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[spoiler=Prologue]Eons ago, long before Earth was born, there was only chaos in the universe known as the Maelstrom. The Maelstrom was only a giant vortex of the nine elements, Earth, Wind, Fire, Water, Ice, Metal, Wood, Lightning, Light and Darkness (know that Light and Darkness were one at this time)

Undecidable time passed until a shard of these elemnts broke lose from the vortex and gave birth to nine deities, each one incarnating one of the nine elements. The nine deities lived in peace, and together they used their powers to create five worlds, Earth, Yggdrasil, Abydos, Shambhala and Atlantis.

The five gave life to these worlds by inhabiting them with creatures that by time evolved into great civilizations. But reality is cruel, and peace cannot be kept forever, and evil individuals wanted to rule the five worlds, so the nine created the Realmjumpers. The Realmjumpers are the peacekeepers of the five worlds, armed with an elemental ring that gives them the power to "jump" between the five worlds.

Some time later, the conflicting powers within the ninth deity, the lord of Light and Darkness, finally killed him, and so the rings of his element stopped functioning. However, with the death of the ninth deity, two new ones were born; the Twin Dragons of Twilight, Umbrasos and Lumina. They promised the ex-Realmjumpers their powers returned, but in return they would have to serve Umbrasos or Lumina. Civil War broke out as Light and Darkness clashed.

There was no other way out for the eight remaining sane deities than to create a sixth world, Khaowald, and banish the twin dragons and their followers to it. Two thousand years have passed since then, and the Realmjumpers keep on fighting evil...[/spoiler][spoiler=Plot]You're a Realmjumper Recruit, or one of the three Captains taking care of the recruits. This is your trial, but something is about to happen...[/spoiler][spoiler=Application][code][b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b] (Recruits can be of any age between 18-30, Captains should regularly be older than 25, at least)
[b]Rank:[/b] (Recruit or Captain)
[spoiler=[b]Appearance[/b]][i]Body Type:[/i]

[i]Head:[/i]

[i]Clothing:[/i]

[i]Accessories:[/i][/spoiler] (Your character doesn't have to be human, but it have to be humanoid. Non-human characters cannot be from Earth, but human character isn't restricted to Earth)
[b]Personality:[/b] (Be detailed)

[b]Homeworld: [/b](Earth, Yggdrasil, Abydos, Shmbhala or Atlantis. You can't be from Khaowald)
[b]History:[/b]
[b]Ring Element: [/b](What element (Earth, Wind, Fire, Water, Ice, Metal, Wood or Lightning) does your ring and powers belong to.)
[b]Combat Style: [/b](How does the character fight? How does he use his ring powers?)[/code]

Disclaimer: This app was shamelessly stolen from the RP Character Creation Guide, but slightly edited.[/spoiler][spoiler=Rules]1. My word is law.
2. If I have to warn you thrice you're out.
3. Don't beg to have Light or Darkness as your elements. The opportunity might come later if the RP goes that far.
4. Have fun.[/spoiler]

Did I forget anything? Anyway, please join? :3

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You don't have to reserve ring elements ;)

Reserved.

EDIT: Also, I forgot to mention this takes place in present time. The architecture of the four other worlds are based on whatever their name is based, but they have the same biomes as Earth has (for example, Yggdrasil has deserts, jungles, tundras etc)

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<pre class="prettyprint" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 8px; padding-right: 8px; padding-bottom: 8px; padding-left: 8px; background-image: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); border-top-width: 1px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-left-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; border-left-style: solid; border-top-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); border-right-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); border-bottom-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); border-left-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); overflow-x: auto; overflow-y: auto; font-size: 11px; line-height: 18px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; ">[color=#660066][Spoiler=My App!]Name[/color][color=#666600]:Suki Narimora[/color][color=#660066]Gender[/color][color=#666600]:Male[/color][color=#660066]Age[/color][color=#666600]:21[/color][color=#660066]Rank[/color][color=#666600]:Recruit[/color][Spoiler=Apperance][url="http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Itachi&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1016&bih=633&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=R9F41qKd-YdlHM:&imgrefurl=http://www.absoluteanime.com/naruto/itachi.htm&docid=lAQuhKR416_IVM&w=640&h=480&ei=8GuUTs6KDaXlsQLWtdDwAQ&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=460&page=1&tbnh=110&tbnw=145&start=0&ndsp=16&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0&tx=69&ty=44"]http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Itachi&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1016&bih=633&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=R9F41qKd-YdlHM:&imgrefurl=http://www.absoluteanime.com/naruto/itachi.htm&docid=lAQuhKR416_IVM&w=640&h=480&ei=8GuUTs6KDaXlsQLWtdDwAQ&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=460&page=1&tbnh=110&tbnw=145&start=0&ndsp=16&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0&tx=69&ty=44[/url][/spoiler][color=#660066] Personality[/color][color=#666600]:Suki is serious-like,he isn't very social,and always fights lonesome,besides that people say that [/color]he has no feelings,he does,he just doesn't show them,especially after what happend to his parents.[color=#000000] [/color][color=#660066]Homeworld[/color][color=#666600]:Earth[/color][color=#008800] History: Suki found his ring inside a meteor when he was walking about,how he survived he had NO IDEA.Before that lots of bad things happend to him.He went to visit his parents 1 week before he turned into a recruit and found a man licking the blood off his Knife he went to find his parents he found them in the basement DEAD,Suki got an old Antique Chain Sickle and killed the man but the man instead of bleeding,he turned into shadows...The Man said "Work For the Dark Dragon of Twillight,you will be greatly rewarded,even your parents back.Itachi was stuck,he could bring his parents back?!He knew that he had to refuse with the crazy smile on his face. "No...I will not work for you,even if you can bring my parents back!!" The shadows disappeared. That was Day 1. The 2nd 3rd and 4th day, The same thing happend to him,he felt pain in his sleep "Die! Die!" said the voice laughing raspily. Every Morning he would wake up with blood on his arms or neck.Well Day 5 and 6 might have been the best so far,all he got was dreams exactly like the few days before except it was only a chain whip,wait a CHAIN WHIPIT DIDN'T EVEN HURT HIM!Looks like he got used to pain,and it did not hurt him,well Day 7 when he saw the meteor with the ring in it,he picked it up and put it on.He got teleported to the base of the Recruits,A Captain toldhim "Serve us against the Fight against the Dark Dragon of Twillight." Suki accepted. So now he is a recruitliving alone,not social,and so on....Ring Element: Lightning[b]Combat Style:Dodging like its no challange,analyzing the opponents movements,then attacking.Can also resist pain cause of his torturing dreams.[/spoiler]Hope i'm accepted this looks BEAST![/color]</pre>

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<pre class="prettyprint" style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 8px; padding-right: 8px; padding-bottom: 8px; padding-left: 8px; background-image: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); border-top-width: 1px; border-right-width: 1px; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-left-width: 1px; border-top-style: solid; border-right-style: solid; border-bottom-style: solid; border-left-style: solid; border-top-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); border-right-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); border-bottom-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); border-left-color: rgb(209, 220, 232); overflow-x: auto; overflow-y: auto; font-size: 11px; line-height: 18px; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; ">[color=#660066][Spoiler=My App!]Name[/color][color=#666600]:Suki Narimora[/color][color=#660066]Gender[/color][color=#666600]:Male[/color][color=#660066]Age[/color][color=#666600]:21[/color][color=#660066]Rank[/color][color=#666600]:Recruit[/color][Spoiler=Apperance][url="http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Itachi&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1016&bih=633&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=R9F41qKd-YdlHM:&imgrefurl=http://www.absoluteanime.com/naruto/itachi.htm&docid=lAQuhKR416_IVM&w=640&h=480&ei=8GuUTs6KDaXlsQLWtdDwAQ&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=460&page=1&tbnh=110&tbnw=145&start=0&ndsp=16&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0&tx=69&ty=44"]http://www.google.co...s:0&tx=69&ty=44[/url][/spoiler][color=#660066] Personality[/color][color=#666600]:Suki is serious-like,he isn't very social,and always fights lonesome,besides that people say that [/color]he has no feelings,he does,he just doesn't show them,especially after what happend to his parents.[color=#000000] [/color][color=#660066]Homeworld[/color][color=#666600]:Earth[/color][color=#008800] History: Suki found his ring inside a meteor when he was walking about,how he survived he had NO IDEA.Before that lots of bad things happend to him.He went to visit his parents 1 week before he turned into a recruit and found a man licking the blood off his Knife he went to find his parents he found them in the basement DEAD,Suki got an old Antique Chain Sickle and killed the man but the man instead of bleeding,he turned into shadows...The Man said "Work For the Dark Dragon of Twillight,you will be greatly rewarded,even your parents back.Itachi was stuck,he could bring his parents back?!He knew that he had to refuse with the crazy smile on his face. "No...I will not work for you,even if you can bring my parents back!!" The shadows disappeared. That was Day 1. The 2nd 3rd and 4th day, The same thing happend to him,he felt pain in his sleep "Die! Die!" said the voice laughing raspily. Every Morning he would wake up with blood on his arms or neck.Well Day 5 and 6 might have been the best so far,all he got was dreams exactly like the few days before except it was only a chain whip,wait a CHAIN WHIPIT DIDN'T EVEN HURT HIM!Looks like he got used to pain,and it did not hurt him,well Day 7 when he saw the meteor with the ring in it,he picked it up and put it on.He got teleported to the base of the Recruits,A Captain toldhim "Serve us against the Fight against the Dark Dragon of Twillight." Suki accepted. So now he is a recruitliving alone,not social,and so on....Ring Element: Lightning[b]Combat Style:Dodging like its no challange,analyzing the opponents movements,then attacking.Can also resist pain cause of his torturing dreams.[/spoiler]Hope i'm accepted this looks BEAST![/color]</pre>
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@Fluteman: The ring is indeed what gives you power. This doesn't mean that you may have minor powers (like telepathy) that are not granted by the ring.

@Aragon: Messy. If you fix it to not be all purple and green and make it not hurt my eyes I'll take a closer look. Also I don't want pictures for appearance.

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[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Name:[/b] Eurus Zephyr[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Gender:[/b] Male[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Age:[/b] 18[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Rank:[/b] Recruit[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][spoiler=[b]Appearance[/b]][i]Body Type:[/i] Average to slightly built.[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][i]Head:[/i] Just a normal human with hazel-green eyes, and blond hair parted on the left.[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][i]Clothing:[/i] A black, sleeveless, hooded trench coat that ends at the back of his knees. A forest green shirt and blue jeans. Usually wears boots.[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][i]Accessories:[/i] A flute. Possibly a spear, a fan, or a sword later on.[/spoiler][/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Personality:[/b] Eurus is the silent type. In high school, he didn’t really hang out with anyone. He never went to sports games unless it was with the band because he deemed them boring and pointless. If he thinks it is pointless, there is an extremely high possibility that he won’t do it. He is an easy-going guy that will take things as they come.[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Homeworld:[/b] Earth[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]History:[/b] Growing up was tough for Eurus. As a child, he always had a strange sense of someone watching him all the time. His paranoia eventually got the best of him. He decided to take martial arts, just in case. After high school, the paranoia eased a little, but he still had that feeling that he was being watched. A few weeks after graduation, he woke up flying through the air. When he looked around, he saw that he was wearing his trench coat and a green shirt that he had never seen before. He realized that he didn’t feel like he was being watched anymore and thought “I’m being abducted. I know it.” He felt an odd sensation on his right hand and when he looked at it, he saw that he was wearing a ring. “This can’t be right. Where did this ring come from?” At that moment, the ring “showed” him the power that it contained and the reason that he was chosen. When the vision was over, he was standing in the headquarters of the Realmjumpers with a captain/recruiter heading towards him.[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Ring Element:[/b] Wind[/color][/font][/size]
[size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][color=#222222][b]Combat Style:[/b] His power to command the wind lead him to prefer a style that kept his opponent away from him. However, he will use the Martial arts to defend himself. (Think of him as a modern-day air-bender from “Avatar: The Last Airbender”. Not the piece-of-crap movie “The Last Airbender” by M. Night Shyamalon.)[/color][/font][/size]

[font=times new roman,times,serif]I think I fixed it now. How's look?[/font]

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There's only some minor errors in your app which are easily fixed.

1. That he have minor control over winds, or that winds seems to behave oddly around him, while not wearing his ring is fine, but you can hardly fight using wind powers without your ring equipped. Keep that in mind.

2. The Realmjumpers, as an organization, are old. Very old. Earth is the only one of the five worlds that have no knowledge of their existence except for the few Realmjumpers that come from Earth. Also, people don't join the Realmjumpers, the deities sends the rings to whoever they find worthy.

Also, the rings are semi-sentinent so they are used to explain what is going on when a person is granted it.

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I got tired of looking at Aragon's app. I couldn't help it. I had to fix it. I fixed his grammar and spelling, too. It looks much better now. You're welcome. I don't know how to physically describe Itachi Uchiha, so I left the picture. If you want it changed, PM me so I can fix that, too.


[b]Name:[/b] Suki Narimora
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Age:[/b] 21
[b]Rank:[/b] Recruit
[spoiler=[b]Appearance[/b]][url="http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Itachi&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1016&bih=633&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=R9F41qKd-YdlHM:&imgrefurl=http://www.absoluteanime.com/naruto/itachi.htm&docid=lAQuhKR416_IVM&w=640&h=480&ei=8GuUTs6KDaXlsQLWtdDwAQ&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=460&page=1&tbnh=110&tbnw=145&start=0&ndsp=16&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0&tx=69&ty=44"]http://www.google.co...s:0&tx=69&ty=44[/url][/spoiler]
[b]Personality:[/b] Suki is serious-like, he isn't very social, and always fights lonesome, besides that people say that he has no feelings, he does, he just doesn't show them, especially after what happened to his parents.
[b]Homeworld:[/b] Earth
[b]History:[/b] Suki found his ring inside a meteor when he was walking about, how he survived he had NO IDEA. Before that lots of bad things happened to him. He went to visit his parents 1 week before he turned into a recruit and found a man licking the blood off his Knife he went to find his parents he found them in the basement DEAD, Suki got an old Antique Chain Sickle and killed the man but the man instead of bleeding, he turned into shadows. The Man said "Work For the Dark Dragon of Twilight, you will be greatly rewarded. Even your parents can be brought back. Suki was stuck; he could bring his parents back?! He knew that he had to refuse with the crazy smile on his face. "No. I will not work for you, even if you can bring my parents back!!" The shadows disappeared. That was Day 1. The 2[sup]nd[/sup], 3[sup]rd[/sup], and 4[sup]th[/sup] day, the same thing happened to him; he felt pain in his sleep "Die! Die!" said the laughing, raspy voice. Every morning, he would wake up with blood on his arms or neck. Days 5 and 6 might have been the best so far, all he got was dreams exactly like the few days before except it was only a chain whip, wait a CHAIN WHIP; IT DIDN'T EVEN HURT HIM! It had seemed like he got used to pain, and it did not hurt him, on Day 7, when he saw the meteor with the ring in it. He picked it up and put it on. He got teleported to the base of the Recruits. A Captain told him "Serve us in the Fight against the Dark Dragon of Twilight." Suki accepted. So now he is a recruit living alone, not social, and so on . . . .
[b]Ring Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Combat Style:[/b] Dodging like it’s no challenge, analyzing the opponents’ movements, then attacking. He can also resist pain because of his torturing dreams.

I wanna know why he just put the ring on without thinking about it.

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