TOM 3.5 Posted August 27, 2011 Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 The remade cards should be on page 1 and 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 27, 2011 Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 Learn to make good cards, then come back. Until then, 1/10 since you're new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 look these are pop culture cards that are based from tv shows and i dont need people who are really expierenced judgeing a new player who is has made like 14 post and someone who has 335 posts is judging . You know you could try to Encourage new users insted of bringing then down and don't forget that you where once a new player so just understand you don't have to be so brutal all i want is to do something good and mabye you could just tell me someone what they did wrong specifically instead of just saying you suck. Look I like wen people say I when i fail but when people dont explain i just dont listen so there your opinion scale is pointless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [quote name='SonGokuRULES!' timestamp='1314501802' post='5473943'] look these are pop culture cards that are based from tv shows and i dont need people who are really expierenced judgeing a new player who is has made like 14 post and someone who has 335 posts is judging . You know you could try to Encourage new users insted of bringing then down and don't forget that you where once a new player so just understand you don't have to be so brutal all i want is to do something good and mabye you could just tell me someone what they did wrong specificallyinstead of just saying you suck [/quote] I agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 That's what I'm doing; encouraging you to learn how to make good cards by looking at the work of others. I did not say you suck, I simply said that you need to get better. Plus, the people whose opinions and judgement you should be caring about are usually going to be around my level or higher. By the way, I do know that this is an anime. I watched a few episodes when Toonami was still on, but it was far too strange for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Well you just said comeback when you can make better cards. Can you at least say what I did wrong . I don't even know why my cards where rated badly.[img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1684/360428i.jpg[/img][img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3333/360428.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Bad card grammer. Cards have little playablity. Fake-types. Boring Vanillas with boring story text. Hell, your fusion card is a bad version of Polymerization. It doesn't matter if this is pop culture, and why be pissed at somebody rating you badly? i'm not a big fan of Nu-Mou, since the one conversation we had was an arguement over something stupid, but I've seen him rate and he's usually pretty good about telling somebody if their cards are good or bad. If you're just going to yell at somebody who tells you your cards are bad, I'm done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Look i'm not trying to yell i'm just trying to be creative to be more like the show but thanks I'll make a new forum with some more realistic cards but bobobo fusion is what makes my fusion and i've seen tons of stupid fusions worst than mine so I'll try to do better and thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1314504186' post='5474012'] Bad card grammer. Cards have little playablity. Fake-types. Boring Vanillas with boring story text. Hell, your fusion card is a bad version of Polymerization. [/quote] He just pretty much summed up all of my points. [quote name='SonGokuRULES!' timestamp='1314504621' post='5474020'] Look i'm not trying to yell i'm just trying to be creative to be more like the show but thanks [b]I'll make a new forum with some more realistic cards[/b] but bobobo fusion is what makes my fusion and i've seen tons of stupid fusions worst than mine so I'll try to do better and thanks [/quote] Bolded isn't entirely necessary. You could simply redo these after a bit of learning, and post again when you've updated with better cards. Creating another thread is actually a bit of a waste. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [quote name='SonGokuRULES!' timestamp='1314504621' post='5474020'] i'm just trying to be creative [/quote] See there's a problem. How is naming a card after the main character and putting it's text as "The main character" creative? If you put in a good description of Bobobo, like something about his nose hair fighting style, I'd let you get away with that, at least put a little more than 30 seconds worth of effort. I'm sorry if I sound like an a******, but it's sometimes necessary to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 thanks I will now start to post some my old cards in improved versions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1314505558' post='5474058'] See there's a problem. How is naming a card after the main character and putting it's text as "The main character" creative? If you put in a good description of Bobobo, like something about his nose hair fighting style, I'd let you get away with that, at least put a little more than 30 seconds worth of effort. I'm sorry if I sound like an a******, but it's sometimes necessary to do that. [/quote] If the cards suck. We say they suck. If the cards are good. We say they are good. Some people try and encourage people to make better cards. Sadly I'm not 1 of them...so umm yea... Sorry man. But just work on the cards... fix the descriptions/effects. If you have trouble with OCG, look at other experienced card maker cards on Realistic Cards and Pop-Culture cards. Might give you ideas on how you should write them. If you improved these and I like them...thank god a new guy has some common sense. And for once...I don't feel angry...(Caught me on a good mode lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 here is my new revised card.[img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/3333/360428.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 I think can help with OCG so you can get the idea...(It's hard to help while hearing thunder and sleepy as hell..) [b]Once Per Turn, during your Main Phase; add 1 "Fist of the Nose Hair" card to your hand.[/b] [b]But for the attempt on trying to fix that card...I will give you a 6/10..[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Edit your first post rather than posting the cards 5 posts down. Also, I'm not gonna rate since I don't know any "fist of the nosehair" cards yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Still seems pretty simple. I'll have to see the Fist of the Nose Hair before I make any judgements, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 This is the first fist of the nosehair[img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8365/360428q.jpg[/img]The next post will be all remakes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Just no.... Waaay to OPed... Make it a trap card that it can be: "Once per turn, during the Battle Phase; If you control a face-up Bobobo-bobo Bo-BoBo, you can negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Yairnet Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Since you are a beginner i will tell you this you choose good pics but, the problem is pure grammer and fake types BTW i loved the idea of bo-boooo-boo cards so i will give you 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 I fail to understand the point of that card, or even the effect. It can end your opponent's Battle Phase at any time you want? First, Equips can't usually "activate" other than when they're equipped to a monster. Second, no. That would be extremely overpowered, and gets a 1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/9560/360428z.jpg[/img] +[img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/1773/360428d.jpg[/img][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1433/360428a.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Still several wording errors. I suggest you look at cards in Realistic Cards that are made by experts. Or go to the wiki and find the OCG rulings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/3333/360428.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/7817/360428g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/3387/360428j.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted August 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/3333/360428.jpg[/img][img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3333/360428.jpg[/img][img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/8365/360428q.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 Oi...you can't have an equip Trap card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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