jordan90 Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 experimenting with a new style. had a nice idea for the second but kinda gayed up the execution [img]http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp188/convikted_designs/letsgettheseteenheartsbeatingfaster-2.png[/img] [IMG]http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp188/convikted_designs/letsgettheseteenheartsbeatingfaster-3.png[/IMG] [img]http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp188/convikted_designs/isitstillmethatmakesyousweat2.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 I am not really digging the first one that much for some reason. It seems to be too clustered with effects and the light needs work. The blue on the top of the render is kind of LQ. The text is okay, but could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 [color=#00ff00][font=comic sans ms,cursive]The style looks like a good idea, but you need to use better colors...on the top tag the blue along with the red and yellow looks awful, and in the second the focal is nearly invisible, as it's all grey... try to use better combinations of colors, obey the rule of thirds and familiarise yourself with Gmaps...[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 the rule of the thirds has been maintained: [img]http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/pp188/convikted_designs/rott.png[/img] thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 second one reminds me of Blane's tags. Its not bad just not interesting enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 thats what i thought too ken, but its getting some love on a few other forums so i guess i did something right. getting the colours right on the first will be the death of me though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 I love your style and tags. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 As Ken said, thought right away of Blane's tags. The dripping yellow orbs and s***. The first one just has some bad lighting and effect execution. The second one just needs something extra to make it pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jordan90 Posted October 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 sannkksss fellas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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