Archtype - Pebble

[TheEffinZ]

[Spoiler=Effect Monsters]
-[b]Pebble Heart[/b]
EARTH
Level *
Rock/ Tuner/ Effect
[i]When this card is successfully Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, select 1 type of monster. This card is treated as the selected type. When this card is summoned, place 1 Pebble Counter on this card for every "Pebble" monster on your field.(Max.4) You can remove Pebble Counters from this card to increase the Level of this card equal to the removed Pebble Counters, increase the ATK of this card by 400 points for every Pebble Counter removed.[/i]
[i]ATK/ 300 DEF/500[/i]



-[b]Pebble Warrior[/b]
EARTH
Level ***
Rock/ Effect
[i]This card is also treated as a Warrior Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and hand. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points every time a monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned. Decrease the ATK of this card by 100 every time a monster you control is destroyed.[/i]
[i]ATK/1000 DEF/1200[/i]

[i]-[/i][b]Pebble Hero[/b]
EARTH
Level *****
Rock/ Effect
[i]This card is also treated as a Warrior Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and hand. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for every "Pebble" monster on the field. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Pebble" monster from your hand to your field. This card gains the following effect depending on the Special Summoned monsters Level: Level 5 or higher - Decrease the ATK of the Special Summoned monster by 700 points and its effect is negated. Level 4 or lower - Increase the ATK of the Special Summoned monster by 500 points and it cannot be destroyed by the effects of Trap cards.[/i]
[i]ATK/1800 DEF/2000[/i]

-[b]Pebble Hound[/b]
EARTH
Level ****
Rock/ Effect
[i]This card is also treated as a Beast Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and hand. While this card is face-up on the field in attack position, your Opponent cannot target any monsters on your side of the field with attacks or card effects, except this one. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points, you can select 1 Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck.[/i]
[i]ATK/1400 DEF/1600[/i]

[i]-[/i][b]Pebble Mage[/b]
EARTH
Level ****
Rock/ Tuner/ Effect
[i]This card is also treated as a Spellcaster Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and hand. While this card is face-up on your field, your opponent cannot activate Spell cards. You can Tribute this card to add 1 Spell card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate the added Spell card until your next Standby Phase.This cards effect can only be activated twice per duel.[/i]
[i]ATK/1000 DEF/1600[/i]
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[spoiler=Extra Deck]
-[b]Pebble Dragon[/b]
EARTH
Level *******
Rock/ Fusion/ Effect
[i]"Pebble Heart" (Dragon Type) + 2 "Pebble" monsters[/i]
[i]This card can be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by banishing the above Fusion Material monsters from your field.(You do not use "Polymerization".) This card is also treated as a Dragon Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and your Extra Deck. Increase this cards ATK by 500 until your End Phase by banishing 1 "Pebble" monster from your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 Fusion Material monster banished to Special Summon this card.[/i]
[i]ATK/2500 DEF/2800[/i]

[b]-Pebblesaur[/b]
EARTH
Level *****
Rock/ Fusion/ Effect
[i]"Pebble Heart" (Dinosaur Type) + 1 "Pebble" monster[/i]
[i]This card can be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by banishing the above Fusion Material monsters from your field.(You do not use "Polymerization".) This card is also treated as a Dinosaur Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and your Extra Deck. This card inflicts piercing damage when it attacks a monster in defense position. You can discard 2 cards from your hand and Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Pebble Dragon" from your Extra Deck to the field.[/i]
[i]ATK/2100 DEF/2300[/i]

[i]-[/i][b]Pebble Pheonix[/b]
EARTH
Level ******
Rock/ Synchro/ Effect
[i]"Pebble Heart" (Pyro or Winged-Beast Type) + 1 or more non tuner "Pebble" monster(s)[/i]
[i]This card is also treated as a FIRE Winged-Beast monster while on your field, Graveyard, and your Extra Deck. For every "Pebble" monster destroyed while this card is face-up on your field, this card gains 300 ATK and DEF points. You can reduce this cards ATK by x1000 points to Special Summon "Pebble" monsters from your Graveyard to your field for every x1000 ATK points reduced.[/i]
[i]ATK/2300 DEF/2500[/i]

[b]-Pebble Ulti-Warlock[/b]
EARTH
Level *********
Rock/ Synchro/ Effect
[i]"Pebble Mage" + "Pebble Heart" (Spellcaster Type) + 1 or more non tuners[/i]
[i]This card is also treated as a Spellcaster Type monster while on your field, Graveyard, and Extra Deck. While this card is face-up on your field, your opponent cannot activate Spell cards or monsters effects. This card gains 300 ATK points for every Spell card in both players Graveyard. Also while this card is face-up on the field, you can activate Spell cards from your Graveyard. If you activate Spell cards from your Graveyard, banish them after activation and reduce this cards ATK by 200 points.[/i]
[i]ATK/2800 DEF/2100[/i]
[b]-Pebble Warlord[/b]
EARTH
Rank ****
Rock/ Xyz/ Effect
[i]3 Level 4 "Pebble" monsters[/i]
[i]This card is also treated as a Warrior Type monster while face-up on your field, Graveyard, and Extra Deck. Once per turn; you can detach 1 Xyz Material monster from this card to reduce the ATK of 1 of your opponents monsters by the ATK of the detached monster. If this card has no monsters attached to it, decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points.[/i]
[i]ATK/2700 DEF/3000[/i]
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[SPOILER=Spell and Traps]
-[b]Pebble Fusion[/b]
SPELL
Quick Spell
[i]You can only activate this card when a face-up "Pebble Heart" is destroyed as a result of battle. You can banish "Pebble Heart" and 1 other "Pebble" monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Pebble" Fusion monster from your Extra Deck. The Special Summoned monster gains 500 ATK and is unaffected by monsters effects.[/i]

[i]-[/i][b]Pebble World[/b]
SPELL
Field Spell
[i]While this card is on the field, increase the ATK of "Pebble" monsters by 600 points. Also, while this card is on the field, you do not need to banish Fusion Material monsters when summoning a "Pebble" Fusion monster(They are instead sent to your Graveyard.)[/i]

[b]-Pebble Bound[/b]
SPELL
Normal Spell
[i]You can only activate this card when you control 1 "Pebble Heart" on your field. Special Summon any "Pebble" monsters from your hand to the field. The summoned monsters cannot be used as Fusion Material until your next Standby Phase.[/i]
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[TheEffinZ]

Come on! No comments, does this mean there perfect?

[Agro]

Have no fear! AggroDrago is here!

Alright, let's get started; expect a lot of wording stuff from me:

Gotta put quotes around pebbles so we know that the effect refers to an archetype (i.e. "Pebble")

Pebble Heart: Get rid of the 'Also' at the start of the third sentence and move the '(Max. 4)' to the end of the third sentence right after the effect that puts counters on it. You should probably merge the last two sentences to make it one singular effect. Overall, the card is fine. Your wording is the only issue here.

Pebble Warrior: comma after Graveyard. Last sentence word edit: 'Decrease the ATK of this card by 100 every time a monster you control is destroyed.' If you ever find a want to make a limiter of this card, make the amount of ATK it loses equal to or greater than what it gains.

Pebble Hero: missing comma again. Colon to comma a few sentences later after 'Once per turn'. Edit wording on it's Special Summoning ability to make sure we know whose side of the field you're summoning it to. 'Level of the Special Summoned monster'. Well balanced for a card you could have tried to break the game with.

Pebble Hound: I'm starting to think you like the letter H. The comma is there! 'your Opponent cannot target any monsters on your side of the field with attacks or card effects, except this one.' ; >> , 'you can select 1 Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck. Balanced card, you're good here.

Pebble Mage: The comma survived again! WOAH. This effect is WAY too overpowered. It needs restrictions. And lower ATK and DEF. 'Fossil Dyna Whateverthelastpartis' has a ridiculous effect like this and its ATK and DEF is 1200. And the ability to add a Spell card to your hand should have a much bigger cost. 'Magical Stone Excavation' makes you discard 2 cards. I can see an infinite loop appearing here with you continuously Monster Reborning 'Pebble Mage' building up another card's effect. (I dunno, what card inflicts damage whenever a card is Special Summoned? Overall, the wording is fine on this one, but dear lord, is that effect overpowered.

[TheEffinZ]

[quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1313944277' post='5459322']
Have no fear! AggroDrago is here!

Alright, let's get started; expect a lot of wording stuff from me:

Gotta put quotes around pebbles so we know that the effect refers to an archetype (i.e. "Pebble")

Pebble Heart: Get rid of the 'Also' at the start of the third sentence and move the '(Max. 4)' to the end of the third sentence right after the effect that puts counters on it. You should probably merge the last two sentences to make it one singular effect. Overall, the card is fine. Your wording is the only issue here.

Pebble Warrior: comma after Graveyard. Last sentence word edit: 'Decrease the ATK of this card by 100 every time a monster you control is destroyed.' If you ever find a want to make a limiter of this card, make the amount of ATK it loses equal to or greater than what it gains.

Pebble Hero: missing comma again. Colon to comma a few sentences later after 'Once per turn'. Edit wording on it's Special Summoning ability to make sure we know whose side of the field you're summoning it to. 'Level of the Special Summoned monster'. Well balanced for a card you could have tried to break the game with.

Pebble Hound: I'm starting to think you like the letter H. The comma is there! 'your Opponent cannot target any monsters on your side of the field with attacks or card effects, except this one.' ; >> , 'you can select 1 Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck. Balanced card, you're good here.

Pebble Mage: The comma survived again! WOAH. This effect is WAY too overpowered. It needs restrictions. And lower ATK and DEF. 'Fossil Dyna Whateverthelastpartis' has a ridiculous effect like this and its ATK and DEF is 1200. And the ability to add a Spell card to your hand should have a much bigger cost. 'Magical Stone Excavation' makes you discard 2 cards. I can see an infinite loop appearing here with you continuously Monster Reborning 'Pebble Mage' building up another card's effect. (I dunno, what card inflicts damage whenever a card is Special Summoned? Overall, the wording is fine on this one, but dear lord, is that effect overpowered.
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Yeh, Okay I'll fix them as best as I can.

[quote name='AggroDrago' timestamp='1313944277' post='5459322']
Have no fear! AggroDrago is here!

Alright, let's get started; expect a lot of wording stuff from me:

Gotta put quotes around pebbles so we know that the effect refers to an archetype (i.e. "Pebble")

Pebble Heart: Get rid of the 'Also' at the start of the third sentence and move the '(Max. 4)' to the end of the third sentence right after the effect that puts counters on it. You should probably merge the last two sentences to make it one singular effect. Overall, the card is fine. Your wording is the only issue here.

Pebble Warrior: comma after Graveyard. Last sentence word edit: 'Decrease the ATK of this card by 100 every time a monster you control is destroyed.' If you ever find a want to make a limiter of this card, make the amount of ATK it loses equal to or greater than what it gains.

Pebble Hero: missing comma again. Colon to comma a few sentences later after 'Once per turn'. Edit wording on it's Special Summoning ability to make sure we know whose side of the field you're summoning it to. 'Level of the Special Summoned monster'. Well balanced for a card you could have tried to break the game with.

Pebble Hound: I'm starting to think you like the letter H. The comma is there! 'your Opponent cannot target any monsters on your side of the field with attacks or card effects, except this one.' ; >> , 'you can select 1 Monster in your Graveyard and shuffle it into your Deck. Balanced card, you're good here.

Pebble Mage: The comma survived again! WOAH. This effect is WAY too overpowered. It needs restrictions. And lower ATK and DEF. 'Fossil Dyna Whateverthelastpartis' has a ridiculous effect like this and its ATK and DEF is 1200. And the ability to add a Spell card to your hand should have a much bigger cost. 'Magical Stone Excavation' makes you discard 2 cards. I can see an infinite loop appearing here with you continuously Monster Reborning 'Pebble Mage' building up another card's effect. (I dunno, what card inflicts damage whenever a card is Special Summoned? Overall, the wording is fine on this one, but dear lord, is that effect overpowered.
[/quote][quote name='Tsukai Uchiha' timestamp='1313952548' post='5459729']
Yeh, Okay I'll fix them as best as I can.
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Fixed