LC Posted October 21, 2011 Report Share Posted October 21, 2011 [img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/293/3/9/jump_by_infernoknightlc-d4dfj5d.png[/img] [img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/293/d/5/ti_by_infernoknightlc-d4dfvrh.png[/img] CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 21, 2011 Report Share Posted October 21, 2011 First one is very cluttered with c4ds. I like the second one though. Depth is coming along, although it and the lighting can use some refining. A yellow radial doesn't necessarily constitute lighting. Try to incorporate it more into the piece. And colors can use some work. Everything's looking very monochromatic as of now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted October 22, 2011 Report Share Posted October 22, 2011 They're pretty cool. FIrst one, just clean up the fractals. From here, work on getting more appealing colors. It'll add serious wow to your tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 i'd denoise the first and the others have already mentioned using more prominent colours. your on the right track using purple and yellow on the last one, try to make it pop more with a levels and selective colour adjustment layer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 I think you could go somewhere with the first one. Try working on the bg in the upper left and try to make it feel more natural. It feels unfinished, I suggest you add some adjustment layers to see if it looks any better. The yellow seems to spoil the second one. The soft brush doesn't fit IMO and it doesn't make sense just having that one bit of yellow. Also the tag seems a bit flat and you can clearly see where the c4d has been placed over the render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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