ANBU Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 agree with total.. also doesn't seem as OP as a general byakuya duplicate xD @newer post by DMG: and by the onmitsukido chick you mean soi fon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 Well really her powers are based more around vapour and mist (she's actually lifted from another story and modified to fit into the Bleach universe), the butterfly aspect it purely thematic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 SSD's turn too actually accept someone/Critique/deny. The last app I read and said anything about I believe was Lion's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 App is done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Alright, here's my new App.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=Arial, sans-serif][b]Username[/b]: Makoto Nanaya[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]RP Name[/b]: Ragio Raggarruda[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Race[/b]: Hollow[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Position/Rank[/b]: Vasto Lorde[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Age[/b]: Unknown[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Personality[/b]: Ragio is beyond apathetic. He cares for literally nothing in the world, not even power or further evolution. If one attacks him or stands in his way in his current mindset, he kills them as quickly as possible without hesitation. He sees everything in the world as “just something that is eventually going to get destroyed by something else, one way or another.” His only goal seems to be wandering aimlessly in search of something to bring about his downfall.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Appearance[/b]: Ragio's humanoid body is covered in white plates from his chest to his feet. On each of his feet, there is a large sickle-shaped claw, similar to that of a Velociraptor's. He posses long, clawed fingers. His legs and arms are long, and he stands at over six-and-a-half feet tall, but is rather slim. He has a long, whiplike tail. His mask is reminiscent of carnivorous dinosaurs, such as the Dromeosaurus or Tyrannosaurus. Ragio's shaggy hair is glaucous in color. His hollow hole is located in his abdomen.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Bio[/b]: Ragio, as a human, was a skilled paleontologist and paleozoologist. He was killed in a cave-in while looking for fossils in a cave in Mongolia. His soul was trapped within that cave for some time, and became very attached to a Velociraptor fossil within that cave. Eventually, he hollowfied, and was known by many Shinigami as “Raptros”, and he terrorized Eastern Asia for some time, before human souls were not enough for him. He began cannibalizing other Hollows he came across, and by this point he had abandoned any and all forms of emotion, merely believing he was alive because nothing had succeeded at killing him. He quickly evolved through his Gillian and Adjuchas stages. Finally, after he reached his Vasto Lorde form, Ragio became the most fearsome creature in Hueco Mundo, barring the Espada and higher-ranking Numeros, and only the most foolhardy of Menos try to challenge him.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Abilities[/b]: [i]Acidic Touch[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Soul-Body Separation[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Cero & Bala [/i](Electric Blue)[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Garganta[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Negación[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]High-Speed Regeneration[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Hierro[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Sonido[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][i]Superhuman Strength[/i][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][b]Short Beginning[/b]: [spoiler=The Stupidest Arrancar][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Ragio Raggarruda stood atop one of the highest dunes in Hueco Mundo. Just beyond the farthest reaches of his vision was the solitary fortress of Las Noches. The dunes stood unwavering, as there was no wind in Las Noches, and no being dared to cross Ragio's path.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Ragio sighed. “This place...I have grown tired of it...All of these beings...They are incapable of harming me, let alone killing me...What purpose is there in staying...?”[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]As he finished uttering this phrase, a minor Arrancar (most likely a Numeros with a number in the high forties, judging by his reiatsu) leapt at him, drawing his zanpakuto.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]The Vasto Lorde sighed once more. He opened his mouth and an electric blue ball of condensed spiritual energy formed in his maw. A cero blasted forth from the sphere, ripping off the Arrancar's non-wielding arm. The Arrancar was blasted sideways, spinning. He collapsed to the ground, blood spilling quickly from his empty arm socket. He managed to pull up his remaining arm and weakly fired a lime-green bala.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Ragio slashed through the bala with his claws, dissipating it instantly. Ragio then pounced onto the Arrancar, knocking him onto his back. “...I feel nothing toward you, Arrancar...”[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]“You...You've terrorized Hueco...Hueco Mundo for...for too long...”[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Ragio stood up, still on the Arrancar's chest. He then pulled his toe-claw back and drove it inot the former Hollow's abdomen, killing him.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]“...Nothing...”[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][/spoiler][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Hop too it SSD. Your turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Pfft.. And what's wring with you making comments about the apps? Nothing wrong with making a few good and bad pointers. <__< Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Don't frett over it DMG. I'll read and comment on yours in a little bit. (maybe tonight.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 hm.. since the rules say we can be other races would i be able to reserve a 2nd char as a bount? [spoiler=APP] Username ANBU: RP Name: Kenshin Race: Bount Position/Rank: Rogue/Leader (only when in an organized group of them often stayinmg away from any of the grups that follow him and hiding on his own) Age: 30000 (not really sure when bounts were made but it's old legend by canonical bleach which is 10000 years before this so i'm assuming such age would be allowed considering eating souls gives immortality if bounts eat enough and are not mortally wounded) Personality: Kenshin has a deep hatred for Shinigami having been tormented and hunted down by them for parts of his life causing such hatred and making him wish almost all dead if he can make them such. When in battle Kenshin is usually standing back and only making small orders to Sub Null Flamme (Doll Name) such as to use special attacks if confronted physically in battle he will often either have Sub Null Flamme nearby to protect him or merge with it to become able to defend himself quite well. Whilst around other Bounts or even Hollows he seems to haven o quarrel acting somewhat reasonable and allowing most to pass without battle especially so if they are there to fight shinigami. Appearance: [url="http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/101/1/c/grim_by_shade_of_nekura-d3ds7h3.jpg"]Pic[/url] Bio: Kenshin was created as a Bount shortly after the others however instead of staying with tyhem left them with a small group of bounts following him. Kenshin had then found a reasonable place and built up a base from which he and his group had organized assaults to get the human souls from the rukongai most going off without anyone noticing them there until the souls were already devoured. this continuing for years until the time at which the original bounts had called some humans to help with their invasion of the seireitei the bounts with him having left to join their original brothers i the assault however being killed for having betrayed and left them so long ago, leaving Kenshin as the only bount not with the originals. Kenshin had continued his life hidden absorbing humans much stronger than he had started off and even picking off shinigami tht had wandered ito the forest freezing them with Sub Null Flamme tad then devouring them being spiritual beings which he was able to absorb. He has since continued growing in strength and is considering an attack on the Seireitei witing for an attempt at such from hollows or other beings to serve as a distravction o he can get inside first though. [i]Doll[/i] Release Phrase: Zeige Dich!, Sub Null Flamme! (Show yourself!, Sub Zero Flame!) [Zeige Dich! is allneeded to release if he thinks he has time Kenshin will use the previously mention release phrase] [i]Doll Sealed[/i] Appearance: A blue/white orb seemingly made of ice able to be seen throught with fire inside of it not melting it yet not dyng out [i][i]Doll[/i] [/i]Appearance: [url="http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/025/a/6/frost_paladin_of_ice_sanctuary_by_teramaster-d3807uf.jpg"]Pic[/url] (Face more ice-like, hair red/orange fire pattern, frozen pieces have fire inside) [i]Doll [/i]Personality: Sub Null Flamme is similar to his Bount master in his hatred of Shinigami however unlike his master he also holds a hatred for Hollows wanting to fight them if he can. Whilst in battle he usually prefers to get up close and use his abilities to make his opponent useless, often remarking about his hatred of shinigami or hollows during the battle or when on his won with his master. [i]Doll [/i]Abilities: Kalt Brand (Cold Fire) - can from it's hand produce a blue sub zero flame that can possibly damage oppenent due to coldness along with freezing if it hits enough at one spot Brand Tritt (Fire Kick) - can cover it's feet in sub-zero flames, when kicks these flames are launched forwards in a Cresecent like shape Blinken Frosten (Blink Freeze) - Can quickly produce subzero flames from all over its body and m,ove back creating within almost a literal second a almost identical cop made of frozen air and hydrogen Eis Blende (Ice Aperture) - By slashing with the dolls claws can create a very thin wall of ice freezing the air infront of it, also able to manipulate the ice and cause openings to appear, if the opponent is struck with the dolls claws they can slowly start being frozen by a thin veil of ice. [i]Doll Merged [/i]Abilties: Above along with: Eis Aura (Ice Aura) - in the Merged from Kazuya constantly creates a small 60 cm long aura of subzero flame less effective the further it is out only being near normal effectiveness almost right next to the skin. & Eis Waffe (Ice Weapons) - by manipulating the sub zero flame caused by the merged from Kenshin can form weapons which soldify in ice and aslong as stay insie the aura of sub-zero flame cannot be broken Abilities: (Kido and such, or physical abilities) Short Beginning: Kenshin stood atop his house in the forest which served as his based holding a frozen orb with living fire inside it as he looked roughly towards the direction of the seireitei. "The time will come soon.." he muttered to himself as he saw another Shinigami wandering through the forest, the shinigami thinking of him as just a soul who had made a house in the forest rather than stay in the district he started in asked him for directions out of the forest. Kenshin then jumped down throwing the orb upwards slightly as he did so, "Zeige Dich!, Sub Null Flamme!" he then exclaimed as the orb glowed and transformed into his doll which knowing why it was summoned froze the Shinigami quickly the shinigami then Devoured by Kenshin while Sub Null Flamme stood nearby. "You know if they keep wandering off like this fool I'll be stronger then everyone entirely in a few more thousand years" he then said to sub null flamme laughing slightly. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Altair.. Hurry up and get on! D:< I wanna post already.. Lol. Btw.. My terminology is horrid cause I came into the series just as Ichigo rescued Rukia and I left during the filler they had while Ichigo was rescuing Orihime.. So may I suggest you guys put up a quick cheat-sheet for terminology? O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 [url="http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Important_Terms"]http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Important_Terms[/url] Here's a list with links to in-depth pages. Any other clarifications you'd need I am happy to help with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Awesome! Thanks Makoto! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 I just realized a problem. None of us have actually responded in any way at all to the first post SSD made. I mean right now there's some kid running from a hollow with no one to rescue him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Well...My character is talking with a prisoner (TotalObelisk), and my other character hasn't been accepted yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Well really the problem is that there's nothing to follow up on, all it gives us is a boy being chased by a hollow and that's hardly enough to go on. As far as intro posts go it's not very good. Plus in my case my character can't go to the human world at the moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 what about your zanpakuto spirit's appearance? i reserve 2nd captain and what do you mean by "short beginning"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Username: GENERATION III[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Name:[/b] Higure Kuraikawa[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Race:[/b] Soul Reaper/Shinigami[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Position/Rank:[/b] Captain of Squad 2/Corps Commander of the Punishment Force[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Age:[/b] 423 (appears 26)[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Gender:[/b] Male[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Personality:[/b] He is often antisocial and dark minded. Some even consider him a sociopath. Being one of the top assassins in the entire Rukon district, getting close to people was not something you did. He practices being calm and collected on a daily basis. Despite his best efforts, though, he remains short-tempered from time to time and would often lash out verbally or, in rare cases physically, at other people, usually those with lower ranks, like lieutenants. Some would say he has no heart, but he does care deeply for his parents and reserves some of his heart for a girl to one day marry and carry on his clan’s name for generations. He does, however, have little to almost no respect towards subordinates in his own squad who can’t succeed in tasks they are required of.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Appearance:[/b] 5'10", 150 lbs, slender, muscular build[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][url="http://api.ning.com/files/yGS5sUX2LRIgVlWALmzjMte7MrZbG0YshDQwifshjQOctKMt3bwPCD67nTlKqL18gQbzpYXD*DjSuBC2XIorvOEMx7Nb2ULX/anime_face_rain.jpg"]http://api.ning.com/...e_face_rain.jpg[/url][/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][url="http://kidorakujapan.com/know/img/men_kimono_montsuki.jpg"]http://kidorakujapan...no_montsuki.jpg[/url][/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Bio:[/b] Higure grew up deep within Soul Reaper and Stealth Force customs. As a child, Higure never liked hanging out with other kids. The things they considered “fun” he called “childish and boring”. He was always mature for his age, and while his parents encouraged it, it did get him into trouble sometimes, often in the shape of petty debates with people older than him or by constantly correcting anything anyone did wrong, no matter what their rank. This would often result in some form of punishment via kido. As he grew older, he voluntarily joined the Gotei 13 under Squad 2, and as he grew even older he joined the Stealth Force under the Punishment Force, taking after his parents. During his life, he has seen 6 Squad 2 captains come and go, and 12 Punishment Force Corps commanders. He took the role of captain and corps commander around the same time, and has retained both ranks ever since. His work in the Court Guard Squads teaches him kido, while in the Punishment Force he learns stealth techniques and assassin code of conduct.[/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Abilities:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Hado No. 1 – Sho[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Hado No. 11 – Tsuzuri Raiden[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Hado No. 12 – Fushibi[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Hado No. 54 – Haien[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Hado No. 90 – Kurohitsugi[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Hado No. 91 – Senju Koten Taiho[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Bakudo No. 8 – Seki[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Bakudo No. 21 – Sekienton[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Bakudo No. 39 – Enkosen[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Bakudo No. 58 – Kakushitsuijaku[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Zanpakuto Name:[/b] Kakusa Retakage (Hidden Shadow)[/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Zanpakuto Appearance:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][url="http://www.kingofswords.com/images/batmanbeginsswordcane.jpg"]http://www.kingofswo...nsswordcane.jpg[/url][/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][url="http://images.wikia.com/multiverses/images/0/0c/Shadow_demon.gif"]http://images.wikia....hadow_demon.gif[/url][/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b][i]Shikai[/i] Release Phrase:[/b] Kakusuto doku (Conceal and burn), Kakusa Retakage[/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][i]Shikai[/i] Appearance:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][url="http://beta2009.epicweapons.com/shop/images/P/exotath.jpg"]http://beta2009.epic...s/P/exotath.jpg[/url][/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][i]Shikai[/i] Abilities:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]--Koikiri (Dark Fog) – Releases a dark fog that can surround a small area and prevents enemies from being able to see anything round them[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]--Kiriotsukisasu (Piercing Fog) – Dark fog darts around and slices skin.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Bankai Name:[/b] Fukitsuna Kakushikage (Sinister Hidden Shadow)[/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Bankai Appearance:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][url="http://gamefrosting.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/da-gw2full.jpg"]http://gamefrosting..../da-gw2full.jpg[/url][/font][/size] [b][size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Bankai Abilities:[/font][/size][/b] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]--Nenshokage (Burning Shadows) – Dark fog burns any enemies it touches.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]--Kuroikumobakuhatsu (Exploding Dark Cloud) – Dark fog enters enemies’ bodies and explodes inside them.[/font][/size] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][b]Short Beginning:[/b] ?[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Dammit, gonna need someone to be the NEW main badass boss-thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 Also.. What doesn't help with responding to Altair's first post is that most of us are lieutenant or higher and they generally don't get assigned to work in the human world for a period of time unless its needed... Altair: Am I accepted or not?! D:< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 am i accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 I could have Ragio randomly appear and devour the Hollow, then just ignores SSD's character, allowing him to do something...And maybe we could have Ragio become the leader after killing several Numeros, then becoming an Arrancar later? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 I'll take this over. Not my Rp. Never my idea. Have no idea where this is supposed too go... Besides for epic war, Shinigami V.s. Hollow(Espada what not,...) I can do this. I'll be on as much as I can Tuesday, and a little tomorrow. If SSd makes me the owner, expect to be accepted by tuesday and too have this Rp full-bloom before the end of the week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 I thought I had the 2nd Captain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 [quote name='Techi☺' timestamp='1318824885' post='5583445'] I'll take this over. Not my Rp. Never my idea. [b]Have no idea where this is supposed too go...[/b] [b]Besides for epic war, Shinigami V.s. Hollow(Espada what not,...)[/b] I can do this. I'll be on as much as I can Tuesday, and a little tomorrow. If SSd makes me the owner, expect to be accepted by tuesday and too have this Rp full-bloom before the end of the week. [/quote] does that mean if you get ownership of this rp i can't have my bount..? Dx Edit: who i just finished ^^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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