.:Blu:. Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 Alright, so I'm gonna say Keto's accepted. Don't know about kinglion though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 [quote name='kinglion73' timestamp='1317683719' post='5558408'] this is every thing but short beginings Username: kinglion73 RP Name: Soren Ragus Race: shinigami Position/Rank: Captain of Squad 11 Age: 133 appears 22 Personality: He is one of the more relaxed captain’s in all the thirteen court guard squad. In side of combat he seems like he has no care. He has access to his bankai but due to the unspoken rule of squad 11 he never pulls out his bankai. Unlike captains before him he won’t just try to overpower his enemy but he’ll still fight people straight up. He never uses both of his zampactos unless he has to. He also slacks on his captain duties at times. Appearance: He has crimson red eyes that look nonchalant 90 percent of the time. He has an average build to him at first glance you would even think of him as a captain let alone captain of squad 11. He has long laid down green hair that go down to the bottom of his neck. He does have some battle wounds on his chest and back from previous battles. Bio: He grew up in the rukan district as a drifter. He spent his time as a youth getting in to fights and running away from soul reaper. He soon attempted several time to get in to the shinigami academy. He finally made it in the academey and almost failed out due to his laid back style. When he got out of the academy, he was recommended to squad eleven while in his squad he raised himself through the ranks. He soon made it to 1st lieutenant when he realized that he could beat him for his spot. Their fight lasted 13 hours straight till soren drew his second sword which no one knew he had because he had never took it out to use. After that fight he became the captain, he started carrying his second sword. Zanpakuto Name: fenikkusu sousei (phoenix twins) Zanpakuto Appearance: Dual swords stashed on both sides of his body. The sword he uses with his left hand has a dark red and black handle while the other has an army green and white handle. The both swords have handle’s hilt is shaped like a bird. Both swords blades look exactly the same. Shikai Release Phrase: flying flames Shikai Appearance: the blades of his swords turn in to glowing red wing blades. The wings look like that of a bird each feather is a blade. The swords shred not cut like the original form. Shikai Abilities: The blade upgrades his power and his speed. The feathers also red hot blades the sheared all they touch. Bankai Release Phrase: Molten destruction doragon Bankai Appearance: it becomes a dual bladed sword. One of the blades is a black dragon while the other is a red dragon. he also has flaming feathers circling around him in an x formation around him. He also grows a flame cape. Bankai Abilities: He can use his mind to control the feathers flying around him. The Feathers can explode when soren tells them too. The feathers are as fast as Soren When he is using his shinkai. He can also use fire in fused with his blades. He also can use his duel blades to control a fire dragon that come out of when his eyes go completely red. Abilities: he is one of the faster captains to go along with his immense power. He knows no kidos because of the fact the squad he’s in. [spoiler=Short Beginning] “Captain when are you’re going to be late for sparing if you don’t get up a move.” Soren looked up at his lieutenant standing over him. “ I know that I was just about to leave if that’s ok with you.” He then stood up and moved as fast as he could to the squad eleven barrack’s training ground. When he got there he saw his third seat holding his zanpakuto. “You know what? I’m challenging you for your seat captain.” The third seat said with a intensity soren had never seen from him in a long time. Soren drew one of his swords and nodded in acceptance of the challenge. The lieutenant charged at him with all he had. Soren was easily able to block his attack with ease. “You know your epically slow when it comes to attacking” Soren said as hit him in the head with his handle. The lieutenant was even angry that Soren was holding back. “Why do you hold back!” he yelled that as he activated his shikai. Soren just smiled as he charged at him again. This time he had a giant blade in his hand. Soren pulled out his other sword and was able to block it. Soren then realized that it was almost time for the captain’s meeting. “ I guess I’ll end it here flying flame fenikkusu sousei.” A fed flash of light almost blinded every one watching. When the light subsided, the lieutenant was passed out on the ground as soren looked around an told them that’s what happens to the weak. Soren then hurried to the captain’s meeting at full haste. [/spoiler] [/quote] [quote name='kinglion73' timestamp='1317683719' post='5558408'] this is every thing but short beginings Username: kinglion73 RP Name: Soren Ragus Race: shinigami Position/Rank: Captain of Squad 11 Age: 133 appears 22 Personality: He is one of the more relaxed captain’s in all the thirteen court guard squad. In side of combat he seems like he has no care. He has access to his bankai but due to the unspoken rule of squad 11 he never pulls out his bankai. Unlike captains before him he won’t just try to overpower his enemy but he’ll still fight people straight up. He never uses both of his zampactos unless he has to. He also slacks on his captain duties at times. Appearance: He has crimson red eyes that look nonchalant 90 percent of the time. He has an average build to him at first glance you would even think of him as a captain let alone captain of squad 11. He has long laid down green hair that go down to the bottom of his neck. He does have some battle wounds on his chest and back from previous battles. Bio: He grew up in the rukan district as a drifter. He spent his time as a youth getting in to fights and running away from soul reaper. He soon attempted several time to get in to the shinigami academy. He finally made it in the academey and almost failed out due to his laid back style. When he got out of the academy, he was recommended to squad eleven while in his squad he raised himself through the ranks. He soon made it to 1st lieutenant when he realized that he could beat him for his spot. Their fight lasted 13 hours straight till soren drew his second sword which no one knew he had because he had never took it out to use. After that fight he became the captain, he started carrying his second sword. Zanpakuto Name: fenikkusu sousei (phoenix twins) Zanpakuto Appearance: Dual swords stashed on both sides of his body. The sword he uses with his left hand has a dark red and black handle while the other has an army green and white handle. The both swords have handle’s hilt is shaped like a bird. Both swords blades look exactly the same. Shikai Release Phrase: flying flames Shikai Appearance: the blades of his swords turn in to glowing red wing blades. The wings look like that of a bird each feather is a blade. The swords shred not cut like the original form. Shikai Abilities: The blade upgrades his power and his speed. The feathers also red hot blades the sheared all they touch. Bankai Release Phrase: Molten destruction doragon Bankai Appearance: it becomes a dual bladed sword. One of the blades is a black dragon while the other is a red dragon. he also has flaming feathers circling around him in an x formation around him. He also grows a flame cape. Bankai Abilities: He can use his mind to control the feathers flying around him. The Feathers can explode when soren tells them too. The feathers are as fast as Soren When he is using his shinkai. He can also use fire in fused with his blades. He also can use his duel blades to control a fire dragon that come out of when his eyes go completely red. Abilities: he is one of the faster captains to go along with his immense power. He knows no kidos because of the fact the squad he’s in. [spoiler=Short Beginning] “Captain when are you’re going to be late for sparing if you don’t get up a move.” Soren looked up at his lieutenant standing over him. “ I know that I was just about to leave if that’s ok with you.” He then stood up and moved as fast as he could to the squad eleven barrack’s training ground. When he got there he saw his third seat holding his zanpakuto. “You know what? I’m challenging you for your seat captain.” The third seat said with a intensity soren had never seen from him in a long time. Soren drew one of his swords and nodded in acceptance of the challenge. The lieutenant charged at him with all he had. Soren was easily able to block his attack with ease. “You know your epically slow when it comes to attacking” Soren said as hit him in the head with his handle. The lieutenant was even angry that Soren was holding back. “Why do you hold back!” he yelled that as he activated his shikai. Soren just smiled as he charged at him again. This time he had a giant blade in his hand. Soren pulled out his other sword and was able to block it. Soren then realized that it was almost time for the captain’s meeting. “ I guess I’ll end it here flying flame fenikkusu sousei.” A fed flash of light almost blinded every one watching. When the light subsided, the lieutenant was passed out on the ground as soren looked around an told them that’s what happens to the weak. Soren then hurried to the captain’s meeting at full haste. [/spoiler] [/quote] i think thats it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 I feel like declining the app. Consistency of use of something is indeed a great way to limit the Op'd-ness of it. However, Captains already have strict rules of when or when they are not allowed to release their bankai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreyCat Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 Isn't Kenpachi the title of the 11th squad leader? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 he didn't relese his banki just shinkai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 Only way someone becomes captain of Squad Eleven is by Killing the previous captain. All the preceding captains of Squad Eleven have carried the title "Kenpachi". You earn the title "Kenpachi" by killing the person carrying it. Short answer, yes. "Kenpachi" is the title of the Squad Eleven Captain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 Yes. but don't forget, it's been some time and SSD has stated along with blu that the captain of each squad can chose what is going on in them. I am still declining the app however due to the terms I have stated before. If the rules are the same as in other RP's, I believe both blu and SSD are allowed to Veto my choice by agreeing to accept you on their own. I hope no one goes thinking that I'm declining Kinglion just because I feel like it. There is a reason here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 5, 2011 Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 I all you said was captions couldn't use bankai with out permission. But he hasn't users his bankai in the entire app Jr used shinkai to over power a weakling in his squad who pulled out shinkai on him trying to get his seat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 6, 2011 Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 No. I Said something much much different. I think you'd benifet more if you were to look back and reread the situation. If I were to simply retype it... Well... that's boring XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunderas Posted October 6, 2011 Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 Hey King I also noticed that you switched you're challenger from the third seat to the lieutenant. And why would a Captain even need to go shikai when the opponent thats not even close to captain level goes into shikai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Bump. Please don't let this die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 finished i think.. ^^' ik late xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 I've been waiting for someone to reply. If the Owner of this RP is so indifferent on current topics of this OOC, then he best be getting his ass in gear or this won't be getting anywhere. Bumping the thread in hopes that he'll come back won't help anyone if later down the road he's unresponsive again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Altair's life has him pretty occupied. He's barely able to post anywhere.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 SSD would make the time to respond to us about the problem if he was going to be unable too respond/continue the RP... If he hasn't, either he's in big trouble with his mommy, or his life is at stake. ... I'd find much more merryment in the first situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 I'm sure Altair is fine, just too busy to get on YCM atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Well school is probably a major factor. Its a major factor for most people on YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 Well, if it's just school then he should be getting on today. What with it being Friday and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 i've edited my app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Hey guys, sorry but I've been busy with school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 may you plese re look over my app techi when ever you get on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Lion. If you did edit your app, I do not see any difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Did you check the original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 @Techi, Blu or SSD: erm.. my app fine or do i have to fix stuff... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Is the illustrious leader of this RP ever returning? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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