prisoner monsters part 1

[junk sorcerer]

hi i can't load my pics so here are my written cards please comment






prisoner 7000 : lizial croaker
effect: when this card is normal summoned special summon ''prisoner 7001 :frogsus''. when ''prisoner 7001 : frogsus is destroyed by battle tribute this card to special summon '' prisoner ' calsified ' 7000: lizial genecidius''.
attribute: dark type: aqua atk: 200 def: 200 tuner level:3






prisoner 4289 : saber skimmer
effect: this card gains 1000 attack and defense each standby phase it is on the field.
attribute: dark type: warrior atk:0 def: 0 effect level:5






prisoner 1000: alpha gladiator
effect: this card gains 400 attack for each prisoner monster on the field. if your opponent targets a prisoner monster they must attack this card instead.
attribute: dark type: warrior atk: 1200 def: 2000 effect level: 4






prisoner 319: malicious
this card may attack your opponent direct, if it does so all monsters on the field except prisoner monsters halve their attack until the end phase of your opponent's next turn. this card loses 500 attack every time it attacks.
attribute: dark type: warrior atk: 2600 def:2400 effect level:4






prisoner 99: cinder pheonice
effect: when this card is summoned destroy one monster on each players side of the field. if this card attacks a machine type monster that monster is destroyed at the end of the damage step. damage inflicted by this card is doubled. if a prisoner monster would be destroyed by battle this card and the opposing card are destroyed and sent to the grave instead. if this card is destroyed by it's own effect special summon it during your next standby phase.
attribute: dark type: pyro atk: 1700 def: 1000 effect level: 4

[evawin]

I think you need to clean up the layout of your cards...it hurts my eyes to read them. D:

[NumberCruncher]

[quote name='evawin' timestamp='1316111624' post='5516613']I think you need to clean up the layout of your cards...it hurts my eyes to read them. D:[/quote]

It's true. Try a format more like

Card's Name

Attribute, Level

Type, Wheter it's a Tuner/Synchro/ect.

Effect in full

ATK/DEF


That way, it's in a format that is more eye-pleasing and similar to the stucture of an actual Yu-Gi-Oh! card. As it is, it's too difficult to navigate through your description to learn what we want to learn about your cards.