jeff10 Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 I am a starter and i would like your comments,score ext. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 sweet 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeff10 Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 come on it took me forever to get this picture and even longer to come up with this card!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 are you serious? the picture is stretched and the second cards image is... bland? bad ocg... and no ritual spell card to go with the ritual monster.... if you wanted them to be like this you should have placed in "Other Cards"... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Kemper Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Um, you didn't spend enough time thinking of these cards and I shall now take apart both cards since I'm bored. The Almighty Ruler:First of all, that is the 90th time I have seen that picture of the Predator. Find a different one to start off. Next of all is that fact that he is a ritual monster and yet nowhere does it say how you are supposed to summon him. Next of all is the fact that his ATK and DEF is at Quad9(9999), something you should never do, and that his text box (where his summoning condition should be) is flavor text, which on its own, sucks. Make him an effect monster with a much more balance ATK and DEF, a new picture and lower his level. 0.125634/10 Toon Devil:Now this one is a bit easier to destroy. First of all, the OCG (Original Card Grammar) is terrible. The effect should read: "While this card is face-up on the field, increase its ATK and DEF by 100 points for each monster with "Toon" in its name on your side of the field." Much clearer and easier to understand. It's type should be Fiend, not Underworld. The ATK and DEF is fairly balanced in my opinion and the level should be eight, but just change the effect a bit and you should be OK in my book. 1.645/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 ^ agree but no harsh feelings you tried Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeff10 Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 thoes three god cards suck!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeff10 Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 bring it man i want to see your cards in my contest for 50 points!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Don't. Doublepost. First of all, if you are creating a Toon, then at least give it the right effect which all Toons have (or at least almost all toons have). Second, when you are creating a Ritual monster, then make a ritualcalling card in order to complete the monster. Third, the picture has already been used a lot of times. Well this doesn't even deserve a review, but you get a 1/10 because of the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Kemper Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 thoes three god cards suck!!! If you are talking to me and referring to the three cards that are in every post I make, they are part of my signature. The top one is the first card I made on the site while the other two are cards that won a contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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