Elƒie Posted October 12, 2011 Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 I think Altair did about 2 weeks ago or something.. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted October 12, 2011 Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 That's not good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted October 12, 2011 Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 No.. It's not. Lol. There are 3 spots open before the season finale (my rp) so Altair could always have it post-poned... There are 2 rp's up for review after this one. I doubt Supreme would have a fit about moving this review back. Lol. Though.. I'll let Altair deal with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 Someone else requested it and I just said sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted October 12, 2011 Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 So...How long until the IC thread will be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 I'm working on it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 12, 2011 Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 so am i accepted i did edit my app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 I'll let whoever was taking care of it decide that ^^ I believe that was Blu, or it could have been me being I forgot after being away for 5 days *shrugs*Posted the IC, you can either find it yourself or check the first post for the link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunderas Posted October 12, 2011 Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 so I've been thinking about doing my lieutenants app I'll have it up here for review probably later today or tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2011 Okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Thank god... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Y U HERE AND NOT POSTING?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Techi am I,acepted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 @SSD: Just did =P XD XD @Lion: Did you heed my advice and edit your app? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 I beleve so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 I'm positive I checked the last time you asked and didn't see any difference. Could you repost the app? It'd be 10x easier than looking through all the past quotes and edits... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Where's the 12th Captain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 this is every thing but short beginings Username: kinglion73 RP Name: Soren Ragus Race: shinigami Position/Rank: Captain of Squad 11 Age: 133 appears 22 Personality: He is one of the more relaxed captain’s in all the thirteen court guard squad. In side of combat he seems like he has no care. He has access to his bankai but due to the unspoken rule of squad 11 he never pulls out his bankai. Unlike captains before him he won’t just try to overpower his enemy but he’ll still fight people straight up. He never uses both of his zampactos unless he has to. He also slacks on his captain duties at times. Appearance: He has crimson red eyes that look nonchalant 90 percent of the time. He has an average build to him at first glance you would even think of him as a captain let alone captain of squad 11. He has long laid down green hair that go down to the bottom of his neck. He does have some battle wounds on his chest and back from previous battles. Bio: He grew up in the rukan district as a drifter. He spent his time as a youth getting in to fights and running away from soul reaper. He soon attempted several time to get in to the shinigami academy. He finally made it in the academey and almost failed out due to his laid back style. When he got out of the academy, he was recommended to squad eleven while in his squad he raised himself through the ranks. He soon made it to 1st lieutenant when he realized that he could beat him for his spot. Their fight lasted 13 hours straight till soren drew his second sword which no one knew he had because he had never took it out to use. After that fight he became the captain, he started carrying his second sword. Zanpakuto Name: fenikkusu sousei (phoenix twins) Zanpakuto Appearance: Dual swords stashed on both sides of his body. The sword he uses with his left hand has a dark red and black handle while the other has an army green and white handle. The both swords have handle’s hilt is shaped like a bird. Both swords blades look exactly the same. Shikai Release Phrase: flying flames Shikai Appearance: the blades of his swords turn in to glowing red wing blades. The wings look like that of a bird each feather is a blade. The swords shred not cut like the original form. Shikai Abilities: The blade upgrades his power and his speed. The feathers also red hot blades the sheared all they touch. Bankai Release Phrase: Molten destruction doragon Bankai Appearance: it becomes a dual bladed sword. One of the blades is a black dragon while the other is a red dragon. he also has flaming feathers circling around him in an x formation around him. He also grows a flame cape. Bankai Abilities: He can drop feathers that can explode when soren tells them too. He can also use fire in fused with his blades. He also can use his duel blades to control a fire dragon that come out of when his eyes go completely red. Abilities: he is one of the faster captains to go along with his immense power. He knows no kidos because of the fact the squad he’s in. [spoiler=Short Beginning] “Captain when are you’re going to be late for sparing if you don’t get up a move.” Soren looked up at his lieutenant standing over him. “ I know that I was just about to leave if that’s ok with you.” He then stood up and moved as fast as he could to the squad eleven barrack’s training ground. When he got there he saw his third seat holding his zanpakuto. “You know what? I’m challenging you for your seat captain.” The third seat said with a intensity soren had never seen from him in a long time. Soren drew one of his swords and nodded in acceptance of the challenge. The 3rd seat charged at him with all he had. Soren was easily able to block his attack with ease. “You know your epically slow when it comes to attacking” Soren said as hit him in the head with his handle. The 3rd seat was even angry that Soren was holding back. “Why do you hold back!” he yelled that as he activated his shikai. Soren just smiled as he charged at him again. This time he had a giant blade in his hand. Soren pulled out his other sword and was able to block it. " Captian Your going to die here today." the thrid seat took another swing with his sword as soren ducked under it. Soren jumped back and took off his captians jacket and sat it on the ground. he resheathed one of his swords and said, " I still don't need that just yet. " The third seat looked at his captian with an even more charged look than before. " Just give up i really don't want to kill you. Yourmy 3rd seat and i don't find pleasure in killing my subordinates." the third seat then swung his sword as soren jumped over and brought down his sword with enough force to crush a weak hollow. " Captian you call that a strick, I call that you being weak." Soren laughed at this statement," it's not to late for you to ggive up and live because I don't think nice of those who threaten my life." the third seat then jumped up and smashed down towarad Soren. As he side steped the attack, soren thrusterd his blade at the neck of his subordinatent. The third seat was suprised that he missed but even more that there was a blade at his neck." I thought you had gotten soft Kenpachi." Soren kicked the third seat in to a wall and started to leave," trainings over for today and you" ,looking at a new recruit," get some one to clean up this mess." he then looked around at the destuction his third seat caused. he then put back on his captians jacket and walked away from the traiining feild. 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Techi☺ Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Yeah, I didn't accept this app due to the bankai power. Remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted October 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 [quote name='Reina Soho' timestamp='1318477447' post='5576857']Where's the 12th Captain?[/quote] Blu's (still) working on the app Blu, here's a few quotes from my homeroom teacher: "Get with the program!" "Push pencil!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devack Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 How's that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Well, is the lieutenant spot open? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 If anyone would interact with Hideyo, that'd be great. Just a quick hint, my post in the Ic is continued from my intro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunderas Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 [spoiler='lieutenant app']Username: Hunderas RP Name: Nakura Narumi Race: Shinigami Position/Rank: Squad 3 lieutenant Age: looks about 20 [b]Personality:[/b] Normally Nakura has a very calm personality; she can get a bit moody sometimes depending on the situation. She doesn’t want her captain to find out about what happened after he left so she’s very bottled up about after he left them. She has a certain disliking for those that pick on others that are weaker. Not being able to fight so well with a sword, and losing most of the time in sword fighting, she concentrated most of her training into kidou, getting so high that some captains couldn’t keep up with her kidou ability. [b]Appearance:[/b] Nakura has black hair that she keeps in a loose braid that goes down the middle of her black. Wearing the normal Shinigami kimono, she keeps the lieutenant badge on her right arm, and her Zanpakuto is strapped to her right hip. She has her right arm bandaged including her hand and all fingers; she does this to cover up burns and scars that have been there since she could remember. On her left shin she has a metal plate for those times she needs to fight. [b]Bio:[/b] Coming from the same ‘family’ as Jin Raitou she has a very different view on how the ‘family’ was disbanded. After Jin left many of the ‘family’ left, she sort of took over those that stayed behind. The ‘family’ all but died and those that were left behind went on to other and better things. A year passed after she was the only one left standing in the run down shack, they all called home. 12 years passed and she heard nothing of how Jin or the rest of the family were doing so she burned down the shack and moved on like the rest, when she heard of how Jin was made a captain she decided to join the academy also. After graduation she was put into squad 8, after hearing of her arrival Jin put in a request and had her transferred into squad 3. Zanpakuto Name: Mizu no yōsei Zanpakuto Appearance: normal Zanpakuto with a black braid. The guard is shaped like a rain drop. [i]Shikai[/i] Release Phrase: Mizu rise through the lake. [i]Shikai[/i] Appearance: It looks like a short dagger with a very intricate design of a thunder storm on the blade, and handle. [i]Shikai[/i] Abilities: (Ame o hikisaku) rain starts to fall, in the area and it cancels out all noise in the area except for the rain falling in about a 35 yard circumference where she is the center. Abilities: flash step about 30 yards, kidou up to 65 with incantation. [spoiler='short beginning']Nakura was in the human world, at her post in southern Japan. Bzzzz she checked her pocket and pulled out a cell phone like device. The screen was all black except from two dots; a green one indicating her stood in the middle, the other was a red one on the top edge of the screen. She flash stepped away leaving the sidewalk blank as if nothing was there. Arriving at where the red dot was Nakura saw nothing around that looked like a hollow. “Stupid thing must be broken.” She said as she hit it. Roar!! An intense spiritual pressure rose from the ground and out popped a slightly overpowered snake-like hollow. The Hollow looked at her and roared again this time charging straight towards her. “Oh shut up already.” She pulled out her Zanpakuto and held it in one hand, with the blade facing the sky. “Mizu rise from the lake.” The sword shrank in size and small rain clouds formed overhead. “Ame o hikisaku,” She said and rain started to fall in the area drowning out the Hollow’s cries. The Hollow stopped and looked towards the sky making the motion of it still roaring. She mouthed the words. “[i]Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south![/i] Hadō #31, Shakkahō.” A Red ball of spiritual energy formed in her hand, then a beam of energy shot out of it and hit the Hollow, exploding on impact. When the dust cleared the hollow was disintegrating. The rain stopped, and the clouds dispersed. “Good,” she said putting away her Zanpakuto. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 [quote name='Techi☺' timestamp='1317780967' post='5561419'] I feel like declining the app. Consistency of use of something is indeed a great way to limit the Op'd-ness of it. However, Captains already have strict rules of when or when they are not allowed to release their bankai. [/quote] [quote name='Techi☺' timestamp='1317698803' post='5559060'] It sounds a little flashy for the 11th captain. Don't you think? And flame manipulation(even if it's sourced as a dragon) and many mini-blades are a little used... Don't you think? (it's kind of like byakua's power... only they can freaking expolde?) I can't make heads or tails of it... [/quote] This is what I said before. And you didn't even touch that part of the app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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