I'm not sure how to word these card eficts, help!

[pfaccioxx]

hay I made some new card's for my lama set http://pfaccioxx.deviantart.com/gallery/32469216 but I'm not sure how to word the eficts, so I figured I'd ask here

the card effect's I need reviewed are:

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each end face wile this card is a monster place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR un-equip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle posishon at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle wile in ATK mode you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instened of destroying it.

[b]Halloween Lama - Fiend[/b]
This card cannot be declared the target of an attack while you have any Fiend and/or Zombie type monsters (besides this one) on your side of the field. All non Zombie type Lama monsters are treated as fiend type monsters. This card get’s 200 ATK & DEF points for every Fiend monster on the field and 400 ATK for every Zombie type monster on the field. Once per turn you may take control of one Zombie or Fiend type monster on your opponent’s side of the field in exchange for 100 LP times the level of the selected monster. There can only be one Halloween Lama on the field at any given time.

thank you

[Blue-Eyes493]

Well first, fix these words:

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each end [u]face[/u] [u]wile[/u] this card is a monster place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR [u]un-equip[/u] it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle [u]posishon[/u] at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle wile in ATK mode you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster [u]instened [/u]of destroying it.

[b]Halloween Lama - Fiend[/b]
This card cannot be declared the target of an attack while you have any Fiend and/or Zombie type monsters (besides this one) on your side of the field. All non Zombie type Lama monsters are treated as fiend type monsters. This card [u]get’s[/u] 200 ATK & DEF points for every Fiend monster on the field and 400 ATK for every Zombie type monster on the field. Once per turn you may take control of one Zombie or Fiend type monster on your opponent’s side of the field in exchange for 100 LP times the level of the selected monster. There can only be one Halloween Lama on the field at any given time.

The words you need to fix are underlined.

[pfaccioxx]

K thanks for the help
I'll be uploading the finished cards sometime shortly after halowen on my DA acont at http://pfaccioxx.deviantart.com/gallery/32469216
along with the rest of my lama cards (in case your interested)

[Blue-Eyes493]

Now, add everything that is in parenthesis:

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each end phase while this card is (in the monster card zone)(,) place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card(,) destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card [b]and remove any fade counters on it[/b], OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster(,) its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle position at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed(,) reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle while (it was in Attack Position)(,) you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instead of destroying it.

[b]Halloween Lama - Fiend[/b]
This card cannot be declared the target of an attack while you have any Fiend and/or Zombie(-)type monsters (besides this one) on your side of the field. All non(-)Zombie(-)type Lama monsters are treated as fiend(-)type monsters. This card gets 200 ATK & DEF points for every Fiend(-type) monster on the field and 400 ATK for every Zombie(-)type monster on the field. Once per turn(,) you may take control of one Zombie or Fiend(-)type monster on your opponent’s side of the field in exchange for 100 LP times the level of the selected monster. There can only be one Halloween Lama on the field at any given time.

[pfaccioxx]

[quote name='greenfrog100' timestamp='1319146345' post='5590067']
Well first, fix these words:

The words you need to fix are underlined.
[/quote]

K I fixed them

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each end phase while this card is a monster place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card [b]and remove any fade counters on it[/b], OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle position at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle while in ATK mode you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instead of destroying it.

[b]Halloween Lama - Fiend[/b]
This card cannot be declared the target of an attack while you have any Fiend and/or Zombie type monsters (besides this one) on your side of the field. All non Zombie type Lama monsters are treated as fiend type monsters. This card gets 200 ATK & DEF points for every Fiend monster on the field and 400 ATK for every Zombie type monster on the field. Once per turn you may take control of one Zombie or Fiend type monster on your opponent’s side of the field in exchange for 100 LP times the level of the selected monster. There can only be one Halloween Lama on the field at any given time.

I also adjusted Shadow Lama's efict slightly (the adjusted part is bolded)
what now?

[pfaccioxx]

[quote name='greenfrog100' timestamp='1319252142' post='5592775']Now capitalize the words that are big: .[/quote]

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each [size=4]End Phase[/size] while this card is in the monster card zone, place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card, destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card [b]and remove any fade counters on it[/b], OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster, its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle position at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle while it was in Attack Position, you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instead of destroying it.

like this?

[pfaccioxx]

[quote name='greenfrog100' timestamp='1319162641' post='5590615']Now, add everything that is in parenthesis: [/quote]

Like this?

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each end phase while this card is in the monster card zone, place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card, destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card [b]and remove any fade counters on it[/b], OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster, its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle position at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle while it was in Attack Position, you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instead of destroying it.

[b]Halloween Lama - Fiend[/b]
This card cannot be declared the target of an attack while you have any Fiend and/or Zombie-type monsters besides this one on your side of the field. All non-Zombie-type Lama monsters are treated as fiend-type monsters. This card gets 200 ATK & DEF points for every Fiend-type monster on the field and 400 ATK for every Zombie-type monster on the field. Once per turn, you may take control of one Zombie or Fiend-type monster on your opponent’s side of the field in exchange for 100 LP times the level of the selected monster. There can only be one Halloween Lama on the field at any given time.

[Blue-Eyes493]

[quote name='pfaccioxx' timestamp='1319342916' post='5595204']
K thanks for the help
I'll be uploading the finished cards sometime shortly after halowen on my DA acont at [url="http://pfaccioxx.deviantart.com/gallery/32469216"]http://pfaccioxx.dev...allery/32469216[/url]
along with the rest of my lama cards (in case your interested)
[/quote]
You're welcome, but I am not the greatest card editor, so you might want to ask a few other people for help, too.

[Blue-Eyes493]

[quote name='pfaccioxx' timestamp='1319336814' post='5594983']

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each [size=4]End Phase[/size] while this card is in the monster card zone, place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card, destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card [b]and remove any fade counters on it[/b], OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster, its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle position at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle while it was in Attack Position, you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instead of destroying it.

like this?
[/quote]
Yes, like that.

[Blue-Eyes493]

Now capitalize the words that are big:

[b]Shadow Lama - Fiend / Union [/b]/
During each [size=6]end phase[/size] while this card is in the monster card zone, place 1 fade counter on this card. When there are 3 fade counters on this card, destroy it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card [b]and remove any fade counters on it[/b], OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While this card is equipped to a monster, its ATK is reduced by an amount equal to this card's ATK power at the time it was equipped and the controller of this card may change its battle position at any time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, reequip it to the attacking monster. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle while it was in Attack Position, you may double the damage taken to equip this card to the attacking monster instead of destroying it.

[b]Halloween Lama - Fiend[/b]
This card cannot be declared the target of an attack while you have any Fiend and/or Zombie-type monsters besides this one on your side of the field. All non-Zombie-type Lama monsters are treated as fiend-type monsters. This card gets 200 ATK & DEF points for every Fiend-type monster on the field and 400 ATK for every Zombie-type monster on the field. Once per turn, you may take control of one Zombie or Fiend-type monster on your opponent’s side of the field in exchange for 100 LP times the level of the selected monster. There can only be one Halloween Lama on the field at any given time.