Synchronized Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 [IMG]http://a1.engine.flamingtext.com/netfu/tmp20024/coollogo_com-16551928.png[/IMG] Hello all and welcome to the Writer's Gathering! I'm starting this club based off the original by ~ Epic Hero - Saber ~ with the intention of giving Fan Fiction writers a place to discuss, share, and comment on each others stories - to somewhat help those of us who write to build an audience! There's not much per se in terms of joining here; [code] [b]Name[/b]: [b]Fan-Fiction[/b]: (Provide Link) [b]Short Summary[/b]:[/code] Basically, anyone who wants to join can do so, and as a group we can make an effort to read and offer advice and discussion on stories with one another, since Fan Fiction is one of the least active sections on the site, and often times a lot of good stories go without notice because people choose not to read them! So join and support your fellow writers! [spoiler=Members] [spoiler=Star] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/251715-yugioh-hidden-legacy-season-3-episode-15-the-takeover-begins-posted-new/"]YuGiOh: Hidden Legacy [Season 3][/url] [b]Summary[/b]: The third season of perhaps one of YCM's longest running FanFiction stories, Hidden Legacy tells the tale of a boy from the fictional Diamond City, who goes through adventures with his friends that take him to the Duel Spirit World, depicted perhaps differently than your average GX story. However upon the arrival of the third Season, his future will be revealed, and you can rest assured it might even throw the readers for more of a loop than it does him![/spoiler] [spoiler=AggroDrago] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261201-yu-gi-oh-the-wanderer-chapter-6/"]YuGiOh: The Wanderer[/url] Summary: Story: Guy who's been off the radar for a while comes back, meets some friends and joins duel academy for a few weeks to find something. As to who is searching for or why he's looking for him, that is unknown.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dante v. Nero] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/257812-yu-gi-oh-strike-of-the-heavens-pg-13-chapter-19-up/"]YuGiOh: Strike of the Heavens (PG-13)[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: Five friends (cliche, yes I know, get over it) team up and try to track down three ancient relics, the "Daedalus Hero" cards (no reference to GX), of which they have magnificent power. That's.....pretty much it.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Umbra] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232922-legacy-of-the-tormentor-the-dark-doorway-pg-16/"]YuGiOh Legacy of the Tormentor: The Dark Doorway[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: The sequel to perhaps the greatest fanfic of its time, The Dark Doorway picks up the story three years after we left off. Jonah Morae has discarded his inheritance to the Tormentor's throne, allowing the burden to be passed down the lineage, and has set off on a quest to find his missing father. His search leads him to a small town in California, where he soon finds out that he's dealing with something far greater than he could possibly imagine.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Phantom Roxas] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/208027-yu-gi-oh-zodiac-cross-chapter-3-first-duel/"]YuGiOh!: Zodiac Cross[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: Blake Lyners goes to a Duel Academy known as Zodiac Academy. He is placed in the Leo dorm, and with his new friends Cassie and Andrew, his adventures will be unlike any Duel Academy story ever seen.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chaos Sonic] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/246502-return-of-the-vongola-chapter-8-is-up-in-here-pg-16/"]Return of the Vongola[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: Was supposed to be a normal day for Arashi Chiso, but it wasn't. Having met a baby hitman named Final, his life was turned upside down and was messed up. Now Arashi has to fight mafia members and find his six guardians scattered all around the world. After that, he'll need to figure out who has been trying to get rid of him...before they go too far. Its Dying Will Time![/spoiler] [spoiler=Bahamut ZERO] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/237610-yu-gi-oh-armageddon-pg13-final-double-part-chapter/"]YuGiOh: Armageddon[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: Mix of Final Fantasy, Eragon and my other favourite stories. Story begins with simple teenage boy being thrown into rebellion against oppressive Empire that has banned Duel Monsters, before ending up in the usual 'race to save the whole world from doom' thing with similar peeps.[/spoiler] [spoiler=~Purrloin~] [url="http://thecreaturehub.com/index.php?topic=4109.0"]Down[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: Yes, it's not a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic. No, it's not about cute ponies. Yes, it's about a group of youtube game commentators. TBH, this is the first real try at making a fanfic and a planned story in general. Rarley updated because I have a life.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Cursed Reaction] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/252831-yu-gi-oh-lustrous-spirits-pg-13/"]YuGiOh: Lustrous Spirits[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: A plunge into the story of real Duel Spirits. First arc follows the plot of the sudden disappearances of the leaders of this world. Has variable protagonists and and a large fictional universe to explore in the meantime. Somewhat in its early stages, so I could go anywhere.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Darklink401] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/188252-naruto-legend-of-the-kyubi-shards-chapter-40-added/"]Naruto: Legend of the Kyubbi Shards[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: Set place in a future where Madara DID get all tailed beasts together, but when the 9-tails was joined with the rest, it reacted weirdly, and split into nine pieces scattered around the land. Some believe it to be only legend...some believe it to be true. One of those who believe it to be true is Daisuke, the protagonist. Who goes out in search of them, along with his friends.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kyubey] [b]No story as of yet[/b][/spoiler] [center][spoiler=Doom Beast][/center] [url=http://forum.yugiohc...82#entry5617982]Yu-Gi-Oh Legendary Numbers[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: It's a normal day for Alfeo and his friends. Until strange things happen to them and they are thrown into a conflict.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Rai of the Illuminence] [b]No story as of yet.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Thunder-End Dragon] [url=http://forum.yugiohc...oh-ending-time/]YuGiOh: Ending Time[/url] [b]Summary[/b]: The Wicked Gods have been stolen from the Ragnarok Empire which has guarded these three cards for aeons. Now, the three princes of the Empire must track down these cards. But danger awaits and they must raise an army to counter that of the Tenebrae Empire, where the Wicked Gods are worshipped with sacrifices of human blood. Can they call upon the help of the other Kingdoms and their Gods as prophecy states, or will the Tenebrae Empire crush them before they can?[/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 Most Definitely Joining [b]AggroDrago[/b] (or just [b]Aggro[/b] for short) [b][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261201-yu-gi-oh-the-wanderer-chapter-6/"]Yu-Gi-Oh!: The Wanderer[/url][/b] [b]Short Summary[/b]: Is this of me or the story?[list] [*]ME: Written Card Section guru, best with archetypes rather than generics, hate cats and ponies [*]Story: Guy who's been off the radar for a while comes back, meets some friends and joins duel academy for a few weeks to find something. As to who is searching for or why he's looking for him, that is unknown. [/list] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 Star, I think the spoiler for members needs to be fixed. OT: [b]Username: [/b]**Points to Username** Unless you want a real-life name? [b]Fan-Fiction: [/b][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/257812-yu-gi-oh-strike-of-the-heavens-pg-13-chapter-19-up/"]http://forum.yugiohc...-chapter-19-up/[/url] (Discontinued) [b]Summary: [/b] Me: Really? I'm a Demon Hunter. Isn't that bad-ass enough? Story: Five friends (cliche, yes I know, get over it) team up and try to track down three ancient relics, the "Daedalus Hero" cards (no reference to GX), of which they have magnificent power. That's.....pretty much it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 [b]Name[/b]: Umbra [b]Fan-Fiction[/b]:[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232922-legacy-of-the-tormentor-the-dark-doorway-pg-16/"] Legacy of the Tormentor: The Dark Doorway[/url] [b]Short Summary: [/b]The sequel to perhaps the greatest fanfic of its time, The Dark Doorway picks up the story three years after we left off. Jonah Morae has discarded his inheritance to the Tormentor's throne, allowing the burden to be passed down the lineage, and has set off on a quest to find his missing father. His search leads him to a small town in California, where he soon finds out that he's dealing with something far greater than he could possibly imagine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 [b]Name:[/b] Phantom Roxas [b]Fan-Fiction:[/b] [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/208027-yu-gi-oh-zodiac-cross-chapter-3-first-duel/]Yu-Gi-Oh! Zodiac Cross[/url] [b]Short Summary:[/b] Blake Lyners goes to a Duel Academy known as Zodiac Academy. He is placed in the Leo dorm, and with his new friends Cassie and Andrew, his adventures will be unlike any Duel Academy story ever seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 I'll be starting work on my next Fan-Fic soon (actually, I already have, but I mean posting it on here), so I wanted to give everyone a shout-out on here. Even though I discontinued "Strike of the Heavens", I think that "Underground Tyranny" is more solid as a story overall than my previous story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Alright, I've updated and added everyone who posted to the main post. [quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1316736574' post='5533583'] I'll be starting work on my next Fan-Fic soon (actually, I already have, but I mean posting it on here), so I wanted to give everyone a shout-out on here. Even though I discontinued "Strike of the Heavens", I think that "Underground Tyranny" is more solid as a story overall than my previous story. [/quote] Looking forward to it - keep me updated, I'd be glad to take a look once it's finished. I've posted Chapter 15 of my own story, and 16 is finished, it just needs to be uploaded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 [b]Name[/b]: Chaos Sonic [b]Fan-Fiction[/b]: [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/246502-return-of-the-vongola-chapter-8-is-up-in-here-pg-16/]Return of the Vongola[/url] [b]Short Summary[/b]: Was supposed to be a normal day for Arashi Chiso, but it wasn't. Having met a baby hitman named Final, his life was turned upside down and was messed up. Now Arashi has to fight mafia members and find his six guardians scattered all around the world. After that, he'll need to figure out who has been trying to get rid of him...before they go too far. Its Dying Will Time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Name: Dr. Cakey-chan Fan Fic: Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's: Second Ride Summary: 5D's. But written by me. So it must be better. May even actually post another chapter some day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 Thanks again for the invite. Name: Matt a.k.a. Bahamut Zero Fic: Yu-Gi-Oh! Armageddon - Recently finished, but writing some 'five years later' chapters to truly end on [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/237610-yu-gi-oh-armageddon-pg13-final-double-part-chapter/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/237610-yu-gi-oh-armageddon-pg13-final-double-part-chapter/[/url] Summary: Mix of Final Fantasy, Eragon and my other favourite stories. Story begins with simple teenage boy being thrown into rebellion against oppressive Empire that has banned Duel Monsters, before ending up in the usual 'race to save the whole world from doom' thing with similar peeps. Also currently in planning stage for next fic, also YGO based, scheduled for January 2012. Glad to see another club in this stead, lets hope this one is more active. I'll get my home broadband in two weeks, so I'll be on constantly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [quote name='Bahamut ZERO' timestamp='1316840283' post='5536196'] I'll be on constantly. [/quote] [url="http://www.fairfaxunderground.com/forum/file.php?40,file=34767,filename=poster-hell-yes-800.jpg"]http://www.fairfaxun...ell-yes-800.jpg[/url] Firefox makes my images broken. But yea, hell yes. EDIT: It's not spam if the words I wanted to say are in the actual picture itself, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 Won't it just be. Going to be the longest two weeks in the meantime though. Nice name change btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [b]Name[/b]: Purr. Or Leorio. [b]Fan-Fiction[/b]: [url="thecreaturehub.com/index.php?topic=4109.0"]thecreaturehub.com/index.php?topic=4109.0[/url] [b]Short Summary[/b]: Yes, it's not a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic. No, it's not about cute ponies. Yes, it's about a group of youtube game commentators. TBH, this is the first real try at making a fanfic and a planned story in general. Rarley updated because I have a life. Not really much more to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [quote name='~Purrloin~' timestamp='1316888877' post='5537256'] I have a life. [/quote] OMG we have something in common! Fan-Fic writers, rejoice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 Before I formally submit my invitation, since I don't actually have any stories up/active, is it OK if I just join to plan and get feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 Thanks for the invite. [b]Name[/b]: Cursed Reaction [b]Fan-Fiction[/b]: [url= http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/252831-yu-gi-oh-lustrous-spirits-pg-13/]Yu-Gi-Oh! Lustrous Spirits[/url] [b]Short Summary[/b]: A plunge into the story of real Duel Spirits. First arc follows the plot of the sudden disappearances of the leaders of this world. Has variable protagonists and and a large fictional universe to explore in the meantime. Somewhat in its early stages, so I could go anywhere. I might also plan another fiction, but that's ages away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [quote name='Dante v. Nero' timestamp='1316897205' post='5537587'] OMG we have something in common! Fan-Fic writers, rejoice! [/quote] You don't want to know how rare taht is on forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [quote name='Kyubey' timestamp='1316900198' post='5537732'] Before I formally submit my invitation, since I don't actually have any stories up/active, is it OK if I just join to plan and get feedback? [/quote] Well, since no one else seems to be on to answer the question, I suppose its fine. I don't really have a story up at the moment, either. I'm pretty much doing the same thing, so I don't think anyone would mind. [quote name='Cursed Reaction' timestamp='1316900435' post='5537739'] Thanks for the invite. [b]Name[/b]: Cursed Reaction [b]Fan-Fiction[/b]: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/252831-yu-gi-oh-lustrous-spirits-pg-13/"]Yu-Gi-Oh! Lustrous Spirits[/url] [b]Short Summary[/b]: A plunge into the story of real Duel Spirits. First arc follows the plot of the sudden disappearances of the leaders of this world. Has variable protagonists and and a large fictional universe to explore in the meantime. Somewhat in its early stages, so I could go anywhere. I might also plan another fiction, but that's ages away. [/quote] You're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [color=#666600][[/color][color=#000000]b[/color][color=#666600]][/color][color=#660066]Name[/color][color=#666600][/[/color][color=#000000]b[/color][color=#666600]]:[/color][color=#000000] Darklink401[/color] [color=#666600][[/color][color=#000000]b[/color][color=#666600]][/color][color=#660066]Fan[/color][color=#666600]-[/color][color=#660066]Fiction[/color][color=#666600][/[/color][color=#000000]b[/color][color=#666600]]:[/color][color=#000000] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/188252-naruto-legend-of-the-kyubi-shards-chapter-40-added/"]Naruto: Legend of the Kyubi Shards[/url][/color] [color=#666600][[/color][color=#000000]b[/color][color=#666600]][/color][color=#660066]Short[/color] [color=#660066]Summary[/color][color=#666600][/[/color][color=#000000]b[/color][color=#666600]]: Set place in a future where Madara DID get all tailed beasts together, but when the 9-tails was joined with the rest, it reacted weirdly, and split into nine pieces scattered around the land. Some believe it to be only legend...some believe it to be true. One of those who believe it to be true is Daisuke, the protagonist. Who goes out in search of them, along with his friends.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 Yay DL is here!! This man is the co-writer for the Vongola Fic I got...dude is great to work with ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 Alright then! :'D Anyways, I have a story idea (tentatively titled "Bookstore"), but before I spill any more specifics, I'd like an opinion on setting. Imho, all manga can be divided into either modern Japan settings or schizo-modern European-esque fantasy. I'm equally capable of doing either one, but which, as a reader, would you rather? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 If you want a more natural setting, Modern Japan. If you want to break from the norm, choose the latter instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 25, 2011 Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 Well, since this IS a club about writers and reading and proofreading and other such nonsense, I would actually feel a lot more comfortable posting the prologue of my new story up here than just give up halfway through my story, like on my last one because I was short of readers. You can probably tell that I am anxious to show off my work. Anyway, if y'all want to read this epicness, here it is.................son. (My lolfail attempt at being gangster) [spoiler='Prologue'] [size=5][font=times new roman,times,serif]YU-GI-OH! Underground Tyranny[/font][/size] [size=5][b][font=times new roman,times,serif]Prologue[/font][/b][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]The screaming of the fans…the joy of seeing people fall under his command…this is the thing that he truly loved. Ever since years ago when the show began, he has had an obsession with it, trying to rake in all of the money and ratings that he could ever hope to attain. However, as of late, the show has lost ratings. People stopped watching and coming to the grand spectacle. People stopped dialing in to see their favorite contestants battle it out in the greatest arena challenge ever known to man. People stopped commenting on their daily blogs about the most adrenaline-packed, action-pumped, underground combat sport that had taken control people’s lives, and have completely moved on to something different.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]And was the mastermind behind the greatest television series of all time going to stand for this? Not one bit.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]A large, bulk man sat in front of a wide-screen television, watching the last episode that ever aired of his beloved television show. Two young duelists, both male, had lined up to take each other on in the arena. Both of them were strapped with an implant device on their hip. Maybe that was the reason…no, he could not think about that right now. The large man sat watching the duel unfold right before his eyes.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“And now, by Dark Tuning the Level ten “Dark Tuner Chaos Bloom” with the Level three “[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Marauding_Captain"]Marauding Captain[/url]”, I can call forth the ultimate monster!”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][spoiler='Dark Tuner Chaos Bloom'][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]Fiend/Dark Tuner/Effect[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]Level 10[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]DARK[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]1000 ATK/1000 DEF[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]By Banishing two monsters from your field and paying 1000 Life Points, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. This card can only be used to Synchro Summon a Dark Synchro Monster by subtracting this cards level from one other monster you control; the result must match the selected Dark Synchro Monster.[/spoiler][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]The large man slapped his forehead with his hand. “I can’t believe that they would still use Synchros and Dark Synchros, especially in this period and age,” said the rather gruff man. He then sat up from his slouched position. “Maybe that’s it. People need something more exciting than just pathetic Synchros and Dark Synchros. Maybe there is something else out there that can excite the crowd once more!” He then turned around in his chair and grabbed his pen, fervently writing down anything and everything that came to his mind. He would re-build the ultimate arena, and then he would gather all of the greatest Duelists from around the world, and force them to compete.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]Originally, it was his idea to kidnap duelists off the streets and force them to compete in high-adrenaline, action-packed dueling in order to see which one of them could be crowned the season’s best duelist. But people did not like that prospect. They all thought it was a fluke, and so, they stopped watching, commenting, and dialing in, and eventually the ratings got so low and the cash had dwindled down so much that they had to cancel. The audience felt that the matches were rigged, which was not his intention. Maybe now, he should only focus on the best of the best, and leave the rest to die in the hellhole of today’s society. The large bulk man, still scratching down ideas on his paper, also turned around occasionally to see the outcome of the last duel ever recorded.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“And now, “Dark Fairy Dragon” can unleash a direct attack on your Life Points! I win this match.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif][spoiler='Dark Fairy Dragon'][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]Level -7[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]Dragon/Dark Synchro/Effect[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]DARK[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]2500 ATK/3000 DEF[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]This card can only be Synchro Summoning by using a Dark Synchro Material Monster. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 Field Spell on the field. Inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent and add 1 Field Spell from your Deck to your hand. You may also Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard once per turn. If you use this effect, this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF (permanently). [/spoiler][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]The large man did not look up from his papers. “Yes you did,” mumbled the man, “yes you did. But that wasn’t good enough.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]His thoughts were disturbed when someone came through the door, which magnetically opened itself up from both sides. The person was wearing an orange suit and had a helmet on his head, with a visor masking his eyes. He walked slowly towards the large bulk man.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“Hard at work, are you,” said the man in the orange suit. “That’s a first.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“Oh, don’t give me that crap, Snape,” said the large bulk man. The man in the orange suit retaliated. He was not used to this sort of behavior from his boss. “I need to make this season the most electrifying, the most grueling, and the most thrilling season ever to hit television sets across the entire world. Moreover, what have you to contribute yet? Nothing!”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“Humph. The only reason people don’t watch any more is because you’ve run out of ideas,” Snape replied. The large bulk man found truth in his words. He simply sighed and returned writing on his papers. “I’ve told you a hundred times before: if you want to be the most grueling competition ever, don’t just kidnap random duelists from off of the streets. Make an attempt.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“Hah,” the gruff man replied. “That’s easier said than done. Thirty years ago, we would have been worshipping Yuma Tsukara. Whatever happened to that prospect? I’ll tell you what happened: Duelists have no respect anymore.” The large man spun around in his chair and turned the television off, prompting him to spin right around again. “I’ll tell you what I’m going to be doing next, Snape, and it’ll be the last thing you ever expect.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“Yea? How so?”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]The large man snickered. “Let’s just say I’ve thought of some…improvements…while you were off doing business.” The large man fiddled with his hands, as though there were something inside of them, but in reality, there was nothing. “I’ll have the ultimate opening act…the greatest preview in history…I’ll have complete carnage return to the arena, and then…people will star to tune in again. The audience will open their votes as to who the greatest Duelist will be, as to who will win tomorrow’s match, as to…”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]“Whatever. Crazy lunatic,” interrupted Snape, as he exited out of the room. “Enjoy your little brain-storming…Adalberto.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]As the door closed, the gruff man continued looking at his paper, grinning maniacally. “Humph. What they do not realize is that they will be pawns in my game, too. The Four Prime. They made their debut last season, and this season…they shall return. Snape, Warhead, Angelica, and Chip…people will come from all over to see the most exciting Duels of the Century. People will come everywhere! And people will rejoice, as the game of Duel Monsters has not yet ceased to exist!”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman,times,serif]Adalberto looked up from his papers and grinned. “Welcome back…Underground Tyranny!”[/font][/size] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 25, 2011 Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 [quote name='Dante v. Nero' timestamp='1316911746' post='5538254'] Well, since this IS a club about writers and reading and proofreading and other such nonsense, I would actually feel a lot more comfortable posting the prologue of my new story up here than just give up halfway through my story, like on my last one because I was short of readers. You can probably tell that I am anxious to show off my work. Anyway, if y'all want to read this epicness, here it is.................son. (My lolfail attempt at being gangster) [spoiler='Prologue'] [size=5][font=times new roman, times, serif]YU-GI-OH! Underground Tyranny[/font][/size] [size=5][b][font=times new roman, times, serif]Prologue[/font][/b][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]The screaming of the fans…the joy of seeing people fall under his command…this is the thing that he truly loved. Ever since years ago when the show began, he has had an obsession with it, trying to rake in all of the money and ratings that he could ever hope to attain. However, as of late, the show has lost ratings. People stopped watching and coming to the grand spectacle. People stopped dialing in to see their favorite contestants battle it out in the greatest arena challenge ever known to man. People stopped commenting on their daily blogs about the most adrenaline-packed, action-pumped, underground combat sport that had taken control people’s lives, and have completely moved on to something different.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]And was the mastermind behind the greatest television series of all time going to stand for this? Not one bit.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]A large, bulk man sat in front of a wide-screen television, watching the last episode that ever aired of his beloved television show. Two young duelists, both male, had lined up to take each other on in the arena. Both of them were strapped with an implant device on their hip. Maybe that was the reason…no, he could not think about that right now. The large man sat watching the duel unfold right before his eyes.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“And now, by Dark Tuning the Level ten “Dark Tuner Chaos Bloom” with the Level three “[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Marauding_Captain"]Marauding Captain[/url]”, I can call forth the ultimate monster!”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif][spoiler='Dark Tuner Chaos Bloom'][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]Fiend/Dark Tuner/Effect[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]Level 10[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]DARK[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]1000 ATK/1000 DEF[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]By Banishing two monsters from your field and paying 1000 Life Points, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. This card can only be used to Synchro Summon a Dark Synchro Monster by subtracting this cards level from one other monster you control; the result must match the selected Dark Synchro Monster.[/spoiler][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]The large man slapped his forehead with his hand. “I can’t believe that they would still use Synchros and Dark Synchros, especially in this period and age,” said the rather gruff man. He then sat up from his slouched position. “Maybe that’s it. People need something more exciting than just pathetic Synchros and Dark Synchros. Maybe there is something else out there that can excite the crowd once more!” He then turned around in his chair and grabbed his pen, fervently writing down anything and everything that came to his mind. He would re-build the ultimate arena, and then he would gather all of the greatest Duelists from around the world, and force them to compete.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]Originally, it was his idea to kidnap duelists off the streets and force them to compete in high-adrenaline, action-packed dueling in order to see which one of them could be crowned the season’s best duelist. But people did not like that prospect. They all thought it was a fluke, and so, they stopped watching, commenting, and dialing in, and eventually the ratings got so low and the cash had dwindled down so much that they had to cancel. The audience felt that the matches were rigged, which was not his intention. Maybe now, he should only focus on the best of the best, and leave the rest to die in the hellhole of today’s society. The large bulk man, still scratching down ideas on his paper, also turned around occasionally to see the outcome of the last duel ever recorded.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“And now, “Dark Fairy Dragon” can unleash a direct attack on your Life Points! I win this match.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif][spoiler='Dark Fairy Dragon'][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]Level -7[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]Dragon/Dark Synchro/Effect[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]DARK[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]2500 ATK/3000 DEF[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]This card can only be Synchro Summoning by using a Dark Synchro Material Monster. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 Field Spell on the field. Inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent and add 1 Field Spell from your Deck to your hand. You may also Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard once per turn. If you use this effect, this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF (permanently). [/spoiler][/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]The large man did not look up from his papers. “Yes you did,” mumbled the man, “yes you did. But that wasn’t good enough.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]His thoughts were disturbed when someone came through the door, which magnetically opened itself up from both sides. The person was wearing an orange suit and had a helmet on his head, with a visor masking his eyes. He walked slowly towards the large bulk man.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“Hard at work, are you,” said the man in the orange suit. “That’s a first.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“Oh, don’t give me that crap, Snape,” said the large bulk man. The man in the orange suit retaliated. He was not used to this sort of behavior from his boss. “I need to make this season the most electrifying, the most grueling, and the most thrilling season ever to hit television sets across the entire world. Moreover, what have you to contribute yet? Nothing!”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“Humph. The only reason people don’t watch any more is because you’ve run out of ideas,” Snape replied. The large bulk man found truth in his words. He simply sighed and returned writing on his papers. “I’ve told you a hundred times before: if you want to be the most grueling competition ever, don’t just kidnap random duelists from off of the streets. Make an attempt.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“Hah,” the gruff man replied. “That’s easier said than done. Thirty years ago, we would have been worshipping Yuma Tsukara. Whatever happened to that prospect? I’ll tell you what happened: Duelists have no respect anymore.” The large man spun around in his chair and turned the television off, prompting him to spin right around again. “I’ll tell you what I’m going to be doing next, Snape, and it’ll be the last thing you ever expect.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“Yea? How so?”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]The large man snickered. “Let’s just say I’ve thought of some…improvements…while you were off doing business.” The large man fiddled with his hands, as though there were something inside of them, but in reality, there was nothing. “I’ll have the ultimate opening act…the greatest preview in history…I’ll have complete carnage return to the arena, and then…people will star to tune in again. The audience will open their votes as to who the greatest Duelist will be, as to who will win tomorrow’s match, as to…”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]“Whatever. Crazy lunatic,” interrupted Snape, as he exited out of the room. “Enjoy your little brain-storming…Adalberto.”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]As the door closed, the gruff man continued looking at his paper, grinning maniacally. “Humph. What they do not realize is that they will be pawns in my game, too. The Four Prime. They made their debut last season, and this season…they shall return. Snape, Warhead, Angelica, and Chip…people will come from all over to see the most exciting Duels of the Century. People will come everywhere! And people will rejoice, as the game of Duel Monsters has not yet ceased to exist!”[/font][/size] [size=4][font=times new roman, times, serif]Adalberto looked up from his papers and grinned. “Welcome back…Underground Tyranny!”[/font][/size] [/spoiler] [/quote] I shall likely read soon. And...I say modern Japan. Gives it a more...realistic feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted September 25, 2011 Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 So, my "ongoing" story is something that I thought would be interesting to do, but lost interest in. However, I do have a fic I have plans for, that I plan to start actually writing within a few days or so. From what's been said, I think it's still okay if I join for feedback and stuff, until I start, but I'm just asking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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