Dementuo Posted October 1, 2011 Report Share Posted October 1, 2011 The Ace Card needs to be toned down, and needs some OCG fixes. First off, it's far too easy to summon. Second, its' ATK gain effect gives it way to much of a boost. With 3000 ATK already, +800 is actually quite a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted October 1, 2011 Report Share Posted October 1, 2011 are my xyz ok? btw its a custom archetype : the Karasu Archetype and what should i put for the effect and/or atk/def then? alright, i changed it. Btw, Karasu means raven in japanese and Kuroi means dark should i put more karasu monsters/spells/and traps up? anybody see my last edited post? ok im completely done with editing app and cleaning up my karasu cards in the RC section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 Stop posting so much!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 [quote name='ロクサス (めぐりあう鍵)' timestamp='1317493896' post='5552890'] are my xyz ok? btw its a custom archetype : the Karasu Archetype and what should i put for the effect and/or atk/def then? alright, i changed it. Btw, Karasu means raven in japanese and Kuroi means dark should i put more karasu monsters/spells/and traps up? anybody see my last edited post? ok im completely done with editing app and cleaning up my karasu cards in the RC section [/quote] Well, your Xyz is fine, but your Karasus are OP'ed - even compared to the metagame, your cards offer considerable card advantage, many beatstick status, and far too much draw power (there are lot of cards that have "draw 2 cards" for small costs)Now all we need are 2 Clear Brigade members and we're good to go... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1317592750' post='5555942'] Well, your Xyz is fine, but your Karasus are OP'ed - even compared to the metagame, your cards offer considerable card advantage, many beatstick status, and far too much draw power (there are lot of cards that have "draw 2 cards" for small costs) [/quote] If he does use an archetype so OPed, it could work as long as he's a villain who destroys everyone then gets defeated in an upset by a main character, but still, that could only happen if the deck could COMPETE in today's meta, not dominate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckShuffler711 Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 Well, I am still working the kinks out of all the "Mech" archetype monsters that Setsuna uses, but here is the page they are on: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/264400-mech-archetype/ I apologize if some of them are OPed, I am still working the kinks out of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 [quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1317596727' post='5556190'] If he does use an archetype so OPed, it could work as long as he's a villain who destroys everyone then gets defeated in an upset by a main character, but still, that could only happen if the deck could COMPETE in today's meta, not dominate it. [/quote] ill be that villain you described and ill change the effs EDIT: Is there any particular way you want me to change them? I'm not good at balancing too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 The problem with that idea is that villains should always be controlled by RPers known to be competent and not just handed to someone who couldn't balance his cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckShuffler711 Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 [quote name='evilfusion' timestamp='1317676313' post='5558082'] The problem with that idea is that villains should always be controlled by RPers known to be competent and not just handed to someone who couldn't balance his cards. [/quote] Agreed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 fine. i will balance them. ok finished balancing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 ...I totally forgot that I said yesterday that I would join this. *runs in* [b]Username: [/b]- Junk Warrior -, or -Pacman-. [b]RP Name:[/b]Jayce Anderson [b]Age[/b][b]:[/b]24 [b]Gender:[/b]Male [b]Appearance:[/b]Jayce is average height, and relatively skinny. He isn't very muscular. He has brown hair and brown eyes, and generally wears all black clothing. His Duel Disk is also black, with a silver gear on the back of the middle monster zone. [b]Personality:[/b]Jayce is very cold, and believes that humans are, at least in general, evil, and tries to avoid human contact whenever possible. He believes that completely wiping out the human race is what is best for Earth. He has a somewhat sadistic sense of humor. [b]Bio:[/b][spoiler=Long bio ]As a child, Jayce was small, and not very popular in school. His mother died in childbirth, and his father died two years later of cancer. Jayce was then sent to an orphanage where the other kids tormented him for his size, and lack of dueling skill. At school, it was worse. He began to tinker with machines at a very young age, because they don't make fun of you. By the age of 11, he was an accomplished technician and hacker. He was never adopted, and barely managed to scrape through school. When he graduated high school, he decided not to go to college. But, without a degree, he couldn't find a job. Desperate, he turned to dueling in the underground for money. The rules of the duels down there: The loser dies. He managed to survive through a combination of luck,and very fast learning. One day, a member of the Clear Brigade saw him dueling, and approached him with an offer to join. Jayce accepted immediately, having decided that complete memory wipe is just what humanity deserved. But humans includes the CLear Brigade itself, so he plans to let the Brigade gather Numbers, and eventually take them all for himself. The leadership of the Brigade is aware of this, but they keep him around because his dueling skills have become extremely good. He was able to obtain a Number, and is eager to get more. [/spoiler] [b]Status/Faction:[/b]Clear Brigade, and a Number Holder. [b]Deck Type:[/b]Machines [b]Ace Card(s):[/b][spoiler=yay] Number 32: Machine Angel Graam **** [DARK/Machine/Xyz] This card cannot be destroyed by battle except with a "Number" monster. If this card would be destroyed: you can detatch one Xyz material monster from this card instead. During your Standby Phase, if this card has and Xyz material monsters: You can Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower Machine-type monster from your Graveyard. 2500/2000 Wind-Up Zenmaines Wind-Up Zenmaister [/spoiler] Yay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 Accepted. Welcome to the brigade, bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 [quote name='Rainbow Dash' timestamp='1317690481' post='5558680'] Accepted. Welcome to the brigade, bro. [/quote] Change mine to Clear Brigade, if okay, Demmy? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 [quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1317692353' post='5558786'] Change mine to Clear Brigade, if okay, Demmy? :3 [/quote] Sure thing Great, I think we can start then. We have 6 (I think) Number Holders, 3 Numbers Hunters, and 3 (including one unrevealed app) Clear Brigade members. Any objections? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 None from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 As long as we get a good starting point, yeah, let's go (make sure to put all the apps in the OP so I can easily find them and put em up on the wikia) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 I won't actually try putting up the apps right now, since the alignment thing is screwed up, but I will direct you towards each app for reference: • Evilfusion's app: Page 5; Post #98 - Natalie Press: Numbers Hunter • The Japanese Guy's app (or as you call him, stumble): Page 6; Post #119 - Kuroi Karasu (though it still needs to be edited to some extent): Numbers Hunter • DeckShuffler711's app: Page 7; Post #121 - Setsuna "Kizuna" Yamakada: Number Holder • Daemon's app: Page 7; Post #131 - Kyokari Tsunoma: Clear Brigade • Pacman's app: Page 11; Post #211 - Jayce Anderson: Clear Brigade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1317699097' post='5559074'] I won't actually try putting up the apps right now, since the alignment thing is screwed up, but I will direct you towards each app for reference: • Evilfusion's app: Page 5; Post #98 - Natalie Press: Numbers Hunter • The Japanese Guy's app (or as you call him, stumble): Page 6; Post #119 - Kuroi Karasu (though it still needs to be edited to some extent): Numbers Hunter • DeckShuffler711's app: Page 7; Post #121 - Setsuna "Kizuna" Yamakada: Number Holder • Daemon's app: Page 7; Post #131 - Kyokari Tsunoma: Clear Brigade • Pacman's app: Page 11; Post #211 - Jayce Anderson: Clear Brigade [/quote] Close enough. Thanks Zex. And the Japanese guy's name is stumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 Oh thanks. I was having trouble finding my app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 I wanna join this but I'm having trouble thinking up a good app, I'm in the mood to make a villain but I don't know anything about the Clear Brigade except that they are jerks who want to take over the world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 @ Trimage - Take your time; the Clear Brigade, as of now, has the job of erasing people's memories. @ Evilfusion - Aw, you ninja'd me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 Um, evilfusion, your character is certainly... [i]Enthusiastic[/i] about my Numbers, eh...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommanderVolt Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 are there any spots avilable? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 It can't possibly hurt that in addition to her being a Number Hunter, that Number 17 is a Rank 3. I remember the DN Numbers Tourney: My deck badly wanted Number 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 [quote name='Rainbow Dash' timestamp='1317703812' post='5559211'] Um, evilfusion, your character is certainly... [i]Enthusiastic[/i] about my Numbers, eh...? [/quote] Considering she "salivated" over it, yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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