Panda^.^ Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 [color=#000000][Spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/1397/287930k.jpg[/img][img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/4908/287930p.jpg[/img][img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/563/287930q.jpg[/img][img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/2899/287930a.jpg[/img][img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/4908/287930p.jpg[/img][img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3295/287930f.jpg[/img][img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3736/287930z.jpg[/img][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/3000/287930c.jpg[/img][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/2899/287930a.jpg[/img][img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/4042/287930e.jpg[/img][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6304/287930t.jpg[/img][img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/1435/287930b.jpg[/img][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/1397/287930k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3295/287930f.jpg[/img][img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6310/287930.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/color] [color=#666600][Spoiler=Spells][img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3589/287930u.jpg[/img][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3295/287930f.jpg[/img][img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/1397/287930k.jpg[/img][img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/6310/287930.jpg[/img] [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/1239/287930m.jpg[/img][img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/2594/287930w.jpg[/img][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/6390/287930y.jpg[/img][img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6310/287930.jpg[/img] [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/3589/287930u.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/color] [Spoiler=Traps][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3736/287930z.jpg[/img][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1397/287930k.jpg[/img][img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/7126/287930s.jpg[/img][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/3000/287930c.jpg[/img][img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/6304/287930t.jpg[/img][img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/6310/287930.jpg[/img][img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2594/287930w.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] PLZ comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 shame you have no spell/trap to support the vanillas Zapetur's effect is little more than XYZ Dragon Cannon's effect Skreeth's burn is too small. Other cards can do more Pyrithon, the 300 atk drop isn't big enough to make TOO huge a difference, make it bigger (otherwise even skull dice can do better) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 thanks for the support Spells and traps are coming soon. hopefully today and ill fix Skreeth and pyrithions efeectsis that enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KcChiefsFan Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Cool cards man. But wow, you have a ton of OCG errors that need to be fixed... Still, I think that's a 6/10 because the pics are awesome and so is the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 not for Pyrithion Shrink is still better in terms of effect for that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Added More cards Spells and traps r coming soonplz tell me the better OCG but wat does OCG stand for Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Ooloo's effect is WAY too simple, give it another one for Toxis, I'm guessing only IT can make the direct attack, right? Because it if applies to any monster for direct attack it's OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemon~` Posted September 6, 2011 Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 Ragnaroks right Toxis should be like only itself can attack also Ooloo should be more specific like [When Ooloo is the only monster on the field sacrifice itself to summon Magmon] soomthing like thatbtw get new pics for Ragetrod its too blury Zapetur optional but Aokua cuz i can see the TELETOON sign on it so..... however thsi is just my opinion so u dont have too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Ragnarok yes for Toxis only it ill cahgne Ooloo Lime ille change pics for Ragetrod i agree its too blurry Spells and traps coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted September 7, 2011 Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Aokua :"When this card is succesfully Summoned, Special Summon 1 monster from your hand" Kamengareth: "As long as this card face-up on the field, all monsters your opponent controls loses 300 ATK" Kreaal: "This card is unaffected by Spell or Trap cards" Lord Van Bloot:"When "Chaor" is in your Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK" Magmon:"When this card is successfully Summoned, destroy 1 monster on the field." Pyrithion:"As long as this card face-up on the field, all monsters your opponent controls loses 500 ATK" Ragetrod:"This card gains 500 ATK during Battle Phase only" Weak, the ATK is only 2100 ATK during the Battle Phase, you should make it 2000 ATK, so during the Battle Phase, this card has 2500 ATK. Skreeth:"If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent." Takinom:"If this card is targeted for an attack, you can banish 1 card from your ??? to end the Battle Phase." Zapetur:"Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field." You should say "You can send 1" instead of "Send 1", because if you say "Send 1", it means you must send 1, but if you say "You can send 1", it means you don't have to send. Narfall:"This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase." Ooloo:"You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Magmon" from your ???." Toxis:"When this card destroys a monster by battle,..." I can't continue, I don't understand what do you mean by "Direct attack the opponent." , you mean it can attack once again and attack directly this time or what? I don't understand. Hmmm... Not that bad for Beginners, but you need to learn OCG, you have a lot of OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Thank you for help please see if there are any OCG errors for the Spells also Magmon i mean Hand, Deck, Graveyard Toxis i mean inflict damage equal to Toxis ATK points so can u tell me how to fix those 2 now? fixed some OCG errors thanks to [Hell Heat]. I Kind of(?) fixed Ooloo and Toxis im adding more monsters (not much) and traps.please help out rate and criticize plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 im thinking of more monsters, 2 or 3 more spells and traps are coming also i might make another set Gear Dragons but im not sure so pleasae rate and comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 The draw 3 cards is OP. I don't know how you can fix it, the only thing I can think of is reducing it to one, but then it turns into jar of greed. So yeah make it unike by adding a secondary drawback effect. or something. The destroying all spell/trap on opponents side of the field is also OP. Its just a Harpies Feather duster which is banned. Add some drawback to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 [quote name='overloadpower' timestamp='1315441502' post='5498924'] im thinking of more monsters, 2 or 3 more spells and traps are coming also i might make another set Gear Dragons but im not sure so pleasae rate and comments [/quote] we will, you just let us know of the updates and I recommend you put a "NEW" next to the added ones for us to find them faster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 oki will now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 ''Zaur'' Is Too Strong, Lower His ATK Too 0 To Make It More Balanced.:--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 he was made to be like that but........... whats ur opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 Doom Shadow is OPed for destroying any monster for free just give it a cost for that and it should be ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 bumpima be adding 1 more monsters, Here Grook Lv5 2700 atk 300def Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 BUMPi know that Grook is balanced im pretty sure rarrans low atk and cost makes it balanced i have no idea about drakness first i thaught it was OPed so i added no Battle damage with the card but is it OP or UP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 Grook is meh, it's not too much different from Goblin Attack Force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 how bout Drakness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 15, 2011 Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 well that one the effect looks ok, just nothing really new for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaqairy Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 M'arrillians would pwn Underworlders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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