Jackel The Mad Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 There is a name for him in every culture, most just call him the boogie man.He feed on the fears of the men he hunts like animal.Not much is known about him when he appears all that is seen is a black shadowy mass.Every couple of years a hand full of people vanish without a trace, to only be found weeks later murder,slaughtered like pigs, and hung on crosses.It's is time for the next group of victims to fend for there lives.But this time he is taking them to a new hunting ground a place people like to call the Devil's play ground.It is a small abandoned military camp surrounded on all sides by dense forests and shear vertical cliff faces. He choose the 6 people he did because they all had multiple personality problems and fears that he will use to make himself stronger.The goal of the 6 captives is to survive as long as they can. [spoiler=App] Name: Age:(18+) Personality:(2+) Bio:(2+) Appereance: Phobia:(at least 2) Text Color:(This is the color of dialogue and action they are two different)[/spoiler] [spoiler=Rules] 1)All YCM rules apply 2)[spoiler=GOD-MODING, META-GAMING, AND POWER-PLAYING] These are three things that every RPer should avoid, for not only the flow of the RP but also to respect any other RPers in the thread. It’s a must to make sure you don’t do these. God-Moding – This means giving you and your character invulnerability and not giving the other players fair chance over the course of battle. Instances of god-moding include dodging every attack, using an attack that never misses no matter what, giving yourself an unplanned power up halfway through a battle, not properly responding to an attack’s strength, etcetera etcetera etcetera. Just don’t do this; it’s rude and unfair. Meta-Gaming – This means using information that your character would have no way of knowing in character. For example, if Alice’s father recently died and hasn’t told anyone about it or let information slip, then Bob, who she just met on the street, isn’t going to console her about the loss of her father. Why? He would have no way of physically knowing. Doing this is disrespectful to a character’s intentions and plotting. Power-Playing – Probably the worst of them, this means taking control over another character or their actions. Like in the previous example, if Alice is going to throw a tomato at Bob, your post with her shouldn’t involve her throwing it and watching it splatter over Bob’s face, because that’s taking away Bob’s controller’s opportunity to dodge it. A better alternative is to have the tomato leave her hand and fly toward Bob, but not mention hitting him.[/spoiler] 3)[spoiler=ADVANCED CLAUSE] Minimum Post Length – Each standard IC post should have the equivalent of at least 4 lines of text. However, a good post should have around one to two paragraphs with proper English spelling and grammar, and should have enough material for other RPers to expand and elaborate on in their own posts. (As a rule of thumb, 4 unbroken lines of text on YCM at standard size and font is roughly 100 words.) Dialogue – Dialogue should be done in one of two ways; in quotation marks or in speech lines. Script format is prohibited, because it doesn’t allow as much description and is dull overall. Expies – Copy-paste characters from either separate RPs or from already existing franchises, with only minor detail changes, are frowned upon. This doesn’t allow true “evolution” as a unique character.[/spoiler] 4)What I say goes and Have Fun[/spoiler] [spoiler=Accepted] [spoiler=Immortal Kween Willow] Name: Alysha Age:18 Personality:She is shy, quiet, and withdrawn. She has never has had the ability to get close to people she tries to distance herself from others. Bio:She was born in a poor village in North Korea, when she turned 13 her and her mother left to America to live a better life.She didn't have many friends in school, but she had a couple good friend she hung out with.At the age of 17 she moved out into an appartment and got a job at the local tavern. [spoiler=Appereance:][img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/sample_a7b86de99d410bcc261691f534e27c03fcc28a45_thumb.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Phobia: Achluophobia - Fear of darkness. Necrophobia – fear of death and/or dead things. Text Color:[color=#0000CD]Dialogue [/color]And [color=#FF0000]Action[/spoiler][/color] [spoiler=TwinSeed] Name: Tihu (tee-who) "Ty" Turing (to-ring) Age: 20 Personality: Tihu: Tihu is confident and take-charge, but not so much that he's pompous. Handy with knowledge and little need of an encyclopedia, people tend to go for him in times of wonder. Though he may not always have the right answer when people want advice, he's always willing to help. Ray [no last name]: Ray is Tihu's "alter-ego", his "other soul", the other "person" inside of him. Ray is crafty and malevolent, always trying to get under peoples' skin and causing conflict. His main target is Tihu, sometimes attempting to get his friends to question him by spreading lies and rumors. Bio: Tihu was raised by both parents, and both wealthy, and that's why nobody could know about them. It had taken him three grades in school for him to bring up the courage to make a single friend. His first friend, Mai'hu (may-oo), had died of brain cancer at the age of only 7, when they both were about to enter 4th grade. That's when Ray made his appearance. No viable reason to what Ray did, but he constantly reminded and blamed Tihu for the loss of Mai'hu. Having been saved from attempted suicide twice before the age of 10, he was put under strict watch, were his parents found him arguing with Ray countless times. Eventually, Tihu had got over the death of his friend, leaving Ray powerless and quiet for the next 5 years. Until the next death. To this day, he's haunted by the memory that this one really was his fault, and Ray exploits this grief constantly. Appereance: [b]Looks can be deceiving[/b] Phobia: Despite all that he's been through, Tihu is only really scared of a few things: the death of those close, poison in his food, heights, and anything sharp. Personality Color*: [color=blue]Tihu[/color] [color=green]Ray[/spoiler][/color] [/spoiler] [spoiler=My app] Name: Alysha Age:18 Personality:She is shy, quiet, and withdrawn. She has never has had the ability to get close to people she tries to distance herself from others. Bio:She was born in a poor village in North Korea, when she turned 13 her and her mother left to America to live a better life.She didn't have many friends in school, but she had a couple good friend she hung out with.At the age of 17 she moved out into an appartment and got a job at the local tavern. [spoiler=Appereance:][img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/sample_a7b86de99d410bcc261691f534e27c03fcc28a45_thumb.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Phobia: Achluophobia - Fear of darkness. Necrophobia – fear of death and/or dead things. Text Color:[color=#0000cd]Dialogue [/color]And [color=#ff0000]Action[/color][/spoiler] By the way characters will die though out the roleplay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Could you possibly write out a bit more to the plot? Like, for example, where the people are, why they are victims, what they are or should be doing, details about the boogie man... You get what I'm saying, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted October 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Updated and Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Well, your grammar isn't too horrible, and the plot seems interesting enough. Might be difficult to play the part of someone who has a multiple personality disorder and constant paranoia, but I'll give it a shot. Name: Tihu (tee-who) "Ty" Turing (to-ring) Age: 20 Personality: Tihu: Tihu is confident and take-charge, but not so much that he's pompous. Handy with knowledge and little need of an encyclopedia, people tend to go for him in times of wonder. Though he may not always have the right answer when people want advice, he's always willing to help. Ray [no last name]: Ray is Tihu's "alter-ego", his "other soul", the other "person" inside of him. Ray is crafty and malevolent, always trying to get under peoples' skin and causing conflict. His main target is Tihu, sometimes attempting to get his friends to question him by spreading lies and rumors. Bio: Tihu was raised by both parents, and both wealthy, and that's why nobody could know about them. It had taken him three grades in school for him to bring up the courage to make a single friend. His first friend, Mai'hu (may-oo), had died of brain cancer at the age of only 7, when they both were about to enter 4th grade. That's when Ray made his appearance. No viable reason to what Ray did, but he constantly reminded and blamed Tihu for the loss of Mai'hu. Having been saved from attempted suicide twice before the age of 10, he was put under strict watch, were his parents found him arguing with Ray countless times. Eventually, Tihu had got over the death of his friend, leaving Ray powerless and quiet for the next 5 years. Until the next death. To this day, he's haunted by the memory that this one really was his fault, and Ray exploits this grief constantly. Appereance: [spoiler=Looks can be deceiving] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/jic5c5.png[/IMG] [/spoiler] Phobia: Despite all that he's been through, Tihu is only really scared of a few things: the death of those close, poison in his food, heights, and anything sharp. Personality Color*: [color=blue]Tihu[/color] [color=green]Ray[/color] *The dialogue/action colors are unnecessary, because dialogue will be in quotation marks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Accepted and The dialogue/action colors is mainly for people with multiple characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Oh, I see. Well, I edited my picture into the application. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 ok thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 It would be smarter to post: [spoiler=Accepted Apps] [spoiler=Me (or your username)] *insert app* [/spoiler] [spoiler=TwinSeed] *insert app* [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 ok thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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