Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6594/230240w.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][color=#b22222][size=3][font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]1 "Neo-Flamvell" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters[/font][/size][/color] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][color=#b22222][size=3][font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully: Destroy all other monsters on the field; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monsters destroyed x200. Once per turn, excluding the turn this card is Synchro summoned and the turn proceeding it: you can remove from play monsters in your opponent's Graveyard until they have 3 monsters in their Graveyard; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monsters removed x100; this effect cannot be activated two turns in a row; you cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activate this effect.[/font][/size][/color] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 Nothing wrong with it, although I'm a little on the fence about the "and the turn proceeding it" part. Overall, Great. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanPark24 Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 I like it. The picture is good and the effect is pretty cool too, but like T3RA said, the whole "turn proceeding" part doesn't seem to fit or whatever, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 [size=3]What's with all the colon's and semi colons?[/size] [size=3]Banish instead of Remove From Play.[/size] [size=3][color=#B22222][font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, destroy all other monsters on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monsters destroyed x200. You cannot activate this cards effect until the second End Phase after this card is Synchro Summoned. Once per turn, you can Banish monsters in your opponent's Graveyard until they have 3 monsters in their Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monsters Banished by this cards effect x100. You cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activate this effect.[/font][/color][/size] [size=3]That's my version of your effect with some ocg errors I noticed. (Though I haven't done it in a long time so I may have made some mistakes) However, I feel as though instead of making it so you have to wait two turns you should make it so that you can't activate the second effect if you activate the first because even if you do have to wait two turns your still racking up monsters in your opponent's graveyard so your basically adding damage. [/size] [color=#ff0000][size=3]When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can destroy all other monsters on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monster destroyed by this cards effect x200. If you activate this effect, you cannot activate this cards effect after this effect is resolved. Once per turn, you can Banish monsters in your Opponent's Graveyard until they have 3 monsters in their Graveyard and inflict damage to your Opponent equal to the number of monsters Banished by this cards effect x100. If this effect is activated, it cannot be activated until your next End Phase and you cannot conduct your Battle Phase on the turn you activate this effect.[/size][/color] [size=3]That's my own edits to your effects but even with this I feel as though you should reduce your monster's atk to 2700 - 2800 and lower it's level by 1.[/size] [size=3]7/10 (8.5 if you make these edits)[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted August 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 [color=#b22222][size=3][font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]Sorry, I just dragged this from the depths of my saved cards, back when it was still called "Remove From Play". And the colons and semicolons are part of the new ZeXaL OCG rulings.[/font][/size][/color] [font="'lucida sans unicode"][color="#b22222"]Well, the thing is, it has the two-turn wait to give you more opportunities to drop cards in the graveyard for a removal and burn. Also, his effect actually [i]hinders[/i] Neo-Flamvells at first, since their effects deal with a LACK of cards in your opponent's Graveyard.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 great, so this can do like 4000 damage on the opening turn for that reason I'd recommend you say this card can't attack your opponent directly the turn it's synchro summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 [quote]great, so this can do like 4000 damage on the opening turn[/quote] It is only deal 200 damage per monster, usually max number your opp have is 3-4. And your monster is already sent to the graveyard for this card Materials, so in its max 1000 damage MAXIMUM. Banishing monster is good, but its only deal 100 damage? Why, hoping more burn damage. So, i suggest the first burn is 400 each monster & 300 in Graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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