Raven des blutroten Mondes Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 This is my first fan fiction I have made so comment and tell me how I did.1. Italics are thoughts, but you all knew that >.>2. Brackets are setting time 3. This fic is rated PG-16 for some questionable language/themes. [The year is 1954, it has been 9 year since the end of World War II and the United States is still riding on an emotional high from winning the war.The American population is proud that there country had won a war to protect there allies.For the east coast of America things were going fine, but in the west there have been some problem that have arisen.The crime rate in major city has sky rocketed, and riots have started to form.The worse of the major city for violence and crime is Reno, Nevada and that is where our story starts Reno is not as big as it is today it only about half the size and the biggest building is only about four stories tall. The streets are littered with trash, its impossible to take a step without stepping in other peoples garbage.There are abandoned cars on every corner rusting away in the city streets.The most famous hang out for people is the Western Heights Tavern.][spoiler=Plot]The plot of this story is following the lives of the people who live in Reno. The plot will grow as the story goes and sub plot will sprout out. [spoiler=Main Characters]Harro-The main bartender at Western Heights Garry-The owner of the Western HeightsWillow-Herro's best friend Ill have the first chapter up later tonight or tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 Sorry, but you have nothing for the real story here, so I'm locking this. However, provide with the first chapter or at least a prologue and I will happily unlock this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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