Thar Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 "Con crit, plz" means "constructive criticism, please." Thank you. :3 [center][center][size=6][i][b]~~~~~~~~~~[/b][/i][/size][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ZFxU7.jpg[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][i]You may reveal this card (from your hand): Pay 1000 Life Points: Banish this card and sacrifice a monster; select one of your banished creatures and Special Summon it. When that monster is removed from the field: Banish it instead; return this card to your Deck; shuffle your Deck.[/i][/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/UziYx.jpg[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][i]You may reveal this card (from your hand): Sacrifice a monster and banish this card; search your Deck for a Warrior-type monster and add it to your hand; shuffle your Deck.[/i][/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/fX986.jpg[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][i]You may reveal this card (from your hand): Banish this card; pick up the top 3 cards in your Deck and select 1 at random. Add the selected card to your hand and banish the others. If a "Valkyrie" card was banished this way, return this card to your Deck; shuffle your Deck.[/i][/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/CYR0y.jpg[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b][i]You may reveal this card (from your hand); Banish this card and discard your hand. While this card is banished: Monsters whose ATK is less than or equal to this card cannot attack or activate their effects. Your opponent can pay 2000 Life Points: Return this card to your Deck; shuffle your Deck and send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.[/i][/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][size=6][b][i]~~~~~~~~~~[/i][/b][/size][/center][/center] [left][left][size=4]Try to exclude the OCG. I'm still getting used to it.[/size][/left][/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Sunrise: that banished monster you may have to be more specific or it'll be OPed Winter is a bit weak for lv7, but at least it's a pretty good Skill Drain for a lot of lv4 or lower cards, so I like it 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Here are my ideas for naming and effects: [b]Sunrise Valkyrie:[/b] During your Main Phase, you can reveal this card in your hand and pay 1000 Life Points: Tribute 1 monster and banish this card; Special Summon 1 of your banished monsters. When that monster leaves the field: Banish it, and return this banished card to your Deck. [i]An interesting pseudo-trump, but not one that will get much use since it needs a field presence to do anything. The only Deck that could use this would be "D.D." Decks, and only then would be used for returning "Warrior Lady" or "Survivor"; and there's "Escape from the Dark Dimension" and "D.D.R." for that. Plus, they both have much easier (or none at all) costs to deal with.[/i] [b]Jousting Valkyrie:[/b] During your Main Phase, you can reveal this card in your hand: Tribute 1 monster and banish this card; Add 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. [i]Again, and interesting take on Warrior support, but since modern Warriors like to keep their field presence and don't use anything but the Graveyard, it's out of place.[/i] [b]All-Seeing Valkyrie:[/b] During your Main Phase, you can reveal and banish this card in your hand: Pick up the top 3 cards of your Deck and add 1 to your hand at random; Banish any other picked up cards. If a "Valkyrie" monster was banished through this card's effect: Return this banished card to your Deck. [i]Basically, a monster "Pot of Duality". I don't like it at all.[/i] [b]Winter Valkyrie:[/b] During your Main Phase, you can reveal this card in your hand: Banish this card, and discard your hand. While this card is banished through its own effect: Monsters with less than 2000 ATK cannot attack or activate their effects. Your opponent can pay 2000 Life Points: Return this banished card to your Deck; Send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. [i]A really easy lockdown effect with no real cost. And a perfect way to set up a selection of "Chaos" summons.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Winter has quite a low attack for a level 7 but that's so it's effect isn't OP'd right... Plus if it wasn't high level it's effect would be OP'd. So you have done a good job of keeping such a tricky card balanced props there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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