MLP: FiM fic: Diamonds and Friendship Are Forever

[Bull3tM0nk3y]

My first ever fan fic that someone has liked.

[b]Diamonds and Friendship Are Forever[/b]

[spoiler=Chapter 1: The Note]

“Dear Princess Celestia, it has come to my attention that somepony has seen me, and wants to be on a date with me.” Twilight Sparkle had said to Spike, who was taking the letter to the Princess. “What, what?” said Spike interrupting Twilight’s train of thought. “Somepony wants to take you out!?” “Well yes Spike” said Twilight. “He have noticed me and thought they have that I am beautiful. Ether that or they are in love with me.” Spike stuck out his tongue and poked at it and down his throat. “Spike, it’s not like you are in love with somepony else you know.” “I know.” said Spike. “It’s just… it’s just…” “It’s what Spike? You can say anything to me, remember?” Spike let go of the letter, and sat down on a chair in the room. “Well, I’m just not sure if this guy really loves you. If he just wants to take you away from your friends and me.” Twilight looked at Spike, and walked next to him. “Spike, I would never, ever, let that happen to you or my friends. He just wants to see if we could go together.” Spike looked happy, but still had the idea of losing Twilight’s friendship to him.

“Hey, Twi…” “Yes Spike?” “What this guys name anyways?” Twilight was confused for a moment trying to remember this guys name. “Hmmm, let me take a look at the note again.” Twilight walked over to a nearby table that had the note on it. It said; “[i]Dear Twilight Sparkle, I have noticed you from afar and wish we could talk together. If you wish to meet me, come to Sugar Cube Corner at 8:30 PM. I’ll be the gentlecolt that is light brown and dark brown hair. I’ve reserved table 14 for us.[/i]” “It doesn’t say, he just said to meet him at Sugar Cube Corner.” Twilight had said somewhat loudly. Spike was confused. “Why would he do that? I mean it is kind of rude for a date.” “Spike, it’s called a blind date for a reason.”

Soon afterwards, they heard a knock on the door. “Twilight? You in there?” It was Rarity. “You can come in Rare.” Rarity had her back basket full, and her mouth had a small rope to help hold the basket from falling down. “I can’t really do that dear. Can Spike open the door for me?” When Spike he had heard the words “Spike” and “Open the door for me” had ran to the door to help her right away.

Rarity had her basket full of cloths, and gems. Spike soon felt hungry for gems. “Twilight, do you have a book on sewing? I’ve forgotten a trick on it. Hard to believe right?” Twilight answered. “Yes, I think I do, but it is in the back of my collection of books.” Rarity was shocked. One because of Twilight having a book on sewing, and two, she thought Twilight had trying to learn sewing. “Twilight dear.” Rarity said. “Have you ever tried sewing?” Twilight nodded yes. “I have, I was not very good at it, and it was not my cutie mark. It was a small hobby of mine for a very short time.” Rarity had put her basket down on the floor next to her. Twilight had gotten a ladder and went far back into her house. Spike was alone with Rarity. He was soon seeing hearts around her again. “Rarity, I um, uh…” He was lost for words. “What is it Spike?” “I uh… I lo –“ “FOUND IT!” Twilight had said from afar. Soon, Twilight was seen running towards them holding the book with her magic.

“Ah, here you are Rarity, your book.” Twilight said happily. “Ah, thank you dear.” Rarity had soon picked up her basket and put it on her with Spike’s help. “I’ll be off.” Rarity said turning to the door. “Wait!” Said Twilight. “I have something to tell you Rare.” “What is it dear?” “Oh no…” said Spike. “Somepony left me a note on my door saying that he wants to be on a date with me.” Twilight had said happily, but was confused how to react. “THAT’S WONDERFUL DEAR!” Rarity said loudly and happily, even more so than Twilight was about it. “It is?” said Twilight. “Oh yes dear, I have to tell you all about it! There are just some things that you just can’t learn from books dear.”[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 2: The Plan]

“Like what?” said Twilight. “Well for starters, how to date.” said Rarity. “Ugh...” said Spike soon going upstairs under a pillow trying to down out the sound of the two ponies talking. “Spike…” said Twilight. “You don’t have to –“ She was soon interrupted by Rarity, putting her hoof up to Twilight’s mouth. “He doesn’t have to listen if he doesn’t want to, you know.” Twilight nodded in agreement. Rarity and Twilight had gone outside to talk. “Now, the first thing we – I mean you, need to know dear is his name.” said Rarity. “Well actually, I don’t know his name. He said just said he is light brown, and had a dark brown mane.” “Ah…” said Rarity understanding the whole date idea with in a snap. “I’ve heard of these kinds of dates, they are ether very fun, or just rather disappointing.” Twilight had soon had a sad look on her face, wondering if it was to be a bad date. “Now don’t you worry dear, I know how we can just making this date a smash hit.” Twilight had soon started to feel happy again with a small smile on her face.

Soon the two ponies started walking around Ponyville talking. “Now, we just got to find you something nice to wear.” said Rarity looking around the shops. There were shops for almost anything, cooking, hobbies, and more so. “We could go to my house if you want, Twilight." “Actually Rarity, I think I won’t be wearing anything special, I’ll just be me.” Rarity was happy for Twilight thinking of her own ways of dating. “That’s a great idea, let’s just forget about that whole dressing up part.”

They had soon come to the local market shops were there were tons of foods to eat. “Now surely dear, you must be hungry. I always am when I’m thinking of something important.” Twilight had soon felt her stomach grumbling. She had remembered she had not eaten anything from when she had read the letter and so happy, yet confused, that she could not have remembered anything else, not even eating. They had soon seen Applejack standing near her stand, along with her was her little sister Applebloom. They were next to other carts, vegetables, and flowers. “Applejack!” said Rarity waving her hoof towards her. Rarity and Twilight had soon walked over to Applejack’s stand, were a few apples were left. Some golden, green, and some sweet red ones were left. “Howdy girls, how're y'all doin'?" said Applejack, smiling happily. “We are a bit peckish Applejack, could we have some apples?” asked Twilight to her dear friend. “Why o’course! And here, since you girls are some of my best friends, they're free, no charge at all.” Applejack was so happy, that was smiling so big, that you could fit three apples in her mouth, and there would still be room. “Why are you so happy dear?” asked Rarity. “I’ve sold almost all my apples ‘course. I haven’t don’ that in a long time.” “Ah.” said Twilight. “I’m happy too.”

Applejack was confused. She had wondered why. Twilight had seen all that happy. “Well why is that pumpkin?” asked Applejack. “She got a letter on her door asking if she wanted to go on a date with some gentlecolt tonight.” said Rarity. Twilight had started to blush.

Applejack was starting to make a squeaking noise of happiness for Twilight. “Oh that’s great hon’!” Applejack had forgotten about her sister during this time. “Sis?” said Applebloom. “What is it lil’ sis?” said Applejack. “What’s a date?” “Well it’s um, when you uh… heh heh heh… oh my…” Applejack had to figure out a way to get out of this, and to avoid telling her younger sister what a date was, how she would soon want one, and on and on. “Well, dearie…” said Rarity. “It’s just something you’ll figure out when you’re older.” Applejack had blown a sigh of relief. Applebloom on the other hand, was disappointed. She hates waiting, and not others telling her stuff. “Hey now lil’ sis,” said Applejack. “You’ve helped out a’lot today. Don’t feel that bad. You done great.” Applebloom had turned her semi-filled eyes of sadness into happiness. The nearby carts started to move away from Applejack’s cart, due to the noise.

“So, Twi, when’s the date?” ask Applejack. “Tonight at 8:00 PM at Sugar Cube Corner.” said Twilight “TONIGHT?” said Applejack worried. “You gotta’ hurry and get together sweetie!” Applejack started pushing the two to make them move along. “Go make this date wonderful for her.” Applejack hissed at Rarity. “I will, I will. I’ve had few dates of my own, you know.” said Rarity back to Applejack.


Soon after walking away from Applejack’s stand, they came across Ditzy Doo, walking around in circles. “Ditzy, what are you doing?” ask Twilight wondering. “Oh, um, hi Twilight!” said Ditzy. “I’m trying to count the bubbles on my cutie mark again!” “Ditzy, you know it’s 6.” said Rarity. “Oh, um, it is?” “Yes Ditzy.” said Twilight starting to forget about her date. “Well, I had a weird feeling there, and I though that –“ “Sorry dear, but that’s normal, it just means that you’ve got something on your mind.” said Rarity. “I’ll come over to your house soon, I’ve got to talk with Twilight and Pinkie Pie about her date.” “Oooo, a date?” said Ditzy wondering. “I’ve heard about them, I want one and –“ “Yes, I’m sorry to interrupt but,” said Twilight. “We have got to hurry, mine is at eight to night!” “Oh, right, sorry.” It’s okay Ditzy.” Ditzy had starting flying home happy, flying in a zigzagging motion. Moments later, she crashed into Rainbow Dash.

“Oh sorry Dash…” said Ditzy. Ditzy’s eyes were rolling in her head, but not normally. “It’s okay Derpy, I didn’t look were I was flying all that much either.” “HEY!” said Ditzy loudly. “I told you not to call me that Dash! Or should I say –“ “DON’T!” said Dash interrupting her. “I’m sorry Ditzy, it – it just slipped. I promise.” Ditzy looked at Dash, remembering the last time she called her “Derpy”. Soon she had remembered how Rainbow apologized afterwards. “Okay, I forgive you.” said Ditzy. Ditzy had started flying off to her home again.

Dash had started flying above Twilight and Rarity while they were walking to Sugar Cube Corner. “Hey guys, what are you up to?” “If you want to know, Dash,” said Twilight. “I’ve got a date with somepony.” “A date?” said Dash. “I’ve never thought you were the dating type, Twi.” “Well, it not a planned date, it’s a blind one. I only know what he looks like, where we're meeting, and what time we are.” “Ah…” said Dash. Twilight was starting to realize that most of her friends had dates at least once before. “I’ve had one. It was planned, it was okay, but I’m not the kind of pony that likes to be all mushy and stuff.” “I thought so…” said Twilight. “And what does that mean?” said Dash slightly angered by that. “I mean, well, it’s just not like your type. I mean, uh, you are Rainbow Dash, right?.” Rainbow Dash took that complement, and liked it. It made her forget about all that “lovey dovy” stuff for a moment.

“So, where are you dating?” asked Dash. Twilight had started to get annoyed from telling everyone about it. She looked at Rarity to tell her. “Well she’s going to…” Twilight’s thinking to herself had drowned the sound of Rarity talking to Dash out. “I’ve got to think of a way to make my date good, or even great. I wonder who he is. He could be that nice colt who I saw at that café the other day…” “Twilight dear?” said Rarity waiting at the door to Sugar Cube Corner. “Aren’t you going to come in and talk with Pinkie Pie?” “Oh uh, yes, I was just thinking, Rarity." Twilight ran inside, and saw Pinkie Pie in the kitchen. She had tons of bowls, full of flour, eggs, wet ingredients, and so forth. “Pinkie?” asked Twilight. “Come in…” said Pinkie Pie in a musical way. [/spoiler]


I will keep making this fic.

[Sleepy]

It kept my attention so, good job ;D
It was a rather short chapter and I can see a couple of details to correct here and there, but overall I approve.

I'll keep reading.
Weird, I thought you would go straight to the shipping after that being the main topic @ the PMs xD

It bothers me that Spike actually almost confesses to Rarity. I can't even imagine it on the show.

That brown description makes me think of Dr. Hooves for some reason, even though I know that wouldn't make sense ^-^" Its just the first "brown" image I get.

[Bull3tM0nk3y]

Same here, I did not notice that. Dr. Whooves... maybe an idea there....

[Bull3tM0nk3y]

UPDATE! CHAPTER TWO IS UP!