Final Fantasy Revolution Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i]Welcome to a world, a world where the only form of weaponry is that of your faithful sword. Every citizen of this great nation is trained by the blade from the time they are eight years old, it is against the law and frowned upon to start any later or any earlier; if someone didn't start their training on their eighth birthday, they were simply killed by twelve A.M. the next morning. The swordsman will train under their father and mother until the age of eighteen, and on their eighteenth birthday they will be given a blade by The Gorman; The Sword Keeper, so to speak. All the swords The Gorman gives out look completely average, in fact they all look the same; it's completely up to the swordsman's own personality and skill level to awaken the shape and abilities of their sword. The Swordsman will be expected to name their own blade and control it's power. If a swordsman blade is every broken, the swordsman must admit that he is worthless and must retire to The Temple of Lost Souls; to live their pathetic life out until they die. Your dream is to go further than anyone else, you dream is to be named one of the Nijuu, the twenty best swordsman in BladeNation. Will you embark on this quest, or will you merely quit before you've started? This, is BladeNation.[/i] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [u]Rules:[/u] -My word is law. -In this Role Play you can most definitely be defeated, your blade can be broken, and you can die; so no god-complex' here. -All Forum and Role Play Section rules are still in effect here. -Have fun, because I will be. [Spoiler=Application;] Name: [Characters Name] Age: [Characters Age] Gender: [Characters Gender] Sword Name: [Name of your Sword] Sword Abilities:[What can your sword do? Your sword only has one key ability to start and keep in mind that you are new swordsman, your sword shouldn't be all that powerful. Elemental Swords are deemed unoriginal and unaccepted in this Role Play, your application should be quite impressive to earn any sword with an element, if you earn an element sword, this does NOT give you the liberty to control that element, your sword will simply be able to unleash a stream of water, get a coating of darkness, ext.] Description of Sword: [Detailed Description of your Sword.] Personality: [Should relate to your swords abilities, I'm not going to give you a minimum of lines, I expect you to know what a personality should be written as.] History: [A past history of your character leading up to this moment, again, no minimum of lines, I expect you to know what a personality should be written as.] Appearance: [Detailed written appearance. You can post a picture but you still have to give specifics (I.E Height, Weight) and you must depict any differences this picture and your character will have. (I.E. His outfit is read instead of blue, his hair is black and much short, ext)] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Accepted Application] [spoiler=Final Fantasy Revolution] Name: Myto Orreck Age: 18 Gender: Male Sword Name: The Offensive Defensive Sword Abilities: The Offensive Defensive is a sword with strong defensive and countering abilities, whilst also being a decent attack style sword. It's rounded buckler style guard is perfect for guiding opponents attacks off of the wielder and it's short four inch blade makes the ideal of close combat weaponry. It's defensive buckler can also be increased in diameter by reducing the size of his blade, if he reduces the blade size by one inch, his buckler increases size in diameter by an inch and so on and so forth at a maximum expanding size of four inches. Description of Sword: The Offensive Defensive an odd style of sword, where as swords would usually have a vertical hilt, it has a red gripped handle inside of a black buckler style shield. The buckler itself is a rounded style buckler and measures a diameter of nine inches. Attached to the top of the buckler is a shining silver double edged blade that comes out to a normal point, similar to a broadsword but is much shorter, with the blade only being four inches long. There is a rectangle cut out of the buckler to fit the blade in and it is assumed that when the blade of The Offensive Defensive is reduced to nothing the buckler takes on a complete circular shape. Personality: Myto Orreck is a very patient person who is always willing to wait and let the opponent make the first move so that he may counter it and make an offensive maneuver of his own. Myto makes it a habit to be a completely balanced person emotionally and it reflects greatly within his fighting style and within the shape his sword had decided to take upon coming into contact with him. Having a completely balanced set of emotions means that Myto doesn't really go overboard with any of his emotions, this annoys many as his way of life keeps him from showing signs of surprise or anger. In a training exercise his father had used a surprising move to get passed his guard, in which Myto didn't respond like a normal swordsman would, however, he did admit that it surely was surprising attack but it was his way of life that wouldn't let him be taken in by it. History: Myto Orreck was born into this land of war and swordsmanship just like any other child in the world. The town in which he was born in was fair, as most towns were. As a child from the time he was born to when he was the age of four his parents had taught him all of the basic skills of life; walking, talking, eating well, and how to keep the body strong. From the ages of four to eight the only thing he talked about or thought about was the impending training he would have to go through and the sword he would eventually be instructed to receive from The Gorman. When he finally reached the age of eight he and his father began their training at the crack of dawn. It was awhile until Myto was even allowed to touch a blade, his first year of training was comprised of his father using all his speed and strength to completely thrash his son into a quarter of his life everyday for hours. Come his second year he was to observe every attack and think how he would deal with it; how he would counter, block, parry, or dodge the incoming blow. His third year he was finally given a wooden sparing sword, the same that his father was using to beat him to near-death in his previous years of training. His father instructed him to come at him, he refused explaining that if he made the first move he couldn't counter to start the fight; Myto's great sense of patience developed in this year and he and his father worked on his handling skills for the duration of the third year. Myto's fourth year of training was strange to his father as well, Myto seemed to have developed a sort of balanced fighting style when he opted to use a much shorter sword in their practice sessions. Myto had developed a way in which he could move quickly, block, and counter with his own new style of combat. Myto and his father trained in swordsmanship drills and technique for four more years. Upon Myto's ninth year of training his father noticed that his emotional levels were now becoming in sync with his style of combat; something that the best swordsman have mastered. It was now the time for him to receive his sword from The Gorman, how many other swordsman would be at the ceremony with him and how good where their skills... Appearance: Myto is five feet and eleven inches tall with a tan skin tone and even skin complexion that looks to be healthy. Myto has an average musculer build and possess slightly above average strength because of it. Myto's hair is black and shaggy but he keeps it groomed enough so that the hair is never in his eyes and distracting him from combat. He has green eyes that always look like he is bored and has a frown that expresses no intrest in the current events that or going on around him, when in actuallity he does have interest if they concern him directly. Myto wears a longe sleeve black turtle neck shirt on his upper body which has a blue short sleeve button down shirt worn overtop of it but it is never buttoned up. On his lower body he wears blue jean pants with a black belt that has a golden buckle to support said pants and wears black combat boots with regular white socks on his feet. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Guy Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [color=#660066][spoiler=My application]Name[/color][color=#666600]: Xavier Smith[/color] [color=#660066]Age[/color][color=#666600]: 17[/color] [color=#660066]Gender[/color][color=#666600]: Male[/color] [color=#660066]Sword[/color][color=#000000] [/color][color=#660066]Name[/color][color=#666600]: Ebony Tempest[/color] [color=#660066]Sword[/color][color=#000000] [/color][color=#660066]Abilities[/color][color=#666600]: When fighting with Ebony Tempest, Xavier can make shadows stream out of his sword into his body giving him more strength and speed. If Xavier gets angry however, he loses control and Ebony Tempest can release too much power. Xavier may die from using this sword.[/color] [color=#008800]Description of Sword: A long black blade that shadows stream off at irregular intervals. A hilt that is horizontal for about 15-20cm either side then snakes out and points the same way as the blade, giving a sinister look. The hilt is thin and ends in a dark black bulb.[/color] [color=#008800]Personality: Xavier is quick to anger if someone insults his friends, but can take a joke and is well liked. He is very friendly but doesn't get along too well with people above him in society and those who brag.[/color] [color=#660066]History[/color][color=#666600]: *Dont know yet* (you wanna make one up?)[/color] [color=#660066]Appearance[/color][color=#666600]: Jet black hair, tall, athletic, fit and strong.[/spoiler] [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [u]Not Accepted:[/u] -Your personality needs to be bulked up, maybe go into more detail about how he acts outside of the battlefield or how he controls his anger, ext -I will absolutely not write your history for you, why would I give you an application just so I could fill it out =P. For your history explain what kind of town you were in, how your parent's raised and trained you, ext. -You Appearance is no where near descriptive enough, look at the accepted application to get an idea of how your application should look, and than make it better. Until you improve your application I will not except you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murar Bonefang Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 i will post in this, reserve por favor ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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