D.A._Sakuyamon Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 Alright, if still open, I'll join. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [quote name='♥ D.A._Fortune Lady ♥' timestamp='1313416430' post='5444848'] Alright, if still open, I'll join. [/quote] Yes it's still open. Just post your card and I'll add you to the list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [quote name='Sage of Dreams' timestamp='1313419565' post='5444958'] Entering an old card I like. [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/2537/393677a.jpg[/img] 1 LIGHT tuner+1 or more non-synchro monsters This card cannot be summoned except by synchro summon. When this card is synchro summoned, special summon 2 "Summer Cloud Token"s (/Fairy-type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). These tokens cannot be used for a tribute or synchro summon. Increase this card's ATK for every Token on the field x100. Discard 1 card to negate the destruction of a Token monster on your side of the field. This effect can only be used once per turn. Negate all battle damage in a battle involving this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict direct damage equal to the amount of Tokens on your side of the field x300. [/quote] [s]Nice. Added.[/s] EDIT: [quote]The challenge is simple. Make a realistic card based on a fantasy setting. Creature cards are preferred, but Spells and Traps are accepted. [color=#ff0000][u][i][b]No Fusion, Synchro, Ritual, etc.[/b][/i][/u][/color] The card must have at least 5 lines of text with good OCG, spelling, balance, originality, creativity, and playability. If I see any mistakes based on these attributes during judging I will not hesitate to dock you points.[/quote] Not added. Read the rules and try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [quote name='Blud' timestamp='1313419655' post='5444961'] [s]Nice. Added.[/s] EDIT: Not added. Read the rules and try again. [/quote] Okay, here: [img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/4134/393677.jpg[/img] Cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Malevolent World of Dreams". This card returns to the hand in the End Phase of the turn it was summoned. You can discard a card from your hand to negate the returning of this card. When there is a face-up "Malevolent World of Dreams" on your side of the field: this card's original ATK becomes 2300 and it's DEF becomes 3000. This card's ATK and DEF cannot change except by the effect of "Malevolent World of Dreams" You can remove 2 Dream Counters from your side of the field: inflict effect damage equal to half this card's DEF to your opponent. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase in the turn you used this effect. Related card that is kinda important: [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/4134/393677.jpg[/img] When a face-up "Dreamscape" monster on your side of the field is destroyed by battle, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Dreamscape" monster with a level equal to or lower than the monster destroyed to your side of the field. WHen you pay Life Points as a cost, place 1 Dream Counter on this card. Remove 4 Dream Counters from this card to return up to 2 cards on the field to the owner's hand. If this card is destroyed, destroy all face-up "Dreamscape" monsters on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [spoiler=Hydra Myth] [center][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8103/101278m.jpg[/img][/center] When this card is Summoned: Place 6 Head Counters on it. For each Head Counter on this card increase this cards ATK and DEF by 300. When this card would be destroyed: it is not destroyed and place 2 Head Counters on this card. Remove Head Counters from this card to destroy 1 monster who's Level is equal to the number of Head Counters removed. If this card has 20 or more Head Counter on it: Your opponent can discard 1 card to banish it.[/spoiler] I hope this this is acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [quote name='♥ D.A._Fortune Lady ♥' timestamp='1313420190' post='5444984'] [spoiler=Hydra Myth][center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8103/101278m.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned: Place 6 Head Counters on it. For each Head Counter on this card increase this cards ATK and DEF by 300. When this card would be destroyed: it is not destroyed and place 2 Head Counters on this card. Remove Head Counters from this card to destroy 1 monster who's Level is equal to the number of Head Counters removed. If this card has 20 or more Head Counter on it: Your opponent can discard 1 card to banish it.[/spoiler] I hope this this is acceptable. [/quote] Not sure about the OCG, but I'll add you. [/center][/center] [quote name='Sage of Dreams' timestamp='1313419953' post='5444973'] Okay, here: [img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/4134/393677.jpg[/img] Cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Malevolent World of Dreams". This card returns to the hand in the End Phase of the turn it was summoned. You can discard a card from your hand to negate the returning of this card. When there is a face-up "Malevolent World of Dreams" on your side of the field: this card's original ATK becomes 2300 and it's DEF becomes 3000. This card's ATK and DEF cannot change except by the effect of "Malevolent World of Dreams" You can remove 2 Dream Counters from your side of the field: inflict effect damage equal to half this card's DEF to your opponent. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase in the turn you used this effect. Related card that is kinda important: [/quote] I will accept this card, cause the rules say only a creature card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nine Breaker Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [color=#800000][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]I never did a contest but they look interesting. I'll give it a try if you don't mind a monster that may show up in another one of my forming sets. I don't know anything about points, or reps or donating so if I don't have enough to qualify just tell me.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [quote name='Nine Breaker' timestamp='1313442503' post='5445656'] [color=#800000][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]I never did a contest but they look interesting. I'll give it a try if you don't mind a monster that may show up in another one of my forming sets. I don't know anything about points, or reps or donating so if I don't have enough to qualify just tell me.[/font][/color] [/quote] To donate points you click the "Points" tab on the top-right corner of the site and go from there. There is no entrance fee, but you can always donate to the pot for a bigger prize. I don't mind the card's history, just post it and make sure it follows the criteria. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 Bump 1 more entry and judging will begin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nine Breaker Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [color=#800000][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]I hope everyone wasn't waiting too long. It took a while for me to find a picture I liked.[/font][/color] [spoiler=Agrat Succubus] [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/7518/465695.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=[i]Lore[/i]] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Once per turn you can equip this card to a face up monster. While equipped to a monster the following effects are activated: The monster cannot declare an attack and increase your Life Points by half the monster's attack during each of your Standby Phases. During each of your End Phases Special Summon 1 Cambion Token (Fiend-Type/Earth/Level 3/ATK 950/ DEF 300) to your field. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster you can Tribute a Cambion Token to Special Summon this monster back to the field in Attack Position.[/font][/size] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='Nine Breaker' timestamp='1313529863' post='5448367'] [color=#800000][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]I hope everyone wasn't waiting too long. It took a while for me to find a picture I liked.[/font][/color] [spoiler=Agrat Succubus] [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/7518/465695.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=[i]Lore[/i]] [size=3][font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]Once per turn you can equip this card to a face up monster. While equipped to a monster the following effects are activated: The monster cannot declare an attack and increase your Life Points by half the monster's attack during each of your Standby Phases. During each of your End Phases Special Summon 1 Cambion Token (Fiend-Type/Earth/Level 3/ATK 950/ DEF 300) to your field. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster you can Tribute a Cambion Token to Special Summon this monster back to the field in Attack Position.[/font][/size] [/spoiler] [/quote] Added. Judging will now begin. No more entries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nine Breaker Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 [font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000]In case you cannot find me, I'll be gone till late Saturday or Sunday on a small trip.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 BUMP! Judging is in! Just want to say thank you for joining my contest. I don't usually follow through with them, but because of you guys, I managed. So thanks again. Moving on: Remember, I judge cards based on OCG, balance, creativity, and originality. I will list the contestants from lowest to highest. So here they are: [center][center][size=6]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/size] [color=#ff0000][u][i]LiquidDJ11:[/i][/u][/color] [u][b]7.75/10[/b][/u] - A good card, but not exactly creative. The zone-conquering effect was made for the Alien monsters, which makes this card seem like an impostor in gold armor. It's balanced, I'll tell you that, but as for the OCG: "[i][b]until[/b] this card is destroyed[color=#ff0000][b], and[/b][/color] if there is already a card on that zone[/i]," you [i]never[/i] put an "and" after a coma in a card's text. The correct grammer would be: "[i]until this card is destroyed[color=#ff0000][b]. I[/b][/color]f there is already a card on that zone,[/i]" It makes more sense as far as what happens when. [i][u][color=#ff0000]Nine Breaker:[/color][/u][/i] [b][u]7.75/10[/u][/b][color="#000000"] - Your creativity in this card is pretty good. I can't remember any Succubi in any set. The thing is, though, your OCG is [i]way [/i]off. "[i][b]The[/b] monster cannot declare an attack [b]and[/b] increase your Life Points by half [b]the[/b] monster's attack during each of your Standby Phases.[/i]" When you mean "the" monster, of course you mean this card, but if someone else were to read that card text, they would be confused: [i]What do you mean [/i]"the" [i]monster? Is it supposed to be a specific monster? I don't understand. [/i]Also, the word "and" is a very sensitive word in a card's effect. A monster cannot not declare an attack [i]and [/i]increase your LP. Of course, that's just what I interpreted, but it just wouldn't make sense to the reader. Lastly, the way you balanced the card was a bit high-strung. In order to equip a monster with another monster, that equipping monster has to be a Union monster. Plus, having the equipped monster not attack is one thing, but increasing your LP by half that monster's ATK? What if it was a Blue-Eyes? Who cares if it can't attack? That's an easy 1500 LP per turn! Massively unfair to the opponent.[/color] [i][u][color=#ff0000]電源戦争ウルフ:[/color][/u][/i] [color=#000000][b][u]8/10[/u][/b] - Fairy Archer... simple name, but not very original. Granted, simplicity is the most original thing usually. I like the whole "I'm a fairy! Fear my brightness!" approach there, but the first thing I saw as far as balance was the effect where you Banish one card on the field to destroy one. By "banish 1 card on the field" do you mean on your side of the field or your opponent's? Or both? You need to determine where your specific field of play lands, otherwise the reader will think it will slide for anything. [/color] [i][u][color=#ff0000]Sage of Dreams:[/color][/u][/i] [u][b][color=#000000]8/10[/color][/b][/u][color="#000000"] - Definitely original, but OCG is off. I can spot several minor OCG mistakes in the card lore, but the one that stands out the most is the interpretation of "effect" damage. Effect damage, battle damage, they're both damage, so describing the type of damage delivered [/color]in the text[color="#000000"] is not necessary. The idea of a Dreamscape archetype is very interesting, though.[/color] [color=#FF0000][u][i]n8thegr8:[/i][/u][/color] [u][b]8.5/10[/b][/u] - OCG is perfect. Just like a Toon monster's lore would look on a real card. But let's talk about balance: the idea of Toon monsters balance the card out pretty good, but if you put it in terms of advantages, the odds of your opponent having Toon World out is pretty slim, so the card can easily slip past your opponent's monsters, and when that happens, a good Toon deck could easily supply you with a killer Toon monster like Blue-Eyes Toon Dragon, which can pelt your opponent with 3000 damage on the turn after it was summoned by the Knight's effect. I guess I make it sound too easy given that Toon World can be destroyed with a simple Heavy Storm or something, but [i][u][color=#ff0000]♥ D.A._Fortune Lady ♥:[/color][/u][/i] [b][u][color=#000000]9.13/10[/color][/u][/b][color=#000000] - I am a hardcore Grammer Nazi, so I always look at the OCG first. There are a few commas that needed to be included and "who's" should be "whose", because if the contraction were to be written out in words, the card text would read: "[i]Remove Head Counters from this card to destroy 1 monster [b]who is[/b] Level is equal [...]"[/i][/color] See? That doesn't make much sense, does it? The idea of a head-multiplying hydra is genius (despite that it was already used in an [i]awesome [/i]Disney movie.) The way you described the beast's supernatural traits in Yu-Gi-Oh card format brought it to life. Bravo! [color=#b22222][b][i]THIRD PLACE![/i][/b][/color] [i][u][color=#ff0000]newhat:[/color][/u][/i] [u][b][color=#000000]9.5/10[/color][/b][/u][color=#000000] - Original, creative, and simple. This card is genius, but the drawbacks seem to be a little overboard. Banishing cards to keep it out might throw you off in the long run because you only have a limited amount of cards to use, and if you use them, you can't use them again unless you have a RFP (Removed from play) card in your deck. Other than that, congrats! [/color][b][i][color=#a9a9a9]SECOND PLACE![/color][/i][/b] [i][u][color=#ff0000]Cindy ♥s You:[/color][/u][/i] [u][b][color=#000000]9.75/10[/color][/b][/u][color=#000000] - Why am I not surprised? Being almost just as straight-forward as Ragnorak, you made your point with this card. Simple, creative, original, and KA. Love the idea and the effect: short, sweet, and to the point. That's what I like in any card, not just Yu-Gi-Oh. You deserve this. [/color][b][i][color=#8b4513]FIRST PLACE![/color][/i][/b] [/center][/center] [center][center][size=6][color=#000000]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/color][/size] [color=#000000]Awesome job, everyone! I will deliver the prizes as soon as possible.[/color] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 Sweat, third place. Congrates to the other winners as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 Now I'm not sure if the points went through or not, but how do you add reps? Cause I'm not finding anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 [quote name='Blud' timestamp='1313611856' post='5451079'] Now I'm not sure if the points went through or not, but how do you add reps? Cause I'm not finding anything. [/quote] It's the button that says "Like this". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 [quote name='Sage of Dreams' timestamp='1313646166' post='5452285'] It's the button that says "Like this". [/quote] I found it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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