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When you make a Ritual monster make sure that you put the way he can be Ritual Summoned

example "This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "7 Chaos Emeralds". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

Your Spell card should be like "When you activate this card ,increse the ATK of "Shadow the Hedgehog" by 1000"

And if Want to make Normal Monsters try to add something cool to the description of that monster

but if you do make Normal Monsters you won't get any good rates

Oh and try working on your Grammar :D

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Well your cards haven't improven much

And its Chaos not caos

Ritual Spell --->This card is used to Ritual Summon "Super Shadow" , "Super Sonic" and "Super Knuckles". You must offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

 

Ritual Monsters---->This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Chaos Emeralds". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

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  • 2 weeks later...

I'm not going to rate these, since I would just come off as harsh, so I'll just give you some tips...

 

Start using some better grammar. If English isn't your first language, get someone on the forum to help you.

 

The pictures are actually pretty nice, you don't need to do much about that.

 

Some effects are REALLY overpowered. Fix those up.

 

Going along with the grammar problems, the OCG on your cards are horrible, frankly. You need to fix that up, along with the flavor text of your normal monsters.

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