Ghoulish Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 @DMG: Is the Demon army on holidays? How is everyone simply entering the castle? wouldn't there be guards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Don't look at me, I'm actually outside Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Ok, Dark Magician Girl, here it is. Cept I changed my race. It didnt fit with his bio. [spoiler=App] Username: se15fy (soon to be Munckin) Charachters Name: Sinn Alldin Age: 37 Gender: [color=#CC33CC]Male[/color] Sexuality: Straight Race: Human Side: Keiz [spoiler=Personailty] I cant BELIVE I forgot this. XD Sinn barely talks due to his training. He had learned that to listen and learn is better than to speak. Unless he actually has something to say, he says nothing. He doesnt agree, he doesnt disagree, he brings up his own unique points in a conversation and says it in the least amount of words possible. I said above that he doesnt agree. This is a big point. He prefers "No" and words like "Possibly" and "maybe" instead of a straight out "yes". The complete opposite of a ladies man, he prefers to keep anything romantic out of his life as he belives as long as he keeps anyone besides his liege, and his family, out of his life he will be more powerful than the Demon he created his Pact with so he can destroy it. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Bio, long] Sinn was born in a town where it was dog-eat-dog, kill or be killed, rob or be robbed. Sinn exelled at the art of Assassination, which his parents also specialized in. His sister was a master thief. His brother was a general thug, arrested more than 5 times. While his sister made most of the money, he became a contract killer in the Demon City sending half his earnings to his parents. Soon after he moved to the Demon City, sickness hit his hometown, Yran. His mother, Alice, escaped without harm but his father and brother died. Nothing was heard of his sister. Sinn and Alice found Keiz and, desperate to find their lost one, began to work for him. Eventually, on a mission far from the Demon City, Sinn found his sister. Or, part of her. Her arm, with the birthmark of a saber, was found in a cave, along with bones. But a trail of blood said that she escaped. He followed the trail and found her, weak and dying. His sister, whose name is Wisteria, had an infected wound. Sinn finished his job quickly and headed back to the Demon City, to find the King had died. He struck a deal with Keiz to help him keep the throne if Keiz helped Wisteria. Keiz did all he could, but nearly failed. Sinn struck a pact with a demon to give him dark powers. He healed Wisterias arm completely, but at the cost of his sanity. After a few months of help, he was back. But he knows the demon isnt done yet. It will cause trouble at the least convinient moment, he knows....for it whispers dark secrets in the back of his head, torturing him.............[/spoiler] [spoiler=Appearence] Face: Sinn has a scar on his face that cuts diagonally across his whole face. His eyes are nearly black, they are so dark, with barely any whites. Hair: Black hair, buzz cut. Physique: Slightly on the large side for an Assassin, Sinn is quite muscular and has great strength, although most of it is from his Pact. Clothing: Sinn wears a black hooded cloak, with black leather armor with a white design on the back. He wears dark red gloves and boots, and has a black belt with a silver belt buckle with a demonic design. Marks: Like his sister, Sinn has a birthmark on his left arm. It is the shape of a serpent. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Weapons] Primary: Two Obsidian Scimitars that are all he has left of his father. Secondary: A steel short sword. Tertiary: Shruikans made of an odd metal. A present from his sister. Fourth: He wears a sash that has 3 Obsidian Daggers in it from his mother. He also keeps his money there. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Abilities] As a result of his Pact, he has extraordinary healing powers. But anything beyond broken bones and severely bleeding wounds costs him a shard of sanity. He doesnt know yet, but when he is in the shadows, he can cast demonic spells.......for a cost... [/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Holy: Keiz let's anyone an everyone in. He's not afraid of anyone so he let's the guards have them come in. Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1314276875' post='5467494'] Ok, Dark Magician Girl, here it is. Cept I changed my race. It didnt fit with his bio. [spoiler=App] Username: se15fy (soon to be Munckin) Charachters Name: Sinn Alldin Age: 37 Gender: [color=#CC33CC]Male[/color] Sexuality: Straight Race: Asian Side: Keiz [spoiler=Bio, long] Sinn was born in a town where it was dog-eat-dog, kill or be killed, rob or be robbed. Sinn exelled at the art of Assassination, which his parents also specialized in. His sister was a master thief. His brother was a general thug, arrested more than 5 times. While his sister made most of the money, he became a contract killer in the Demon City sending half his earnings to his parents. Soon after he moved to the Demon City, sickness hit his hometown, Yran. His mother, Alice, escaped without harm but his father and brother died. Nothing was heard of his sister. Sinn and Alice found Keiz and, desperate to find their lost one, began to work for him. Eventually, on a mission far from the Demon City, Sinn found his sister. Or, part of her. Her arm, with the birthmark of a saber, was found in a cave, along with bones. But a trail of blood said that she escaped. He followed the trail and found her, weak and dying. His sister, whose name is Wisteria, had an infected wound. Sinn finished his job quickly and headed back to the Demon City, to find the King had died. He struck a deal with Keiz to help him keep the throne if Keiz helped Wisteria. Keiz did all he could, but nearly failed. Sinn struck a pact with a demon to give him dark powers. He healed Wisterias arm completely, but at the cost of his sanity. After a few months of help, he was back. But he knows the demon isnt done yet. It will cause trouble at the least convinient moment, he knows....for it whispers dark secrets in the back of his head, torturing him.............[/spoiler] [spoiler=Appearence] Face: Sinn has a scar on his face that cuts diagonally across his whole face. His eyes are nearly black, they are so dark, with barely any whites. Hair: Black hair, buzz cut. Physique: Slightly on the large side for an Assassin, Sinn is quite muscular and has great strength, although most of it is from his Pact. Clothing: Sinn wears a black hooded cloak, with black leather armor with a white design on the back. He wears dark red gloves and boots, and has a black belt with a silver belt buckle with a demonic design. Marks: Like his sister, Sinn has a birthmark on his left arm. It is the shape of a serpent. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Weapons] Primary: Two Obsidian Scimitars that are all he has left of his father. Secondary: A steel short sword. Tertiary: Shruikans made of an odd metal. A present from his sister. Fourth: He wears a sash that has 3 Obsidian Daggers in it from his mother. He also keeps his money there. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Abilities] As a result of his Pact, he has extraordinary healing powers. But anything beyond broken bones and severely bleeding wounds costs him a shard of sanity. He doesnt know yet, but when he is in the shadows, he can cast demonic spells.......for a cost... [/spoiler][/spoiler] [/quote] Err...by race...she means like Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Demon, etc. Not Asian. .-. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 se15fy, please have another go at your app. You seem to have misunderstood race, as mentioned by DK above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Yeah, didn't you read any of the other apps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 I'm in painting right now and I'm soooooooo bored! He's demonstrating and we won't get to paint till Tuesday.. I can't wait to start. I wanna start right now. D:< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Ooh! I like painting...okay, I lie, I don't like it...again, my nose grows, I hate paint and all kinds of painting... Okay, serious time. It's meh in my opinion, but I hope you do good Aisu! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 MAJOR OOPS!! *facepalmfacepalmfacepalm* [quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1314041519' post='5462983'] *slaps head* I feel dumb now. [/quote] Ok, fixing.EDIT: Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Se: Accepted. I'll add your app to the front next time I'm on a computer. Lol. Now get a posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Cool, yup.Gotta catch up first though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Your post was way too short. It has to be a [i]*minimum*[/i] of four lines of dialogue and/or reacting to the environment. Pump it up a little, make it interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 oops. yup, will do next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [quote name='se15fy' timestamp='1314297772' post='5468124'] oops. yup, will do next time. [/quote] Well, I request that you edit the post to make it a bit detailed, so we can flesh out on that, m'kay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Yup, just did. lol, finished, like exatly when you posted that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Alright guys. I'm done with classes so I'll be on my laptop soon. Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Posted.. Have at it people. Lol.Also.. The womanizer part of Keiz is now being shown. xDSe: Dude! That's the second time you've short posted! That's a strike! 2 more and you're out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Didn't expect for Keiz to be how he is, honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 N: He likes to take advantage with EVERYTHING, including getting his groove on. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Yeah, I bet he probably drinks a lot doesn't he? Well even if he does, he can't drink as much as Stornia before getting drunk! Stornia's from VALHALLA! They have fountains of beer! I don't care if the logic doesn't work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Alright.. I'ma point this out now.. I didn't earlier, thinking it would be an issue.. This is a general structure to go by when it comes to breaking the rules... 1st offense) Grace period.. You only have one.. 2nd time) 1st strike. Get 2 more and you're out. 3rd) Strike 2 4th) Strike 3, you're out. The only way a strike will be removed is if you give me a [u][i][b]GOOD[/b][/i][/u], [u][i][b]ENTERTAINING[/b][/i][/u] and [u][i][b]BELIEVABLE[/b][/i][/u] excuse for why you did what you did. And then, MAYBE then.. I'll remove a strike. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 You tell me how I can make 4 lines out of walking down the hall and waiting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 N: He doesn't drink a lot. He'll get a buzz, but he won't let himself get drunk.Se: Put details into it or wait until you can elaborate more into your post. :/ Remove or edit.. You're choice. There is no third choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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