden. "I don't know exactly where the lock is" he continued. "But I'm sure that it is on this island"."Will you help me find it? he finally asked. "Of course" replied Jaden "anything for Sy". To Be Continued ... CardsCyber TamerCyber FusionThe Eye Of A HeroDeck Searcher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 dont tell me to shut up kingdom hearts man95 , I have the right to tell you what I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 sure what ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Witt Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 last episode gets 1/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 no Jack Witt do SHUT UP!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Chapter 3The hunt for the key "Lets go" exclaimed the man "you look to the west and the south, I will look to the east and the north". "Ok" said Jaden, calming down "my dorm is in the west, so I will be more familliar with it".When Jaden got to the south of the island he started looking in the trees."Where would a lock be" he thought."Waaaiii" said the winged kuribho spirit, pointing to something golden on the ground."Is that the lock?" Jaden asked winged kuriboh.Winged kurihbo shrugged.Jaden picked up the shiny golden thing on the ground."It was only a sweet wrapper" said Jaden in dismay "come on kuriboh, lets search in the west".Meanwhile, the mystery man was looking in the north."I will use my sixth sense to detect the lock" he whispered to himself.A strong, flashing glow appeared on his forehead and the millenium portal key was marked on his head.A third eye appeared that saw if there was any gold where he looked.He searched for a long time but found no traces of golden objects anywhere."I must now look to the east of the island" he said.When Jaden was at the west, the first thing he noticed was a card on the ground."What is this card?" he asked winged kurihbo shrugged again.It was a spell card called portal key lock and it had hieroglyphs where the effect is supposed to be and its picture was a door with a golden lock.He went inside the dorm and everything was normal."Weird" he thought "I'd better go and tell that man about this".So Jaden went to the north of the island, but as soon as Jaden got there, the man had reached the eastt of the island. So while Jaden was trying to find him, he was using his sixth sense again, and he found a golden hieroglyph translator."This wont come in any use" said the man, throwing it behind him.Jaden couldn't find him, of course, and started running to the east.But the man was going to the north again, to double check.Him and Jaden bumped into each other on the way."I found this card, it has hieroglyphs on it, can you read it?" asked Jaden."This is the lock I was telling you about, I just didn't know it was a card" he exclaimed, observing it carefully."I do not know how to read the hieroglyphs" he continued "but I did find a stone that translates, but I threw it away"."Lets go and find it then" cried Jaden.They walked and walked and finally got there."Jaden, I have a sixth sense" the man told Jaden "It is the sense to locate gold."The hieroglyph stone was golden" he explained "so I can sense it out"."Sweet" said Jaden.The man used his sixth sense to track down the gold, but there was an imp guarding it.Surprisingly, the imp had a duel disk on, the style you would see in city battles."If you want this treasure" It screeched "you must duel me"."Alright" accepted Jaden "get your game on!! To Be Continued ... P.S.sorry all my chapters are short, but I like them short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Chapter 4In the portal we go Duel TimeJaden YukiVSImpJaden and Imp:DUEL!!!They tossed a coin and Jaden won.Jaden:Get ready for some strong winds because here comes Elemental Hero Avian in attack mode!!!! I lay down a face down and end my turn. Imp:I summon Horn Imp and attack your avian. Also I put a card in the spell and trap zone to end my turn. Jaden:3800Imp:4000 Jaden:Im gonna bring out good old sparkman to electrify your imp and end my turn. Jaden:3800Imp:3600 Imp:I use the spell that I set, Golden Hieroglyph Stone, by paying 1000 life points, I can destroy one monster on your side of the field, and add 1 card from my deck to my hand!!!! I summon Feral Imp and attack you directly. I end my go. Jaden:2400Imp:3800 Jaden:I activate Ultimate Offering. I summon winged kuriboh and activate my face down card, transcendent wings!!! although I will only have 1 card in my hand, I get to summon winged kuriboh LV10 and use its ability!!!! I summon Elemental Hero The Heat and attack your life points directly!!! Iend my turn. Jaden:2400Imp:2000 Imp:I put a face down card in monster card zone and end my turn. Jaden:stop trying to hide in defense position, be a man!!!! I summon Elemental Hero Lady Heat in attack. Elemental Hero The Heat, attack the face down card.(It turned out to be Des Feral Imp, he decided not to use the effect). lady heat, attack directly!!!! now use your effect!!!! Jaden:2400Imp:400 Imp:I know I am going to lose, but my motto is never surrender, I end my turn. Jaden:alright, I use polymerization to fuse the heat with lady heat to create... Elemental Hero Flame Blast!!!!! now attack and finish that ugly thing off!!! Jaden:2400Imp:WIPEOUT DUEL SETJADEN YUKI WON!!! "Ok, you can have it" the Imp said, after defeat."Good choice, hahaha" chuckled Jaden."What does the card say, whoever you are?" he asked the man."It says "if you wish to open the portal, you must tap the millenium portal key on this card. A door will then appear on the slifer red dorm of duel academy. Then unlock it with the key again. The portal is inside there." lets try it" he replied.He tapped the card with his spirit key and they went west.They found out that the card was not lying, there was a door.He unlocked the door to see a swirly golden mirror sort of thing."Come on, lets go" he said grabbing Jaden ina firm grip and going in the portal with him. To Be Continued CardsGolden Hieroglyph Stone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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benguinboo Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Chapter 5The first element duel They found themselves on a large, desolate wasteland."I should tell you my name" the man said "It is Tyler, Tyler Rider"."Haha" chuckled Jaden "It almost rhimes"."We must look for your friend" ordered Tyler "he could be anywhere".Jaden and him looked all over the deserted place but didn't find any trace of Syrus."It's no use" cried Jaden "we'll never find him".Tears started welling up in his eyes."Wait, whats in that cage?" asked Tyler pointing to a cage in the distace.t"I think it might be Sy" exclaimed Jaden "I'm coming for you Syrus".Jaden ran as fast as he could to see if it was Syrus, with Tyler behind him.About half way there, Tyler asked Jaden "Have you ever heard of the legend of the 3 element dragons?"."Of course!!!" replied Jaden "It's all the rage"."Have you heard of the element tamers?" he asked, again."No" replied Jaden, again."They are crazy people who try to train the element dragons" explained Tyler "and if you wish to slay the dragons, you must win against them in a duel"."A duel?" asked Jaden, in surprise."Yes" replied Tyler "you know they are real, dont you?""Errr...not really" replied Jaden anxiously."Well, they are" said Tyler "lets continue on our journey"When they got there, it was Syrus in the cage, and it turned out to be on a volcano."Help Jaden" cried Syrus "I got locked in this cage by people riding on the back of a real life dragon"."Don't worr..." Jaden wasn't able to finish his sentence because an enourmous figure spewed out of the volcano."Thats the guy that locked me in this cage"said Syrus, pointing to the thing.It turned out to be an element tamer on the back of the volcano dragon."Free my friend" Jaden shouted angrily at the element tamer."Only if you duel me first" the tamer said."Ok then" agreed Jaden "get your game on!!!" Duel TimeJaden YukiVSVolcano Dragon TamerJaden and Tamer:DUEL!!!They tossed a coin. Jaden won.Jaden:prepare for some heat because here comes Elemental Hero Lady Heat, and her effect activates! I also lay down a face down to end my turn!!!Jaden:4000Tamer:3800 Tamer:I summon Horus The Black Flame Dragon LV4 in attack mode and attack!!! I end my turn, so his special effect activates, come forth Horus The Black Flame Dragon LV6!! Jaden:3600Tamer:3800 Jaden:Yes!!!! I summon winged kuriboh and use my face down transcendent wings and use his effect!!!! I summon Elemental Hero Bubbleman and equip him with bubble blaster, now attack directly!!!I lay down another face down and end my turn. Jaden:3600Tamer:2100 Tamer:I activate ultimate offering and use it to summon Solar Flare Dragon and Blackland Fire dragon to tribute to summon Element Dragon - Volcano Dragon(ATK5000 2700DEF level:10)!!! Now I use a spell card, mystical space typhoon, destroy bubble blaster. Now, attack. Jaden:????Tamer:1100To Be Continued... CardsElement Dragon - Volcano Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Chapter 6The second dragon (There was an enourmous explosion of fire).Jaden:I'm still standing!!!!! Tamer:but how? (The smoke started to reveal emergency provisions) Jaden:800Tamer:1100 Jaden:my turn, DRAW!!! I summon Elemental Hero Avian and use soul exchange!!!(the enourmous dragon shifted with avian). Now, attack avian!!!! Jaden:800Tamer:WIPEOUT DUEL SETJADEN YUKI WON!!! "I can't beleive you beat me" spat the Tamer, his head hanging "here, your friend is free to go"."Wait" shouted Jaden "there is two locks on this thing"."Aagh, yes" the Tamer replied "the other element tamers have the keys"."Why you little..." cried Jaden, very crossly."We must defeat the other element tamers" he told Tyler."Let us search" Tyler said "if you want to free your friend, that is".They searched everywhere, high and low, round and round, but they could not find them."Lets get some rest" puffed Jaden, as he sat by the ocean."Yes" Tyler replied "good idea"."Can you hear that?" asked Jaden."Yes" tyler answered "It sounds like its coming from the ocean".Suddenly, an enourmous something came out from the water."Is that another dragon?" asked Jaden."I think" replied Tyler."Salutations" came a gruff voice from the enourmous something "I am the Hydro Tamer"."The dragon I am sitting on is the Hydro Dragon" he continued."Give us your key" cried Jaden."Only if you duel me first, HAHAHAHAHA" chuckled the Tamer."Get your game on!!!" said Jaden in reply. Duel TimeJaden YukiVSHydro Dragon TamerJaden and Tamer:DUEL!!!!They flipped a coin, Jaden won.Jaden:Im gonna have some melee attacks with...Elemental Hero Wildheart, go. I end my turn by laying down a face down!!!! Tamer:I summon Hydrogeddon, now attack wildheart!!!! I use his special effect and end my turn. Jaden:3900Tamer:4000 Jaden:I summon Elemental Hero Clayman in defence position. I end my turn. Tamer:tryin' to hide are you?!!! I summon Unshaven angler and end my turn. To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 well yeah.. Short but i think good :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted February 23, 2008 Report Share Posted February 23, 2008 sweet but every time in the begining of the duel thers a happy face. but still 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 23, 2008 Report Share Posted February 23, 2008 sweet but every time in the begining of the duel thers a happy face. but still 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 darn it no chapter 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benguinboo Posted April 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2008 Chapter 7The 1st Magic Key Jaden: Draw. He drew Winged Kuriboh. Winged Kuriboh: waaaaiiiii. IN Jadens mind: Man, hes got 3 monsters out, I hope a miracle happens soon. Tamer: What're you waiting for, your turn. Jaden: I'm gonna summon Winged Kuriboh in defence, and lay down a face down, end. Tamer: You think that furball will protect you??? Hahaha. I activate Ultimate Offering and summon Oxygeddon. Now, I activate Boning - H20. I tribute 2 Hydrogeddons and 1 Oxygeddon to summon, the powerful Water Dragon. And now I use Ultimate Offering to let me summon the ultimate Element Dragon - Hydro Dragon (ATK/4000 DEF/3800 LV/10)!!!! Water dragon crush his winged furball. Jaden:3900Tamer:3500 Jaden: I use Transcendent Wi ... Tamer: I activate Mystical space typhoon, destroy. Now, Hydro Dragon, attack. Jaden: you might have forgotten, but I dont take any damage this turn because of my so called "Furball"s effect. Tamer: I use pot of greed to draw 2 cards, I set 3 magic cards, your turn. Jaden: Draw, perfect.I summon Bubbleman so I can draw 2 Cards. Now, I use Heroes Assault and summon Elemental Hero Bladedge. I use Miracle Fusion to Fuse Bladedge on the field and do you remember Wildheart in the graveyard?? To make E-HERO WILDEDGE.I use Attack and Defense Combined and make Wildedge have 4800 attack!!!! I set the last 2 cards in my hand. Now, Wildedge attack that hydro guy and destroy him. Tamer: I activate my trap, Ring of Destruction and target Wildedge. There was an enourmous golden explosion as chunks of gold flew everywhere. Jaden:???Tamer:??? The Smoke cleared and 3 Emergency Provisions were standing, one on Jadens side, 2 on the Tamers Jaden:100Tamer:700 Jaden: Not so fast, I activate Mystical Space Typhoon, and target one of your Emergency Provisions. Tamer: Aagghh Jaden:100Tamer:WIPEOUT DUEL SETJADEN YUKI WINS!!! "Here, take this" panted the hydro dragon tamer, handing Jaden a silver key."Sweet" exclaimed Jaden " this must be one of those keys that opens a lock on the cage"."Correct" replied the tamer."Come on, we need to find the last dragon tamer" shouted Jaden, as he rushed across the plains."Wait for me!" called Tyler. TO BE CONTINUED... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asheira Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Mystical space typhoon wopuldn't have stopped the effect of emerency provisions, it only destroys, not negates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Old thread is old. Reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 bran2939. Did you see the post above yours? Posting in old threads is against the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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