TwinSeed Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 V1: [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/4rxoaw.png[/IMG] V2: [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2edxd0j.png[/IMG] V3: [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/j5col0.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Be sure to use your effects sparingly and deploy them effectively; they look rather busy/cluttered as of now. But I see you're improving, keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Yeah, I should probably tone it down next time.. it just looks plain without them, you know? Though I do LOVE my use of fractals on Ragnarok (the sword) and the one right above him that looks like a soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 I really don't like this for many reasons. The effects seem to cluster the entire sig. The render is lq and not pleasant to look at. You're improving, but don't over use things and pick some nice quality renders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Well I couldn't find a good render of Crona, so I had to find a picture and make my own. That's why it's lq. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Nothing really works together. Work on your overall basics, especially blending, lighting, and composition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 [quote name='Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh' timestamp='1319494593' post='5598585'] Nothing really works together. Work on your overall basics, especially blending, lighting, and composition. [/quote] Hmm.. I guess I see what you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted October 26, 2011 Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 Render is a low quality, and at that it isn't really a good render for a tag. Colours don't really work, and the effects look like they're just spammed. Lighting is pretty bad. It's an alright tag, but could've used a little more touching up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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