first Written XYZ monster's

[dimitri]

[b]Gaia Ray - The Black Lance[/b]
EARTH
Rank 4
Warrior / XYZ / Effect
2 Level 4 monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 XYZ material monster from this card to select 1 monster on the field and decrease its ATK and DEF by 1000
ATK/ 2300 DEF/1600



[b]Sky Beewesper[/b]
WIND
Rank 3
Insect/ XYZ / Effect
2 Level 3 monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 XYZ material monster from this card to select 1 monster on your side of the field and then this card gains ATK equal to half of its DEF until the End Phase
ATK/ 1200 DEF/1700


[b]Giga Orb Golem[/b]
LIGHT
Rank 5
Rock / XYZ / Effect
2 Level 5 monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 XYZ material monster from this card to Draw card(s) equal to the number of Level 5 or lower monster(s) on the field. When a XYZ material is detached from this card, increase its ATK by 400. When this card has no XYZ material's attached, you cannot change it battle position.
ATK/ 1800 DEF/2300

[b]Vulcanic Spirit[/b]
FIRE
Rank 2
Pyro / XYZ / Effect
3 Level 2 monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 1 XYZ material monster from this card to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent equal to the number of spell and trap card(s) on your opponent side of the field.
ATK/ 800 DEF/1000


[b]Whirlpool Archfiend[/b]
WATER
Rank 4
Fiend / XYZ / Effect
3 Level 4 monsters
Once per turn ,you can detach 1 XYZ material monster from this card to select up to 3 card(s) on the field and return them to the hand.
ATK/ 2450 DEF/2050


[b]Black Solar Flower[/b]
DARK
Rank 1
Plant / XYZ / Effect
3 Level 1 monsters
For each Plant-type monster attached to this card, increase its DEF by 500. Durring your opponent turn, you can detach 1 XYZ material monster from this card to select 1 monster on the field and that monster cannot attack until next turn.
ATK/ 500 DEF/ 700

[Time Psyduck]

First thing of note: not one of these cards has a once per turn clause. At a minimum Giga Orb Golem, Vulcanic Spirit and Whirlpool Archfiend should be limited to once per turn.

Gaia Ray:
It's nice to get over big monsters, but underwhelming otherwise, and outside of things like Gadget Xyz that are built entirely around Rank 4 spam I can't see there being space for it.

Sky Beesweeper:
Is it Rank 2, as listed, or Rank 3, as the materials imply? As a Rank 3, it's stats are very low, and whilst it could gain a lot from it's effect, you'd need something with a massive defence to catch up to Leviathan or even Brilli-Ant, which retain permanent boosts. As a Rank 2, it's more useful for getting over things, and can work with Daigusto Pheonix, but the latter has other options that can get a higher ATK than just this.

Giga Orb:
Problematic, since it's not too hard to get at least 1-2 other monsters out, and if your opponent has a few monsters it becomes ridiculous draw power. Rank 5 makes it a bit harder to do, but far from impossible, and can generate far too much advantage. Also, it should start at 1800 and gain ATK for each material it has, so as to prevent the use of Skill Drain/Forbidden Chalice to reset it's ATK (note that even when these effects no longer apply, the ATK would stay at 2800).

Vulcanic Spirit:
A decent burn, although less effective at present because Heavy Storm and 3x MST discourage playing a lot of Spell/Traps, and if your opponent did have a full backrow, there's a good chance they can stop this. It still needs a once per turn clause, because on the rare chance they have a full backrown and a field it can OTK by itself. Stats also seem low - the current Rank 2's seem to compare in stats to higher-end level 3's, whereas this looks more like the stats found on Rank 1's

Whirlpool Archfiend:
Needs the 1 per turn limit, otherwise it can completely empty the opponent's field. Would help to ensure OTKs, and remove problems to let you ATK, as well as re-using your own spells and traps. The stats are nice, since it's ATK is at a level where those 50 points make a significant difference. Apart from the lack of restriction, it's very good.

Black Solar Flower:
It will never be able to ATK without support, since 1500 won't do a whole lot, and you're unlikely to put 3 plants into this anyway - 2, with Evil Thorn, but not 3, because decks that would summon this would often use Battle Fader/Treeborn Frog/Kinka-Byo as materials. The attack negation is nice, especially as a quick effect, but once they get more than one monster Galaxy Queen becomes a far more practical defensive option.

[dimitri]

[quote name='Time Psyduck' timestamp='1316125245' post='5516960']
First thing of note: not one of these cards has a once per turn clause. At a minimum Giga Orb Golem, Vulcanic Spirit and Whirlpool Archfiend should be limited to once per turn.

[/quote]

i have taken your comment to it and added the once per turn to all of them, also i changed some things to them like effects and atk en def

[Toffee.]

[quote name='Time Psyduck' timestamp='1316125245' post='5516960']
not one of these cards has a once per turn clause. [/quote]
Not every Xyz monster is required to have one, for it's detachment of materials.

@TC: These actually aren't the "first" Xyz monsters to appear in Written cards, s I'll just assume you meant [i]your[/i] first Xyzs in Written cards.

[NumberCruncher]

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1316195257' post='5518590'] Not every Xyz monster is required to have one, for it's detachment of materials.[/quote]

But all of these particular Xyz monsters did need it.