jordan90 Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 comments and crit appreciated as always guys [img]http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp188/convikted_designs/SOBEAUTIFUL.png[/img] [IMG]http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp188/convikted_designs/likeashit.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 The first one is forced. But can you PM the .PSD, I would love to try that style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 forced? mind elaborating please, i don't really get it. thanks for the comment btw, i'm not giving out the psd just yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 The lighting is forced, as in you placing it there without the sense of where the lighting should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 was meant to be coming from the background, not sure what to fix :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 The first one is fine, imo. Good style, fairly nice execution. I think the only thing it needs is a little flair to make it different, you know? You see a lot of tags like this, so each needs to have it's own thing to distinguish it. Something to add some wow factor. The second is very bland. I can't get a sense of how the lighting and effects are supposed to be effecting Shockwave, as it seems his colors and blend are totally different from that of everything else in the tag. The text is pretty bad as well, imo. I just think this one needs to be scrapped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 First is awesome but really flat. The second actually has really cool compo but the execution is not really there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 cool thanks for the tips fellas, ill try incorporating a few of your ideas in my next pieces Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted October 25, 2011 Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 The first one is alright, besides the lighting that was pointed out by Daemon it still is good The second one for me, it's just that the text really throws me off and it's not so unique. Pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.