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[quote name='greenfrog100' timestamp='1318132389' post='5569569']
@Scotty20- Well, can you ask anyone to send you a point? If not, I'll try to work something out.
Also, sorry I didn't put your name in contestants yet. I'll try to post it later.
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Hopefully, i'll try to get a point.

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Judging:

WolfFan16-4/10
Sorin Markov-7/10
Cad97-2/10
DynaBladeX96-8/10
LiquidDJ11-7.5/10
TwinSeed-7/10
Tymur Shayk-10/10
Purrloin-1.5/10
Sage of Dreams-3.5/10
Fire Neos-5/10
Scotty20-7/10

My judging is all done. Some of you got marked down because you had errors in your cards. Don't say I did not give you enough time. I gave you plenty of time, you should have spent it working more on your card. However, I know some of you may not have noticed, so that is why, next time, I will let you know if you need to make card edits. B.T.W., I graded it based on my rating skill, just so there isn't any confusion.

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[color=#000000][size=4]First Half is Done.[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]1 Points for good Official Card Grammer[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]4 Points for Being Balanced[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]2 Points for Usability[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]2 Point for Originality[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]1 Point for a Good Pic[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4][color=#000000][size=4][spoiler='TwinSeed 6/10'][/size][/color][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]TwinSeed - Level 1 - Gnoshoam - White Lite[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]OCG: 1/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Card is UPed. I looked at both before and after effects and, honestly, both would have received the same score. Your first one was beyond OPed and this one is meh. It takes banishment of 2 monsters to bring out, which wouldn't be so bad if its ATK was higher. The last part is helpful, but how long do you think this card will stay on the field?[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing: 1/4[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Card is usable, just not worth it.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: 1/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Card is sort of original, it takes out an opponent's card, which is always at least somewhat helpful. And that second effect is definitely new.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Originality: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Creepy pic.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Pic: 1/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]TOTAL: 6/10[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][/spoiler][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][spoiler='WolfFan16 7/10'][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]WolfFan16 - Level 2 - Young Maiden of the Ice Barrier[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]"Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by its level x200. If a card is returned to it's Owner's hand: increase the Level of this card by 1. When this card is used as Synchro Material in a Synchro Summon of a WATER monster: Special Summon 1 "Ice Barrier" monster from your hand. A Monster Special Summoned this way cannot attack the turn it is summoned and cannot be used as Synchro Material."[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]OCG: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing isn't completely an issue. The only monster I'd WANT to SS would be one of the Generals, which I wouldn't use to synch anyway. If I were you I would not have added that on, as Synchro Summoning is one of the things IB's like to do. The level increase is great, I'd assume you'd use it with Brio. ATK gain ability is irrelevant in all honesty.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing: 3/4[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]If I ran IB's, which I don't, I'd probably use this, just for the SS ability alone.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]SSing in IB, at least I've always felt, needed to be done. IB don't swarm too well, and if they got the chance they could do it better, this is definitely Original for an IB monster.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Originality: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Pic looks nice, but this is an Ice barrier. I don't see any ice… and she's in a skirt…[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]TOTAL: 7/10[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][/spoiler][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][spoiler='~Purrloin~ 5/10'][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]~Purrloin~ - Level 3 - Morpher[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]*sigh* "You may banish 1 Beast-type monster from your Graveyard with the same name as this monster: increase this card's ATK by 1000 until the End Phase. Banish 1 Beast-type monster you control: inflict 1000 points of damage to your Opponents Life Points."[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]OCG: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]You made Cannon Soldier on steroids for Beasts only. And Beasts work fine when banished. The way you made this card, btw, you might as well have said "banish 1 'Morpher' in your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK".[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing: 2/4[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]It inflicts Damage, it can increase its ATK to 2400. It banishes Beast monsters.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Original Effect is Original. Cept it's Cannon Soldier[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Originality: 1/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]To get a point for a pic, it needs to line up with not only the name, but also the effect.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Pic: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]note: I feel like you missed an effect that would have changed this card's name.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]TOTAL: 5/10[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][/spoiler][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][spoiler='Sorin Markov 5/10'][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Sorin Markov - Level 4 - Karthos the Vengeful Zombie[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]"Once per turn, you can tribute this card: destroy 1 face-up mnster your Opponent controls. You may Special Summon this card from the Graveyard by discarding 1 Level 4 Zombie-type monster from your hand. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle: Special Summon this card at this turn's End Phase."[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]First thing: You have to know that if a card leaves the graveyard and enters the graveyard, it doesn't make a difference if it only works once per turn because that effect is reset. What this should be is: "The effect of 'Karthos, the Vengeful Zombie' can only be activated Once per turn."[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]OCG: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]A continuously summonable Level 4 Zombie Monster with 1800 ATK, can dump a Mezuki, and essentially can't be destroyed. Oh, and that discard is not a negative side effect.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing: 2/4[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: I partly dislike that I use this section, because it completely supports OPed cards. Your's almost falls under that category. Anyway, it's a Level 4 Zombie, enough said.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]It's sort of original. I won't completely say its a new effect to SS itself.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Originality: 1/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]I can't tell if the pic is real or drawn, but it's proportions are off.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Pic: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]TOTAL: 5/10[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][/spoiler][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][spoiler='CAD97 6/10'][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]CAD97 - Level 5 - Insect Survivor[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. During your Standy Phase you may discard one card and tribute 1 Insect-type monster: Special Summon this card (from your hand). During your Main Phase 1: you can flip two coins and activate one the following effects based on the result: 2 Tails: this card is changed to defense position and gains 1500 DEF until your next Standby Phase; 1 Tails: Destroy this card; 0 Tails: this card is changed to attack position and gains 1500 ATK until your next Standby Phase. During your Standby Phase if this card is in your Graveyard: you can banish 1 card from your Graveyard and 1 from your hand: Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. If this card is Special Summoned this way: it is banished when it leaves the field."[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]OCG: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Card has no limit to the amount of times that you can activate its effect, is easy to summon from both the hand AND the graveyard. Thank god you had to have it at Level 5 and make it 700 ATK/DEF with a negative side effect to an effect NO ONE WOULD USE. THis card is all about the SSing nothing else.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing: 2/4[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]It's usable because you can SS it from the hand or Graveyard easily.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]The no-one-would-care-to-use effect is original. I'd say that the other two's restrictions are different, so I guess it's original.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Originality: 2/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]The pic is a mantis. A real mantis. Yup.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Pic: 0/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]TOTAL: 6/10[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][/spoiler][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4][spoiler='DynaBladeX96 3/10'][/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]DynaBladeX96 - Level 6 - Demon Dragon[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]Only error was a small one at the end.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]OCG: 1/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]This card is UPed. I don't care if it's a Dragon, making it summonable by REDMD. It's a Level 6 monster with only 1500 ATK. Guess what. 2000 isn't better, and Dragons do not need 1500 more ATK. Take it from me, one of YCM's big disaster players. I'm really disappointed. You were given the chance to make a DARK Dragon-type monster at the beginning of the era of Chaos Dragons, and you did this. A monster that cannot even be used for Xyz or Synchro Summons. That being said. It's not OPed.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Balancing: 1/4[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]For usability, see above/[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Usability: 0/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]The card's original in a bad way. All it does is boost ATK, which even then is not new.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Originality: 0/2[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]The pic is the one thing you did right.[/size][/color]
[color=#000000][size=4]Pic: 1/1[/size][/color]

[color=#000000][size=4]TOTAL: 3/10[/spoiler][/size][/color]

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http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text
TLDR: Places where "to" and commas would be in the text are exchanged for colons and semicolons (:, ;) (semicolons are used for costs), "removed from play" is now banished and "is removed from the field" is now "leaves the field".

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[quote name='Sage of Dreams' timestamp='1318973613' post='5586817']
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text"]http://yugioh.wikia....lving_Card_Text[/url]
TLDR: Places where "to" and commas would be in the text are exchanged for colons and semicolons (:, ;) (semicolons are used for costs), "removed from play" is now banished and "is removed from the field" is now "leaves the field".
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Oh yeah, I know about that. I was just talking about errors like capitalization and misspelling.

[quote name='TwinSeed' timestamp='1318975747' post='5586923']
So who all advances?
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Be patient, the other judges still need to finish judging? How about you remind the other judges to judge if you want to.

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That's a great idea, maybe like 5 or 6 people could advance to a final round. If this does happen, people would get another few days to edit their cards. The judges will also be able to change their rating skill if they want to.

[quote name='TwinSeed' timestamp='1318989023' post='5587456']
I can't find Dante. Did he have a name change?
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Try harder, he is on the very first page, by the way.

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