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Think ya could send me a PM with a quick review over it? So I can know the goods and bads of it? If I'm gonna do a remake, I wanna improve the RP and not just the plot. :3 A quick, simple list of the goods and bads is all I would need. I'd be very grateful if ya did that for me. :3

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...well then. Didn't see this thread until now, and although I would normally put review threads in Fanfic, due to its topicality I'll leave it here. I applaud you for taking such an effort, and since it contributes to bettering RPs (or at least pointing out flaws), want me to sticky it if it's still active?

EDIT: Justice Master, DMG, this ain't no discussion thread. Stop disrailing or posting meaningless chatter. :{

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You don't have to download it; there's a play button if you scroll down a little. She would have been good if you posted more than a paragraph at a time and/or someone interacted with her, but she was funny.

Finally uploaded the review. Adding Mediafire mirrors soon, since people are apparently struggling with Kiwi. Have fun!
[quote name='Kyubey' timestamp='1316968765' post='5539676']
...well then. Didn't see this thread until now, and although I would normally put review threads in Fanfic, due to its topicality I'll leave it here. I applaud you for taking such an effort, and since it contributes to bettering RPs (or at least pointing out flaws), want me to sticky it if it's still active?
[/quote]...:o

That would be awesome. Thanks! :D

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[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261907-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-registration-archive-originalstartedaccepting/"][color="#1e4371"]OoC thread, otherwise known as the Registration Archive[/color][/url] -OOC Thread[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/"]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/[/url] -IC Thread

Can you review Dark Necromancer's L.O.N.E. The Roleplay?

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Wow! What can I say......

First, I'm honored to get a B-. I honestly thought I wasn't gonna get that high of a score. Second, I was remaking the character I played in the original, and I was hoping to make his laziness more appearent in later posts. As for putting more effort, he thought of it as more of a way to show off his skillz. Third, the AMAZING White Hollow's computer decided to go and screw up, and thus make me inactive. I am really proud of what Time has done, and honstly I really think this could turn out to be one great RP. All we need is more activity.

Your "dedicated fan,"

- Justice Master

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[quote name='Christian Exodia' timestamp='1316978277' post='5540039']
[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261907-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-registration-archive-originalstartedaccepting/"][color=#1e4371]OoC thread, otherwise known as the Registration Archive[/color][/url] -OOC Thread
[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/"] [/url]

[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/"] http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/[/url] -IC Thread

Can you review Dark Necromancer's L.O.N.E. The Roleplay?
[/quote]THANK YOU FOR REQUESTING SOMETHING. I was going to do a Naruto roleplay. >_> L.O.N.E. it is, and then if Spectrum still exists I'll do that.
[quote name='Justice Master' timestamp='1316978478' post='5540041']
Wow! What can I say......

First, I'm honored to get a B-. I honestly thought I wasn't gonna get that high of a score. Second, I was remaking the character I played in the original, and I was hoping to make his laziness more appearent in later posts. As for putting more effort, he thought of it as more of a way to show off his skillz. Third, the AMAZING White Hollow's computer decided to go and screw up, and thus make me inactive. I am really proud of what Time has done, and honstly I really think this could turn out to be one great RP. All we need is more activity.

Your "dedicated fan,"

- Justice Master
[/quote]It kind of wavers between a B- and a C+, to tell the truth. I thought I'd best be nice, since the character development is definitely at a B level.
[quote name='*~Dark~Magician~Girl~*' timestamp='1316793938' post='5534737']
Think ya could send me a PM with a quick review over it? So I can know the goods and bads of it? If I'm gonna do a remake, I wanna improve the RP and not just the plot. :3 A quick, simple list of the goods and bads is all I would need. I'd be very grateful if ya did that for me. :3
[/quote]Sure. In exchange, I reserve a spot in the remake as well as the opportunity to review. >:}D

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[quote name='Lunar Origin' timestamp='1316988653' post='5540336']

OH MY GAWD

WUT

I'll finally get to see what you RP like! :D
[/quote]

Come to think of it, it has been a while since I've seen Supreme in an RP. The last one he was in was X-Over Academy (Pity that died before he could review it. Maybe he could do a retrospective type thing just to fill people in at some point, eh), and that activity obviously wasn't long lived.

Not that I blame him, since I'd been the exact same way until very recently. Having University to deal with makes you pretty picky about what Roleplays you join, if any, and it's rare to find an RP with something to offer the more advanced members of YCM.

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[quote name='.:Blu:.' timestamp='1316988588' post='5540334']
Aww, I was hoping to get my review next but oh well, any review is fine
[/quote]The only trouble is that it's not accepting, which makes it rather low-priority. Look for Episode 106 or 107.
[quote name='TotalObelisk' timestamp='1316989031' post='5540353']
I think Spectrum is pretty much dead I'm afraid, I might be able to keep it alive but I doubt it. There's only about 3 other people who seem to want to post and, well, that does kinda kill the whole premise of it ><
[/quote]Don't give up! I once finished a roleplay with a total of two active players, myself included. It was a blast.
[quote name='Hydra of Thunder' timestamp='1316992948' post='5540530']

Come to think of it, it has been a while since I've seen Supreme in an RP. The last one he was in was X-Over Academy (Pity that died before he could review it. Maybe he could do a retrospective type thing just to fill people in at some point, eh), and that activity obviously wasn't long lived.

Not that I blame him, since I'd been the exact same way until very recently. Having University to deal with makes you pretty picky about what Roleplays you join, if any, and it's rare to find an RP with something to offer the more advanced members of YCM.
[/quote]Since it was pretty much the reason I made this thread, I'll probably go back and hit X-Over Academy anyway for episode 108. You know an RP is bad when Yukari Yakumo feels impotent. >_>
[quote name='Lunar Origin' timestamp='1316988653' post='5540336']

OH MY GAWD

WUT

I'll finally get to see what you RP like! :D
[/quote]It's been so long since I roleplayed, it might be a new style, the likes of which has never before been seen by human eyes. Actually, seeing as the character I have in mind is named Arthracia Dent, it almost certainly will be. >:}D

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[quote name='Christian Exodia' timestamp='1316978277' post='5540039']
[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261907-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-registration-archive-originalstartedaccepting/"][color=#1E4371]OoC thread, otherwise known as the Registration Archive[/color][/url] -OOC Thread
[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/"] [/url]

[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263550-lone-the-role-play-the-pre-story-ic-thread-originalstartedaccepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/"]http://forum.yugiohc...-archive-pg-16/[/url]
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Can you review Dark Necromancer's L.O.N.E. The Roleplay?
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[quote name='Supreme Gamesmaster' timestamp='1316988434' post='5540327']
THANK YOU FOR REQUESTING SOMETHING. I was going to do a Naruto roleplay. >_> L.O.N.E. it is, and then if Spectrum still exists I'll do that.
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Reviewing L.O.N.E is gonna be pretty interesting. I just wanna see how the review turns out. Hope it's decent... xD

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[quote name='Supreme Gamesmaster' timestamp='1316988434' post='5540327']
Sure. In exchange, I reserve a spot in the remake as well as the opportunity to review. >:}D
[/quote]

ABSOLUTELY! if ya want.. I can get ya involved with the plot developement for the remake! :3

Though.. I must warn ya.. I plan on having the rp take place a year later.. So it's more of a follow up than a remake. Lol

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