CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted September 7, 2011 Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Posting only the first 6 cards then will post 4-5 mores later so that there isn't too much cards to reads. also they're in YVD format, been doing this way for long time sorry xD. [color=#ff8c00]|Seaflare Wildserpent|???|????|Sea Serpent/Effect|Fire|4||1300|900|When a face-up LIGHT monster you control is destroyed and send to the Graveyard from the field: Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned: Reveal 1 Sea Serpent-type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your hand; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the revealed monster's DEF. The effects of "Seaflare Wildserpent" can only be activate once per turn.|[/color] [color=#ff8c00]|Shining Sunorca|???|????|Sea Serpent/Effect|Light|4||1500|800|Once per turn: you can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to add 1 LIGHT or FIRE Sea Serpent-Type Monster with 1500 ATK or less from your Deck to your hand. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard from the field: Reveal 1 Sea-Serpent-Type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your hand; Gain life points equal to the revealed monster's ATK.|[/color] [color=#ff8c00]|Blaze Helliathan|???|????|Sea Serpent|Fire|5||1000|900|When a face-up LIGHT monster you control is destroyed: you can Special Summoned this card from your hand; destroy 1 card your opponent controls. When this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field: you can add 1 Sea Serpent-Type with 1500 ATK or less from your Graveyard Except "Blaze Helliathan".|[/color] [color=#ff8c00]|Hope Leviabliss|???|????|Sea Serpent/effect|Light|5||1100|900|When a face-up FIRE Monster you control is destroyed: you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard: draw 1 card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field: you can select 1 Sea Serpent-type monster with 1500 ATK or less, except "Hope Leviabliss",from your Deck and place it on the top of your Deck. The effects of "Hope Leviabliss" can only be activate once per turn.||[/color] [color=#ff8c00]|White Sears-Fish Lancer|???|????|Sea Serpent/Effect|Fire|4||1400|1000|This card is treated as a LIGHT monster. When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned from your Graveyard: you can make this card Level 5. If you do: this card's effect cannot be activated until the End Phase. When this is Normal Summoned, Special Summoned or destroyed and sent to the Graveyard from the field: inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard and gain 200 life points for each LIGHT monster in your Graveyard. This effect can only be activated once per turn.|[/color] [color=#ff8c00]|Rekindarray|Sea Serpent/Effect|Light|4||1300|900|This card is treated as FIRE monster. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard from the field: you can Special Summoned 1 FIRE or LIGHT monster with 1500 ATK or less from your Graveyard except "Rekindarray". If you do: you can make that monster becomes level 5 and its ATK and DEF become 0. When a FIRE or LIGHT monster you control is destroyed: send 1 card from your hand to return this card to the top of your Deck.|[/color] [color=#ff8c00]|Sacred-Eyes Blazing Phoenix|???|????|Winged-Beast/Effect|FIRE|9|2400|2000|Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by Tributing 3 monsters you control, including at least 1 LIGHT monster and 1 FIRE monster. This card is treated as a LIGHT monster. This card gain 100 ATK for each monster in your Graveyard. When this card would leaves the field by a card effect: destroyed this card instead. Then, Special Summon this card during the beginning of your turn. When this card is Special Summoned from your Graveyard: you can return up to 3 cards your opponent controls. If you do: inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each monster and gain 400 life points for each Spell or Trap Card returns this way.| [/color] [color=#000000]|Sea Dragon Celestial, Leviark|???|????|Sea Serpent/Xyz/Effect|Light|4||2000|1600|2 Level 4 LIGHT Monsters When you Special Summon a monster from your hand or Graveyard: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: destroy 1 face-up monster or 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on the field.| [/color] [color=#000000]|Magma Leviathan Deity, Leviarch|???|????|Sea Serpent/Xyz/Effect|5||2200|1800|2 Level 5 FIRE Monsters When a monster is Special Summoned from either Graveyards: you can detach 1 Xyz Materials from this card; inflict 200 damage to your opponent x the level of the Special Summoned monster and it loses 400 ATK until the End Phase.|[/color] [color=#000000]|Life-Awakened Fallen Leviathan|???|????|Sea Serpent/Xyz/Effect|Light|5||2200|2000|2 Level 5 Sea Serpent-Type monsters When this card would leaves the field: you can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card: Destroy this card; gain life points equal to this card's DEF. If you do: Special Summoned 1 level 5 or lower monster from your Graveyard at the End Phase of that turn.| |Ash-Rised Sear Dragon|???|????|Sea Serpent/Xyz/Effect|Fire|4||2000|1700| 2 Level 4 Sea Serpent-Type monsters When this card would leaves the field: you can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; destroy this card. If you do: Special Summoned this card from your Graveyard during the End phase of that turn. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard by its effect: inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's ATK.|[/color] i hope the colour is okay to read, let me know if i need to change it till then CnC Link to comment
Nine Breaker Posted September 7, 2011 Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 [color=#800000][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Interesting set. I like them. Especially the Hope Leviabliss. Rekindarry might be a little stronger than most, but seems balanced. I'll wait and see what else you have in store.[/font][/color] Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted September 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 [quote name='Nine Breaker' timestamp='1315363638' post='5497697'] [color=#800000][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Interesting set. I like them. Especially the Hope Leviabliss. Rekindarry might be a little stronger than most, but seems balanced. I'll wait and see what else you have in store.[/font][/color] [/quote] thanks Hope Levialiss before was kinda more abusable when the term was "When a face-up FIRE monster leaves the field" so i nerfed it , i believe Rekindarray is to be a bit of the set's centre to hold up but not sure. the other 4 cards are actually Xyz monsters and will post it later. Link to comment
NumberCruncher Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 First I make an archetype with FIRE and DARK attribute monsters. Now all of a sudden, I see FIRE and WATER/FIRE and LIGHT everywhere. Coincidence? OT: Finally some good,non-Diva support for Sea Serpents. Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 [quote name='NumberCruncher' timestamp='1315447699' post='5499182'] First I make an archetype with FIRE and DARK attribute monsters. Now all of a sudden, I see FIRE and WATER/FIRE and LIGHT everywhere. Coincidence? OT: Finally some good,non-Diva support for Sea Serpents. [/quote] yeah for some reason i see that too O.o hmm Diva Support? that never really hit me at the point although they're lvl 4 and higher so it's good that they're not lvl 3 or lower lol EDIT: Add the Xyz monsters, thought a day later would be enough time for to post add them Link to comment
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Time Psyduck Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 Seaflare Wildserpent: Something with low ATK and high DEF could result in massive burn, and it creates an infinite loop with Leviabliss, but other than that it doesn't look bad. Have it banished after it uses the SS effect, and have the revealed monster need X DEF or less, to have better control of the burn. Also, it needs to say where you reveal the Sea Serpent from. Shining Sunorca: It turns everything in your hand into a Sangan search for anything in 2 attributes. Limit it to LIGHT/FIRE Sea Serpents and it's fine though. Blaze Helliathan: The recovery effect should really only work if sent to the Grave from the field, or perhaps field or Xyz Material, and maybe need your opponent to destroy it. Also, add it to where? Hope Leviabliss: Loops with Wildserpent, generates +1s, and searches out other monsters in the theme. Like Wildserpent, it needs the removal effect, although it could be changed to still work if it's banished by it's own effect instead. White Sears-Fish Lancer: It should be 'The effect of "White Sears-Fish Lancer" can only be activated once per turn', and 'This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster'. I'd also make the burn effect only activate on destruction, just to simplify the effect. Rekindarray: The card's level becomes 5, rather than the card becoming level 5, and you need to say where it goes to the deck from - as is it's from the field, which just slows you up. Sea Dragon Celestial, Leviark: Overall, it's nice. I'd make the ATK gain only until the End Phase (and if it already is, it needs to say it), and perhaps also have the effect apply whilst it has materials, rather than when it doesn't, to fit with the general theme of Xyz monsters. Magma Leviathan Deity, Leviarch: Pretty much the same as the above. Life-Awakened Fallen Leviathan: It's nice, but 2300 seems a litle underpowered for what's little more than a beatstick with a revival. It could go to 2500-2600 easily, although perhaps limiting the revival to Sea Serpents. Ash-Rised Sear Dragon: Needs to specify it's summoned from the grave, in case your opponent removes it for some reason, but other than that it's nice. Overall, they're nice cards. It's good that they don't work with Diva, because it splits the Sea Serpents, so you can't run most or all of the best ones together. Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted September 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 Well i went most of your suggestion although they're all meant to regard to the field all the time. also i did some other alternative toward your suggestions. i wasn't too keen on the suggestion on the xyz monsters as your suggestion seem to be at generic Xyz monster's standard while those are not generic also they're kinda at point of being between rank 3-4 and rank 4-5 so they're like 3.5 and 4.5 in a way. so with Leviark and leviarch i rid the last effects and bump their ATK and DEF by 200 instead. the last 2 Xyz monster: i bump down the ATK from 2300 to 2200 and still kept its effect general and for the last one i added the graveyard. Link to comment
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