Ghoulish Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Maybe, Have to read through it later, looks promising though Could an antagonist be an "Eclipse" Theme, I have an idea surrounding his creation through the collision of a Commet and a Star....If this is too far fetched let me know because I'm a little confused of who the antagonists are. Antagonist App, Duskuro Eclipse [b][u]Personal Information[/u][/b] [b]Character Name:[/b] Duskuro Eclipse [b]Species:[/b] Black Hole Being [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Age:[/b] (Have to check date of when Big Bang Happened) [b]Sexuality:[/b] Straight [b]Personality: [/b]To summarize Dukuro's personality, two anime characters come to mind, Grimmjow from Bleach and Zaraki Kenpachi also from Bleach. To extend, duskuro loves to fight, although unlike someone who is just a brute looking to fight for no reason, duskuro always plans ahead and thinks before he acts and whether or not his attacks will serve his own goals. Duskuro can be quite demeaning and attempt to be intimidating wioth his cocky nature. He tends to underestimate his opponents. Duskuro most of the time will have a demeaning smirk on his face projecting himself as a man with little respect for anyone. [b]Biography: [/b]Once a celestial being in the fight against the Zodiac, Duskuro was known as Celiuro. After his entraptment into a star, an unlikly collision with energy released from the Big Bang into a large commet caused a Black Hole whole to be formed, Duskuro, known as Celiuro at this time was trapped in what he would soon call "Eclipse City". The star that once imprisoned him had lost it's light due to the darkness within Eclipse City allowing Celiuro to be free from the star but trapped in the endless darkness of the Black Hole. Due tot he collision onto the ground of Eclipse City, duskuro's only weapon had pierced his heart and dug deep into the ground impaling Duskuro to the ground. However this would turn to Duskuro's favour as the blade had been effected by the energy within the Big Bang thereby fiilling it in Duskuro's heart. Although severly injured Duskuro lived as In this world of darkness, the energy of the Big Bang was nurtured. Duskuro after several years of travelling through the darkness without knowing his origin and his name, due to his memory loss, decided to name himself, Duskuro. Duskuro considered himself "The Black Hole Being" and ruler of Eclipse City, however this wasn't to hard of a title to earn as he was the only one in the first ever Black Hole. duskuro grew a fascination with the endless Darkness and soon decided to free himself from it to to spread it's "Glory" to other worlds. Duskuro tried various methods of Trying to free himself but was unsuccessful, this led to a mad and psychotic episode in which he sliced down his chest and stabbed the ground, through this a sudden rip in the darkness appeared, revealing the light of a World not known to Duskuro, this would be the world that Duskuro would show the darkness. [spoiler=Appearance:] [url="http://fav.me/d2jj5tg"][img]http://i54.tinypic.com/2hd9npl.jpg[/img][/url] duskuro also has many scars along his body, and wears a black bandana over his mouth, the scars are deep. (The pic is really a good description of him, I'm not quite sure how to expand it into 4 lines.) His eyes are white with black pupils. The scras on hsi body are very noticable as is the memorability one has when theys ee his pale face, hjis skin tone is quite pale and his eyes seem hollow and emotionless, his loight smirk is the only sign of normality, and yet that still shows him to be a psycho, he wears black small boots. [/spoiler] [b][u]Combat Information[/u][/b] [b]Weapon(s):[/b] [spoiler= Black Hole Blade (Burakkuhōru)] A Black 1.8 metre katana, with 1.6m being the blade itself. The Katana is well cut and extremly sharp edged. The blade has Black liquid dripping from the tip of the Blade that is reminiscent to blood. When Duskuro slashes his blade he has the ability of opening a Dark Gate, that can expand from the appearance of a mere slash after time into an "Eye" shape. Burakkhoru has 2 main Abilities, Absorb (Kyūshū suru ) and Disperse (Bunsan sa seru) In order for these 2 moves to be used Duskuro needs to ensure that the Black liquid, his blood is dripping from the tip of his blade, so he will have to cut himself. However the only way the individual can be absorbed into the Black star Gate by the force of the gate itself is through being cut by the blade with Duskuro's blade dripping from it. [b]Kyushu Suru: [/b]When Duskuro slashes his blade and releases the Dark Gate he immediatly opens slashes either horizontally or Vertically opposite to his original slash. This creates what he calls Black Star Gate, (Burakkusutāgēto) This creates a 4 sided star in the middle of the air which attracts and absorbs, with a great deal of force unstable objects, the size of the absorbtion is based off the size of the gate, and the size of the gate is dependent on the impact of the slash + The amount of blood on the blade. The slash Duskuro does cuts through the fabric of the earthen atmosphere (Gate Slashes) creating a rip or tear in the air. The Objects absorbed into the Star are sent to a dark dimension which acts as a destroyed version of the regular world and with a black sky and white clouds, the air is a lot thinner here. To escape from this Dimension the individual has to make their way back through the Black Star Gate. Duskuro has a heavy advantage in the alternate dimension as it is referred to as "His Home World". [b]Bunsan sa Seru: [/b]This attack is only usable by Duskuro once he has use Kyushu Suru, this attack involves to varitations to the single attack that although have a similar effect are used for different scenarios. [b]1) Kuro No Ririsu (Dark Release):[/b] This is the basic type of release in which he either with his hands or his blade releases a force of wind. [b]2) Gētoshattodaun (Gate Shutdown): [/b]This is the advanced type that releases everything that was absorbed into the Gate. The gate then closes. Both of these attacks need Blood on the blade.[/spoiler] [b][spoiler=Ability(s):][/b] [b]1) Kankō (attraction) & Tekkai (Retraction):[/b] If he has his own blood on his hands, he has the ability of Atracting and Retracting Objects that have been smudged by his blood on them towards him and then away from him, however this form of attack can't be used while there is a Dark Gate open, the number of times used the more blood is removed from his hands. [b]2) His home world, Eclipse city (Eclipse no shi ): [/b]although not apparent unless an individual is sent into the dark Gate, Eclipse City is a pit type of world in which objects absorbed by his black hole type attacks are sent to the Dark sky world where Duskuro rules. His main ability in this world is teleportation through slicing the air and moving into the rift. If someone is in the Eclipse City when the Dark Gate closes, They must create a Rift in the dimension. [b]3) Teleportation[/b]: Used only outside of battle, he can only use this inside of battle when in the walls of Eclipse City. [b]4)[/b] [b]Flight[/b] [/spoiler] [b][spoiler=Signature Attack(s):][/b] [b]Maruchigēto[/b] (Multi-Gate): This attack involves Duskuro's blood being in several (Minimum 5) different areas. With this a Single slice allows the blood to open and form several Dark Gates, more used against several enemies rather then 1. [b]Burakkuhōru no kurīchā[/b] (Black Hole Creature, Creature of the Black Hole): His ultimate ability/form. Duskuro takes the wounds on his shoulders, thighs, forearms and Head to create small trirlign black holes on those areas. His goal for this is to whilst attacking, release objects from Eclipse City, through this he also has better usage of his Attract and Retract Abilities. Some appearance changes are that his hair grows much longer and his eyes turn black with white pupils, he also gains formidable size in terms of muscular strength and general height. This form also gives him the ability to use his ability, although his sword does dissapear whilst in this form. [b]Burakkuhōru no namida [/b](Tears of the Black Hole): Only usable in his [b]Burakkuhōru no kurīchā[/b] form. Duskuro can create a black hole in front of himself and immediatly release pure back energy from it. The energy known as the "Tears" are from the energy used within Eclipse City over time. The beams come out in 2 main ways. Single shot and Volleys.[/spoiler] [b][u]Other Information[/u][/b] Don't know if it's too farfetched :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Reserves accepted. Holy, I never said characters couldn't be based on a theme. It's your character, so feel free to create who you like. I will PM all antagonists about their role in the RP, as I will the Star Children and the Normal Humans. So please, be creative and let me worry about putting them in the plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 My starknight is gonna be something that no one will be expecting. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Alright, just make sure it's acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Lol. Dun worry, it's more of a physical thing than a species, power, w/e and it doesn't make her stronger or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Alright then, but like I said, acceptable. Not "inappropriate" acceptable, "rule following" acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 [b][u]Personal Information[/u][/b] [b]Character Name:[/b] Rei Konoha [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Age: 16[/b] [b]Sexuality:[/b] Straight [b]Personality:[/b] Rei is the kind of girl who have a lot of friends and not an awful lot of enemies. She wants to preserve all life, both big and small (she even had a period where she didn't want to step on grass because she had just learned that plants were also alive. She got over it, though) Her parents wants her to be perfect, which has in turn made her uncomfortable with herself. It doesn't help that she's very slow and, frankly, a bit stupid. [b]Biography:[/b] Rei lives alone in Gorudoharu in her parents' second house, and has done so ever since her grandma passed when Rei was 15. Her parents live in Tensho City due to them owning a big medical company in the city. The reason Rei lives in Gorudoharu is due to her going to Gorudoharu High together with her friends (her parents believed that it would be easier to get a higher grade in Gorudoharu than in Tensho) During her time in Gorudoharu she has earned a lot of friends, among them some of the soon to be revealed Star Children... [b]Appearance:[/b] Rei has long, blonde hair and cute, yellow eyes. Her hair is set up in a ponytail, which also reveals that she has quite a large forehead. Her length is that of a normal female at the age of 16, and so is her weight. She's very thin, and enough curvy to atract a few looks. She usually wears a t-shirt with a pair of jeans, but like any teenage girl she rarely wears the same clothes two days in a row. While in school she wears the usual school uniform, although she usually use accessories like pendants and rings to make herself stand out a little bit more. [b][u]Combat Information[/u][/b] [spoiler=Starknight Details] [b]Personality:[/b] Rei's personality switches incredibly while she enters her Starknight form, she's quick, wise and probably the greatest difference from Rei; she doesn't care if her allies get out of the fight unharmed (although if she can help them without hindering herself she will). While out of combat she's cool, but inside she's ruthless and attacks using swift and agile moves. Her tongues is also quicker, making her come with cocky remarks more often than in her usual form. She's also very calculating and quick-minded, planning most of her moves, and thinking them through, only seconds before executing them. [b]Appearance:[/b] Her hair color grows darker, although her hair is still equally long and in a ponytail. She wears a black blindfold as it helps her highten her more usable senses like hearing, and it also helps her focus more on the powers of the foe instead of their appearance. As for armor, she wears brown, thin, leathery armor with more armor with shoulder- and elbowpads. The her upper arm and upper legs are unarmored for more agility. There's also a large mark on the back, representing the Libra constellation. [b]Weapon(s):[/b] She carries two large one-handed swords which can combine to form the Celestrian Dualblade Libra, a weapon holding awesome powers that is told to have slain countless of Zodiac's followers during Zodiac's takedown. [b]Ability(s):[/b] Temperature manipulation, and with it minor time manipulation. By heating her and her allies molecular structure the ones affected are able to move faster, and it also works the other way around by cooling and slowing. This also gives her the ability to infuse her weapons with frost and fire magic. [b]Signature Attack(s):[/b] [b]Final Judgment:[/b] Rei slows the time around the target, while speeding it up around her weapon. She then flings Libra at the target, causing enormous amounts of damage. [/spoiler] [b]Ability(s):[/b] The heat/cold manipulation persists in her human form, although it's weaker and she's not able to control it as well as in her Starknight form. It is also more emotion driven in the human form. The end was a bit rushed, so brace yourself for spelling errors. Also, I might add more attacks later. EDIT: Also posting antagonist and normal human soon. By the way, can normal humans have some sort of powers too, only from different sources than the Star Children? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 App has been reviewed. As an answer to your question, humans have NO powers at the start, I will give CERTAIN humans the chance to aquire powers at a later date as the plot continues. As of yet, there are no humans with powers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Sorry app is taking so long but I only get on the computer for minutes at a time since I need to share this computer with 2 younger siblings. Its on its way though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 No worries, I was just confused on how the antagonists were related to the story as I didn't see them mentioned much. I'll give it a shot anyway :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Just going to say, My antagonist will be...unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Pretty much finished my app if you want to take a look DK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Don't worry Holy, when your app is "finished" finsihed I'll give you more info. I'll review it when I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 No worries mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
823=chan Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 <pre class="prettyprint">[color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][[/color][color="#000000"]u[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Personal[/color] [color="#660066"]Information[/color][color="#666600"][/[/color][color="#000000"]u[/color][color="#666600"]][/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Character[/color] [color="#660066"]Name[/color][color="#666600"]: Sha[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Species[/color][color="#666600"]: Beta Demon[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Gender[/color][color="#666600"]: Male[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Age[/color][color="#666600"]: Unknown[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Sexuality[/color][color="#666600"]: Unknown[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Personality[/color][color="#666600"]: A simpleton of personality, he is almost feelingless. Despite this, he seems to be intelligent. His mind is what even comes close to a personality in his empty soul.[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Biography[/color][color="#666600"]: When a star crashed into a black hole, soon after the death of Zodiac, a small red light shone through. The black hole exploded, revealing a demonic creature. The creature ingested much matter and some dark matter. It grew to celestial proportions. The dark matter is what made it stop moving. It remains unmoving until the day a villain chooses to use it's mighty powers. But the Demon of the Dark Hole has a mind of its own.[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Appearance[/color][color="#666600"]: Over twice the size of the sun, Sha remains cloaked in darkness. Underneath, he wears red armor, red to hide inside a sun.[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][[/color][color="#000000"]u[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Combat[/color] [color="#660066"]Information[/color][color="#666600"][/[/color][color="#000000"]u[/color][color="#666600"]][/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Weapon[/color][color="#666600"]([/color][color="#000000"]s[/color][color="#666600"]): Blade arms[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Ability[/color][color="#666600"]([/color][color="#000000"]s[/color][color="#666600"]): Spirit scout: Sha's soul can manifest as a poltergeist.[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Signature[/color] [color="#660066"]Attack[/color][color="#666600"]([/color][color="#000000"]s[/color][color="#666600"]): Dark Slide: Sha slips into his Dark Matter form, becoming invisible and intangible.[/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color] [color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][[/color][color="#000000"]u[/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#660066"]Other[/color] [color="#660066"]Information[/color][color="#666600"][/[/color][color="#000000"]u[/color][color="#666600"]][/[/color][color="#000000"]b[/color][color="#666600"]][/color]</pre> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 As of now, all Apps have been removed. Unfortunately I can't PM AplhaShard, so I've no choice but to do it here. I won't review it on the acount it seems to be a very lazy attempt. Fix it and do some severe work on it. Because of the formating, I cannot even give a single recommedation on improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Since my Star Child was turned down I'll focus more on my antagonist, seeing how you seem to have a shortage of them. I'll try better with him, too. Coming later today/tomorrow/day after tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Alright, my Star Child and my FIRST villain RP role =3 [spoiler=My Starknight] [b][u]★Personal Information☆[/u][/b] [b]Character Name: [/b]Blake Oliver [b]Gender: [/b]Male [b]Age: [/b]16 [b]Sexuality: [/b]Straight [b]Personality:[/b] Blake has been homeschooled from elementary to middle school, so he doesn't exactly know how to befriend people or how to act towards friends. He is a kind-hearted guy and loves everything Japanese(he's a basically an Otaku fan). If Blake had friends, he would do whatever he could to help them out with everything. He loves drawing, be it from real life objects or something that comes from his own mind, he'd do what he can to make the drawing pop to life. His Celestrian self, however is a completely different story. [spoiler=Biography:] Blake wasn't born by a Celestrian being one of his parents, actually it was quite a different story. His father was born by Blake's grandmother and his grandfather, who was never around. This was because Blake's father was born by the Celestrian known as Delta. Blake would always ask about his grandfather, but no one would ever tell him what happened to him or what he did. Blake was born and raised in America, hence his American name, and for some reason was always fascinated by the Japanese culture ever since he was young...but this would be a good fact for him later on. From elementary school to middle school, he was homeschooled by his parents. Blake thought it was unfair that he couldn't go to school like the others, but he didn't want to get yelled at his parents for saying this. He figured that from what his father told him, school was always tough for him. Blake learned that he was always picked on and made fun of, but his father never told him WHY he was reticuled in school. Not wanting this to happen to him, he decided to just suck it up and do his homeschooling. As he was finishing up his work, he'd always go running to his computer, listening to a few Japanese songs he found. He loved listening to these songs....but one song was going to change his life. On his last year in middle school, he listened to a song known as Nagreboshi(Shooting Star) by a band named Home Made Kazoku. When it started playing, something hit him. Blake didn't know what it was, but it sounded like this song was talking straight to him. As the song continued he could almost hear a faint voice calling him, but every time he looked around for this voice, no one was there and the voice always left. Ever since, he's loved that song, but never wondering why. A year later, his father got a job in Japan, more specifically in Tensho City. This made Blake overjoyed, as he was able to go to Japan and live there. Upon their arrival in Gorudoharu, a town near Tensho City, he quickly enrolled into Gorudoharu High and began to attend classes there. Blake didn't make any friends yet, but he didn't care...they'd become his friends sooner or later...at least he thought. But every day in Tensho City and in Gorudoharu High, Blake began to hear the faint voice again...but it only saying one word: "Delta". He hasn't told anyone about this, but he was thinking about finally researching "Delta". Three days....that's how long Blake kept researching and looking for "Delta". So far his searching wasn't going very well at all, he was almost at the point of giving up. But before he did, a book from the top of the bookshelf hit his head. The title on the book was "The Myths of Stars", and thinking he had nothing else better to do, he looked through it. And there, on the second page...he found his answer. There in big bold letters was Delta, a Celestrian being who helped take down a being known as Zodiac. When he read the page, he could hear the voice again, but this time it was louder. The voice told Blake that he, was chosen to be a Starknight. He even explained that his son, Blake's father, was supposed to be the Starknight...but decided to leave this life behind him. Blake, not wanting to disappoint his grandfather, decided there and then to accept what his father had rejected: the one to hold Delta's spirit and become a Starknight.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh320/darkassassin089/animeSwordsman.jpg[/img] Blake is, as showed above, is a Caucasian male with red hair and light green eyes. He wears his favorite black jeans and jacket along with his black tank-top underneath the black jacket. On his feet he wears his favorite black converse and loves wearing the four belts around his waist(blame his father for showing him how to dress like that). He also wears some wristbands on his left wrist, given to him by his father. One his right wrist he wears two rings that his grandmother gave him, which she said belonged to his grandfather. It is the same with the necklaces around his neck, given to him by his grandmother.[/spoiler] [b][u]☆Combat Information★[/u][/b] [spoiler=★Starknight Details☆] [b]Personality:[/b] Blake within his new state, acts completely different than he usually does. He act's more like a warrior and will do whatever he can do to protect and fight for his friends and allies, no matter what. Blake's courage as a warrior has completely shown through in this form and is loving a good fight. Whenever this form is accessed, Blake can fully hear Delta's voice and only he can see his spirit when it is right next to him, however that only happens when Delta has important information to tell or how to handle certain situations. [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn257/shadowsgrasp/Swordsman.jpg[/img] When transformed into his Starknight form, Blake's hair turns from red, to pure snowy white. His eyes also turn slightly golden, as in a feral animal's eyes. On his arms are two things of armor, specifically the only remaining armor from Delta. His black jacket changes into a white one, while his pants stay black. Blake's black tank-top has changed into a dark blue one, which only the bottom part can be seen, since his jacket is closed up. His Converse have now changed into combat boots(or the shoes the other Starknights wear...whatever). Around his neck, is a combined version of the necklaces Blake wore before. Upon his back, sits his chosen weapon, left by his grandfather Delta to aid him in battle.[/spoiler] [b]Weapon(s):[/b] At Blake's disposal, is a weapon known as Starlight's Key. It appears to just be a key, but it is as big as a regular sword. This blade, was said to be the main weapon Delta himself, unfortunately it was lost after Zodiac attacked Delta. Starlight's Key takes a resemblance to Blake's armor, with colors of white, black, blue, and gray all on the weapon. Only Blake can wield this weapon and when brought into the heat of battle, the key becomes ungulfed with electricity, so when he strikes his enemy/opponent a strong electrical current is sent through their bodies. [spoiler=A recolored version of this][img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/images/large/indyart/games/Keyblade_-_Redemption.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [b]Ability(s):[/b] -[i][b]Twin Star[/b]:[/i] Blake is able to make a clone, but only by being in perfect synchronization with the spirit of Delta. When the clone is created, the two Starknights take the blades in hand and confuse the enemy on which one is the real one and which one is the clone. The way for the clone to be done with is by landing a good solid hit on the original. -[i][b]Starlight Cannon[/b][/i][i]: [/i]Blake puts his two hands in front of him, in a triangle shape completely concentrating. When he is fully concentrated, he releases from the triangle shape an energy blast that sparkles like the stars in the sky. The opponent would either be stunned by the attack, or unable to move for a while. -[i][b]Star Flash[/b]:[/i] When in a bind, Blake snaps his fingers and a bright flash of light is seen. This will cause temporary blindness to the opponent. Blake can then either escape or fight his opponent while his opponent's sight isn't exactly well. -[i][b]Full Moon's Bomber[/b]:[/i] Jumps into the air and then raises both hands into the air, soon showing a moon like energy ball above his head(the energy comes from creature's life energy. A different Spirit Bomb if you will). Before long, Blake will throw it at his opponent at full speed. [b]Signature Attack(s):[/b] -[i][b]Starlight's Call[/b]: [/i]Blake raises his left hand and small stars(not real ones but these are made up of people's dreams and wishes) start gathering in his hand causing them to merge into a sphere. Then he jumps back and throws the sphere at his opponent. This would then cause the sphere to explode when it nears the target, though this works only every once in a while. -[i][b]Blade Rush - Delta[/b]: [/i]With Starlight's Key in hand, Blake watches as he sees Delta's spirit merge with the blade. When it does, it becomes and energy like blade. He then is able to rush towards his opponent's at lightning fast speed and sends a series of five slashes at his opponent. It is only able to be used once in battle. -[i][b]Delta Orion[/b]:[/i] Blake puts his left hand on his chest, his armor glowing tremendously. His armor becomes like a ninja outfit and a helmet mask quickly appears on his head. Then he begins to rush towards his opponent and begins to strike them with lightning fast punches and kicks. He finishes this fast barrage of attacks by sending a huge shockwave caused by his fist(this shockwave being similar to Starlight's Call). [/spoiler] [b]Ability(s):[/b] Blake will is stronger, mainly cause of the will that Delta had has merged with his own. At times when others trying to break Blake's will, he has never given up...making his will one of his greatest traits. While the other Star Children may have strength and agility, he has his will...and this would be all thanks to his grandfather's spirit. [b][u]☆Other Information★[/u][/b] Blake is the only one of the Star Children to have the ability to hear and see the Celestrian spirits they have. It isn't a type of Persona Curse, however more like a hidden gift that the Celestrians had given to him. Blake has even called this ability "The Celestrian Gift", but he kind of enjoys seeing and talking with his grandfather's spirit...as he didn't get much time to talk to him when he was younger. [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Y80rc-wlIE"]Blake's Theme[/url] [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NcCrHZAKfPI"]Blake the Starknight Theme[/url][/spoiler] [spoiler=My Villain] [b][u]Personal Information[/u][/b] [b]Character Name: [/b]Drago [b]Species: [/b]Human(But has reptilian DNA inside him) [b]Gender: [/b]Male [b]Age: [/b]25 [b]Sexuality: [/b]Straight [b]Personality:[/b] Drago used to be a kind and loving soul when he was younger...but ever since that day, he's become a former shell of who he used to be. He has become a heartless man, causing pain and suffering wherever he goes. Drago, along with him being heartless, is also a sadistic person with his mind all twisted up inside. That was either a side-effect of the testing...or his true nature coming out. Either way, he isn't a very friendly type of person... [spoiler=Biography:] Drago, or Jason Martinez as he was once called, lived a normal life as normal as the son of two genetic scientists can be. His parents worked for a company known only as Azure Incorporated. His parents specialized in the genetics of reptilian DNA, but they were all forced to use human test subjects to test the company's new idea: injecting the genetic DNA of animals into human's blood....causing them to become hybrids. Jason's parents refused to do this, but they were forced to, and they were ordered to test this on their only son. Jason was terrified, but when the procedure was complete...he had reptilian scales on his body, crocodile teeth, as well as the eyes of one of the lizards in myths: a dragon. The years pass and Azure Incorporated kept Jason away from his family, doing a series of tests on him. But, with each passing year, Jason began to have a deep rooted hate towards these people. And when he turned twenty, is when his anger enraged. His parents were finally wanting Jason to come back home with them, but the CEO of Azure decided something else, eliminate the two to keep Jason from having any feelings for them. And when Jason heard about this, he couldn't control himself. He went on a rampage and destroyed everything in the labs and in the Azure Inc. building. After the dust settled, Jason was alone and was branded a freak. He looked at an outfit that the Azure CEO had and put it on, now referring to himself as Drago. At twenty-five Drago had finally decided to head to Japan to reek some havoc there. There he heard about a legend known as the Celestrians and Zodiac. He became interested in this Zodiac person, hoping, whenever he returned to this world...that he would help him in his revenge.[/spoiler] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][spoiler=Appearance:][/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][img]http://th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/130/e/0/chaser_john_doe_on_fence_by_monkzaon-d3g0dd9.png[/img][/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Drago hides his scaly skin on his body with the black pants and shirt. Upon his feet, he wears a matching pair of boots and gloves, which match his mask. This white mask keeps his scaly face and crocodile teeth hidden from everyone, until his animal instincts kick in big time. Around his neck is a red scarf-like cloth that makes the outfit above look a little bit more frightening. At night, when Drago hides himself in this red scarf, it almost appears like he has disappeared from sight. Around his waist, he has his twin pistols, reloading magazines, and an assortment of knives.[/spoiler][/font] [b][u]Combat Information[/u][/b] [b]Weapon(s): [/b] -Twin Walther PPS 9. MM Pistols -Knives [b]Ability(s):[/b] -Tough skin -Strength of a Crocodile/Alligator -Swimming (As in a Crocodile) -Dragon Transformation (Has yet to be mastered) [b]Signature Attack(s):[/b] -[i][b]Bullet Maelstrom[/b]:[/i] Drago takes his twin pistols and then jumps into the air and shoots all the rounds in the magazines, only to swiftly reload them and do the same thing. This will create a huge bullet storm hitting all his opponent's on sight. -[i][b]Feed The Croc[/b]:[/i] When he is out of options, he will rush towards his opponents and quickly knock them to the ground. If he keeps it going, the animal instinct of the reptilian DNA will kick in and he'll take his mask off, showing his crocodile teeth and feast on his opponent(this one is the gruesome attack ^^; ). [b][u]Other Information[/u][/b] [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0lSULMdPHac"]Drago's Theme[/url][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Alright then Aesirson, up to you. Chaos, I've seen the fixes and so your apps are indeed accepted...excpet one small detail (sorry, even I didn't spot this one): All Starknights are age 16. Would you like me to change the detail, or do you want to modify your app accordingly? Your antagonist is great though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 I honestly didn't see that part ^^; I edited the problem. And I'm glad you like my villain ^^ I hope to be a [s]good[/s] bad one >=3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 [b][u]Personal Information[/u][/b] [b]Character Name:[/b] Carnifex [b]Species:[/b] A freak of nature, previously Celestrian [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Age:[/b] Older than the post-Big Bang universe [b]Sexuality:[/b] Asexual [b]Personality:[/b] Once noble and full of justice, Carnifex has been exposed to so much evil that he is now blinded by hatred and rage. He does still have a sense of justice, and he will eliminate evil when he finds it. Too bad his view on evil isn't the same as most humans and other sentinent beings. While he is in no way stupid, he isn't a very good diplomat, leading him to often resort to the violent way. The way he likes it. He's a bestial creature, and as an animal he always hungers, but he does still have a sense of nobility and will refuse to kill children and women unless it is absolutely necessary for his survival. He pledges loyalty to no one, and he is his own master, and Zodiac is the only being in the universe that he fears. [b]Biography:[/b] Carnifex was once a normal Celestrian, and quite a good one too. He was a friend of everyone, and he was one of Zodiac's most trusted generals. He was a peacekeeper, eliminating any evil threat to the universal peace. He was loyal to Zodiac, his God, and when the rebellion started, his honor forced him to slay many of his friends to defend his master. This eventually led to his fall into madness, which didn't only take it's toll on his mind, but also his appearance. Some speculated he was taken over by demons, resulting in his bestial appearance, other says it was a "boon" from Zodiac to make him stronger. Nevertheless, everyone agreed that he was no longer natural. After Zodiac's death, Carnifex faced a similar, yet not same, fate as the other Celestrians, he was incased into a giant block of ice, namely one of the moons of Pluto. Zodiac incased him to keep him until his eventual return, and now that Zodiac reawakens so does Carnifex, but Carnifex isn't too happy at his former master for locking him up for so long... [b]Appearance:[/b] Standing at an impressive 10 feet (with 18 feet from the top of his nose to the tip of his tail) and weighing 1549 pounds, Carnifex is one big force to be reckoned with. The curse laid upon him has taken his entire humanity away, and he is now a tremendous, giant, humanoid crocdile that would get any sane person running for their lives at the very sight of Carnifex' being. His skin is white as marble and his eyes brun red with fury. He is equipped with metallic armor that covers most of his body except the head and the tail. The back of his armor holds a text of Celestrian writing telling of a giant being akin to the leviathan of the holy Bible that brings justice to the wicked, referencing Carnifex himself. [spoiler=Image][img]http://images.wikia.com/leagueoflegends/images/b/bb/Renekton_GalacticSkin_Ch.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [b][u]Combat Information[/u][/b] [b]Weapon(s):[/b] As you can see in the image above, Carnifex carries a giant blade that has three hilts for maximum ergonomic advantage. It is also magically infused with Celestrian runes, causing it to restore life energy to the wielder everytime its blade tastes blood. [b]Ability(s):[/b] [u]Unbreath:[/u] As an immortal being, Carnifex have no use of breathing and can thus survive both underwater and in space. [u]Animalistic Rage:[/u] He is able to smell blood from miles away, and is also able to shut down the still human parts of his brain to feel no remorse. [b]Signature Attack(s):[/b] [u]The Silence of the Lambs:[/u] Carnifex spins around, damaging everyone around him using his blade and tail to do maximum damage, and also heal himself due to the nature of his blade. [u]Manhunter:[/u] Carnifex leaps towards the enemy, aiming to devour them whole with his majextic jaws. [u]Red Dragon:[/u] An evolved form of his animalistic rage, the blood within Carnifex boils and turns him into a tremendous killing machine reeking of poisonous blood gas. I hope this one pleases you more than my Satr Child application. G'night! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 A crocodile man....another reptilian guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Updated. Added Chaos' characters and a new antagonist of mine (other antagonists, this character is significant for your roleplaying experience.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted October 19, 2011 Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 Oh! I didn't notice you aslo had a reptilian guy... Territory fights in the making! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted October 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2011 No worries, there was no contradiction. Your character is accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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