The Borg Posted August 21, 2011 Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 Magic has huge sets and blocks. And keywords. This is the beginning of my attempt to do the exact same thing, with Yu-Gi-Oh. Note: Lore=Flavor Text [spoiler=Faction Mechanics] Warren - Timekeeping - This allows the card to show that even the greatest fighters can't fight forever. Draken - Corruption Counters - These show the progression of a monster into the Draken mindset. They have effects added to them based on the monster that gave the token. Note: This ability, when assigned, continues to effect all of the counters on the card. So if two EN006 attack the same monster, than that monster looses 1000 Attack per token, until all the tokens are removed. So if all the tokens are removed, the effects stop lingering. They are cumulative in most cases. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Set] [spoiler=EN001] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/5682/189225n.jpg[/img] - Common, and it is really EN001, I will fix this later Rullings: You can target yourself for the discard effect. [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN002] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2520/189225.jpg[/img] - Rare Rullings: The destruction by a timekeeping effect is continuous. The counter effect does trigger, and can be negated by Divine Wrath. [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN003] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6382/189225c.jpg[/img] - Rare Rullings: Royal Commandant does not have to remain on the field to banish the attacking monster. If Royal Commandant is attacked while face down, it's effect will activate. [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN004] [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2520/189225.jpg[/img] - Common Rulings: None [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN005] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1157/189225a.jpg[/img] - Super Rare Rulings: The first Warren monster destroyed by battle is sent to the deck, the controller doesn't get to decide when to use that effect. [spoiler=Lore] Little do the Warren's gods know that corruption isn't just limited to the world below. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=EN006] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2012/189225o.jpg[/img] - Super Rare Rulings: A corruption counter has no associated effects with it. Corrupted Agent - Neptune causes the decrease in attack and defense. Being returned to the field doesn't count as being summoned. [spoiler=Lore] "There were once ten of us, three have since left." - Master Hyperion [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=EN007] [img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8374/189225w.jpg[/img] - Super Rare Rulings: This card does count your opponent turns in the amount of time you cannot conduct your battle phase. Cards that interfere with the turn count do not effect this card. [spoiler=Lore] "Behold, our Gods haven't abandoned us!" - Zear, Warren Chief [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN008] [img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2520/189225.jpg[/img] - Ultra/Ultimate Rulings: The tokens can't be used for Synchro or Tribute Summons. [spoiler=Lore] Corruption isn't always in the simplest of forms. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN009] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/2520/189225.jpg[/img] - Rare Rulings: None of note. [spoiler=Lore] "It's okay, it'll never attack us this close to our home, right? Hey, where'd you go Blaze?" Draken Scout - Nevea's last words. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=EN010] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/2520/189225.jpg[/img] - Common Rulings: A card treated as being Warren can't also be Draken and vice versa. [spoiler=Lore] As the corruption spreads, the Warren must prepare to face their old allies. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=EN011] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5448/189225r.jpg[/img] - Secret Rare 3 Warren Monsters This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the Graveyard. When this card attacks a Draken Monster: you may take control of it instead of destroying it. Corruption Counters can't be placed on this card. Rulings of Note: None. [spoiler=Lore] "Even their strongest warrior will eventually fall," Corrupted Agent - Neptune" [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=EN012] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/2520/189225.jpg[/img]- Super Rare Rulings: This card may only use the second ability once. [spoiler=Lore] Not all Draken are creatures of darkness. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] New keywords will only be explained on the commons and rares and the Warren and Draken will both be sub-types (which FYI, Konami has had new ones created over time, and will be the only new sub-types I'll create). OCG tips anyone? I will keep keywords around, and will operate by the new OCG rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 for Catapulter, 200 LP is too cheap, you should make it higher beyond that the effects do look reasonable, so this set gets 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted September 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Finally got some inspiration for a new card for the set in progress. Catapulter now has a cost of 500. The input I get will play a role in the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 Bump. Any legacy support anyone would like to see me make?[img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2520/189225.jpg[/img] Any criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted September 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 10 Cards into the set, any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 These seem pretty cool. I'm not too familiar with Magic, but the cards as a set are certainly refreshing. Perhaps someone who's more familiar with MTG can provide more insight, but I'll give these an 8/10 until I see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 [quote name='Kathy Fan' timestamp='1315539178' post='5501701'] 10 Cards into the set, any comments? [/quote] did you update more since last time? If so which ones you added? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 EN007 onwards are all new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 for incoming swarm you might want to say the tokens can't be used for tribute/synchro summoning for Warren Legend, the taking control part is fine, but don't make it permanent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 Since I didn't save swarm I added that to it's rulings. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7612/189225q.jpg[/img] This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the Graveyard. When this card attacks a Draken Monster: you may take control of it and change it to Defense Position instead of destroying it. You can only gain control of one monster at a time by this effect. Corruption Counters can't be placed on this card. I do want the take over to be permanent to represent purity among the once corrupted in the story, but I think only having one balances it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 yeah but the problem is the control is still a permanent one you should have made the control last only for ONE TURN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Borg Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315679649' post='5504979'] yeah but the problem is the control is still a permanent one you should have made the control last only for ONE TURN [/quote] Goyo had it last for more than one turn, and while he is now banned, he was considered fair while he was around. But fine, I'll change it some more. [img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/2520/189225.jpg[/img] Would anyone actually like to help play test this? Using Proxies on DN of course.[img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8646/189225b.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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