Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Oh crap, wrong thread. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 wrong thread but a wise comment about Kuro xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 App, done bio, not as good as the other imo, but I can edit it more later. [b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b] Username:[color=#000080] Ryu[/color] Name: Tetsuo Kazetaka Age: 16 Gender: Male Date of Birth: 7[sup]th[/sup] of January 1995 Blood Type: A+ Hobby(s): Clan: Kazetaka clan Rank Within Clan: Apprentice Samurai [spoiler=Appearance:] [img]http://i55.tinypic.com/2rnbria.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality] Tetsuo although only 16 has quite a good understanding of different people’s personas, he can often judge them just by their body language and facial expressions. Tetsuo is often thought of as strange upon a first meeting with him due to his numerous quirks/habits. It is rare to see him in a displeased mood or angered, he always retains an upbeat attitude full of optimism. Although Tetsuo is a good judge of different people’s personalities, he does get confused very easily with quite simple things, and often asks people to either repeat themselves or ask someone else to explain things to him. Tetsuo does often get on people’s nerves but it is generally drowned out through his kindness and giving nature. Tetsuo believe in life and allowing many to live, they say that is his main flaw in becoming a samurai, his ability/curse to be so merciful. Tetsuo adopted this sense of mercy through the Head Samurai, although many others in his clan believe in death before disgrace. Tetsuo has many dreams and hopes, he will often push himself to achieve new heights and get closer to his goals. Quirks/habits:[list] [*]Tetsuo loves to lean on things or hang off of steel bars or roof edges or sit on high places, he is often referred to as “Saru no ou” (King of Monkeys) [*]Tetsuo, when observing someone’s character will bring his face within inches of the others and observe them carefully. [*]Tetsuo gets confused very easily and will either ask the individual to repeat themselves or he will ask someone to explain it to him. [*]Always displays an uplifting smile or a confused stare. [*]He sometimes (but rarely) attempts to make a joke but then confuses himself and ruins it. [*]Tetsuo doesn’t see a difference in terms of fighting or within social situations between a boy and a girl, he has an immature mind.[/spoiler] [/list] [spoiler=Bio] The region of Hadrigh is separated by 2 areas, 1, a mountain which is one of the highest peaks within the vast lands, the home of the Kazetaka clan, the other area within this region was homed by the Iroyuka clan who were situated within a large valley. The two clans for centuries were at constant war, mainly due to their opposite sword art and abilities, Kazetaka specializing in Wind elemental Sword Art and Iroyuka specializing in Earth elemental Sword Art. Tetsuo was born into a single mother family, he was an only child and his father had long since abandoned the village upon his birth. His father’s reason for leaving was his inability to become the High Samurai of the village, although he was favourite to become the new Head Samurai upon the ceremonies proceedings, his younger brother, Tetsuo’s uncle was chosen instead. Full of rage Tetsuo’s father left the village and became a rogue samurai, leaving behind his eye-patch, and his most powerful scroll for Tetsuo. Tetsuo grew up with his cousin from the village, his uncle, the current Head Samurai’s son. The two trained together endlessly and after years of effort, Tetsuo was chosen to be his uncle’s apprentice. Not learning of his father until he turned 16, his mother had kept it a secret until he was chosen as an Apprentice Samurai, mainly so that he would stay within the village and not go chasing his father’s whereabouts. After a war between the two Head Samurai’s of the 2 rival clans, attended only by their apprentices, the 2 had decided to not wage war and simply remain neutral. After this decision it was safe for clan members to leave the village and stay in the Hadrigh region. The secret agreement was that the 2 apprentices would train and after 3 years, they would meet to determine the dominant village. To today he has not mastered the scroll and only wears the eye patch whilst training.[/spoiler] [b][u]Combat Info[/u][/b] [spoiler=Weapon(s)] Tsumujikaze: (Whirlwind) (right hand) Abilities:[list] [*]Cut's in curves, a regular slash would leave an arching cut [*]Very light blade (Speed) [*]Can Harness the wind around it for Sword Art [/list] [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/23rptfq.jpg[/img] Arashikaze: (Storm Breeze) (Left hand) Abilities:[list] [*]Imbued by the spirit of High Wind Gale, an ancient breeze said to of watched over the Kazetaka clan, gives the user the ability of flight whilst this blade is drawn [*](Not Known Yet) When drawn a light breeze sweeps the area [*]Light Blade (Speed) [*]Harnesses the wind around it and makes it a tangible .5m add on to the end of the sword. [/list] [img]http://i53.tinypic.com/2ni36ld.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Sword Art(s)] (?/5 = higher /5 determines strongest to weakest ability) Sword Art: Hōmingusaikuron: (Homing cyclone) The blade creates an extending controlled cyclone attached to the end of the blade and moves by the user's ability to control its direction and size. 2.5/5 Sword Art: Kaze no Ringu: (Ring of Wind) The user twirls the blade and sends rings at the direction he chooses, the wind rings can coincide with each other and merge. 2/5 Sword Art: Ningen no taifū: (Human Typhoon) The user points their blade forward and spins constantly horizontal with their blade like a drill covered by a wind shield. 3.5/5 Sword Art: Earosurais: (Aero Slice) The user slashes the air sending a concentrated thin high speed portion of wind through the air. (2/5 Sword Art: Hidden Scroll, Tābin no torunēdo: (Turbine Tornado) A 5 metre wide circle of wind surrounds the user and heads for the opponent if hit it traps the user in a tornado and up to 10 slashes can be unleashed from the user.4.5/5 [size=4][/spoiler][/size] Ability(s): Tetsuo has the ability to manipulate the air around him, his main use of this ability is to solidify wind, that is, he could make a platform out of wind to stand on, this requires great concentration however. Tetsuo n combat will have little strength in areas such as caves or buildings as there is little wind through the air. tetsuo can also manipulate the wind to cushion a fall or force someone through the air. Special Skill(s): Good at judging deceits or traps and observing an individual's weaknesses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Does he have no weapon or is did you forget? Unless you're not actually done. How you worded it had me presuming you were done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Just assumed everyone would take it as not completed, still got the weapons and sword art and stuff to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [center][center][size=4][b][size=5] KABOOM!!!!!!!!!!![/size][/b][/size] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][size=4][b][size=5][img]http://www.deskpicture.com/DPs/Miscellaneous/kaboom.jpg[/img][/size][/b][/size] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Here's the code. [code][color=#008000][/color][/code] Looks pretty cool so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Both Holy and Hina, apps are looking excellent, Holy is yours done yet? Hmm, I'm still not liking the image much but it's all good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 XD yea almost just need to tweak it in some areas, i'll try looking for more pictures Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 App's finished now, wasn't really able to find another pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Much farther in development, fortunately. The abilities were rather lengthy in relativity to the other people's abilities, but that's what I signed up for. Additionally, I guess I'm being waited on. Time to finish this once and for all, I guess. I have no breaks for an hour and a bit, so the only thing stalling me should be thinking of what I should write and the bathroom, of course. Or death. Death may distract me a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Holy, in process of reviewing your app Hina, alright, hopefully you can finish your app soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 The only reason I'm taking long is because you seem to be so laid-back that I couldn't tell what sort of pace you were tuned into. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Well when it comes to apps, I rather wait awhile longer if it means a quality app like I said so before so that's why I seem pretty laid-back I guess lol. Anyways, just do what you need to do, I'll be waiting. Holy, I still haven't gotten a chance to review your app yet sorry. I've been pretty busy and I first have to post in an RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Yes, definitely. I'm also trying to balance her out a bit. Although, seeing how lethal the other characters have some attacks, maybe limitations would actually impede on my amusement. Where I'm also planning to have more creativity in the way she fights than anything else. Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 That's good to hear, and don't worry about the limitations too much, I'll review it over and tell you what you need to fix. For right now, just do what you believe is best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 I mean, most of the creativity will be in the fighting. I like how she can basically use flamethrower from pokemon. So cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 *searches bag* Oh noez! I only haz one pokeball left! Good app Holy, though I said not to post the year on the age. Oh well, I'll take it out for you, so accepted Also, I changed the region name in your Bio to Hadarai because the previous name isn't Japanese and make sure that if you call out your Sword Art names that you include "Sword Art:" in the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 No worries mate! Thanks for that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 No problem Holy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Got all my relos coming over tomorrow so it'll be hard for me to post for the day if the IC starts tomorrow XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 @Blu: I found another pic? [spoiler=Image] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/nmkk77.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] Like this one more, seems like it matches the RP more and has a bit more of a anime look and the look I'm trying to portray through my character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Yeah this one looks great! Nice job Holy, I'll add it right away ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Username: [Green]Ryu[/Green] I don't know the code to color text but you can tell I read the rules. Name: Hikaru Kouhaku Age: 125 (Appears 20) Gender: Female Date of Birth: December 29th Blood Type: N/A Hobby(s): Reading, eccentricities, humor and freely roaming around at high speeds. Clan: Miyano Rank Within Clan: Apprentice Samurai [spoiler=Human Appearance][img]http://i906.photobucket.com/albums/ac262/Bidoof/106.jpg[/img] Her but with six tails instead of the nine. Additionally, her hair and tails are silver and not gold.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kitsune Appearance] [img]http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c27/Tsukase/Anime%20Girls/Kitsune-1.jpg[/img] Including the fox fire, of course. [/spoiler] [b]Personality:[/b] Hikaru tends to always exhibit an absolutely quiet demeanor. Despite this, when asked for information, she can tend to give quick, concise answers unless asked for detailed elaboration, where she would do so. Despite how quiet she may seem, she is not afraid of showing emotion but will show it with slight expression. A small smile, for example, would be equivalent to a larger smile in many other people. She definitely does have a sense of humor and uses that same demeanor to express and make it more impacting. In regards of humor, she is also without restrict in what she would be willing to make lighter due to a life of being uncaring or unaware of human standards concerning certain things, such as death or a fatal accident. Such is why she tends to be without a large company of humans; she doesn’t care for their standards. Because of this, she has grown numb to most emotional pain and can easily shrug off the death of most she would come across. Other things that numbness includes are common fears such as blood, height or the death of oneself. Where others would, perhaps, shake and speak to themselves in desperacy while holding on to the ledge of a skyscraper, she’d look down, lightly smile and comment on the nice view. This isn’t to say, however, that she would simply let herself fall. In combat, she is rather cautious of many, many factors and enjoys adding a unique twist to her moves and fighting style for the sake of fun. While fighting, she reacts and attacks in a manner that would be considered unpredictable or very eccentric in comparison to how many other samurai fight. She uses her natural abilities more than her own Sword Arts or other techniques based upon her weapon. Additionally, when fighting, she moves faster in the air than on the ground, preferring to keep off the ground to add another twist to the battle unless said conflict is strictly weapon combat. Bio: [b][u]Combat Info[/u][/b] [spoiler=Weapon(s)] [img]http://i906.photobucket.com/albums/ac262/Bidoof/Hnnngh.jpg[/img] Her sword is not created of earthly metals but more of spiritual, ethereal compounds. This means that, while it would never be bent, break or melt like metal really could, it requires a very small amount of effort to create. This, however, allows her to use the blade similarly to a projectile, throwing it, having it dissipate and reappear in her grasp. She cannot use her katana if she is in a very weak state because it would require a small quantity of energy that she would not have. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Sword Arts] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Abilities] [b]-Enhanced hearing:[/b] Using her (clearly visible unless intentionally hidden) fox ears, she can allow herself to hear much better than a human ever could and more like a fox. Her hearing itself is sharp enough to single out and put emphasis on a small movement in a relatively large area. [b]Fire and electricity manipulation:[/b] She can imbue objects with flame and manipulate small to medium amounts of flame as well as electricity. The flames and electricity are both an illustrious, bright blue that almost looks white at times. Additionally, both are produced from her mouth or tails. During her human form, she could grab her hair and lightly pull as if pulling the fire or electricity if it was her hair. [b]-Shape shifting:[/b] She can shape shift between her human form and kitsune form at absolute will. She can also transform into any other person or an object but must get used to their body. She could easily pass for an enemy soldier in a calm situation but would not be able to fight very well until she would get used to the body. [b]-Minor flight:[/b] Although she has not completely mastered flight (for reasons of fairness), she only knows how to hover up to a few meters off the ground or jump at large lengths and slowly lower. With her current abilities, she can jump over a small house with the effort that any human would take for a normal jump. [b]Dream manifestation:[/b] If she is near somebody who is sleeping, she may enter their dreams for half an hour at a time. The closer she is to the specific person allows her to stay longer depending on how close they are, but can only do this once a night. For example, if she is with somebody she adores, she could easily stay for hours if she wanted.[/spoiler] Special Skill(s): App so far. Will edit other post to stop the clogging. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Wow! Looks good so far! Keep it up Hina, though I'm really trying to restrain myself from reading your app until it's one hundred percent complete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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