Lucas the Flame Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [spoiler='commons'][img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/7634/433417q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/426/433417h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/985/433417u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/985/433417u.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='rare'][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5235/433417j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/2060/433417.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='ultra rare'][img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4439/433417x.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='secret rare'] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/7634/433417q.jpg[/img] [spoiler='lore']This card can not be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play 1 dragon type monster from the field. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 card in the graveyard to add 1 removed from play card to the owner's hand and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='ultimate rare'][img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/2060/433417.jpg[/img] [img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/496/433417l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4372/433417p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/496/433417l.jpg[/img][/spoiler] I will add more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L of the Shinigami Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Ehh...the artwork is good, but there are so many errors. If you can inflict direct damage, what the heck is piercing damage? By the way, Angle should be Angel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duck_Sauce Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 I agree with Members in the sense that there are a few errors. "Combat" should be changed to "Battle" for correct OCG. I think you could elaborate on the effects alot more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 piercing is dealing damage if the monsters attack is higher than the defense of a defense position monster.And please just choose one to fix the ocg on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Yea, so there's a lot of errors here: 1) Almost none of the pics match the names of the cards you chose. There are a few that go with the dragon theme, and there are almost no good pictures. The ones that are good are all stolen from well known games. Truthfully, I count, at the most, 3 good pics that are original. 2) There are a TON of OCG errors. Too many for me to count really. 3) All of the effects are either unimaginative, or just plain bad. Overall, this set is really bad, and it looks like it had close to zero work put into it. I recommend putting more time into finding better pics and thinking of effects that take longer than 30 seconds to think up. As for the names, they aren't great, but I do understand that it can be hard to think of great names sometimes. Though I'd work on that harder too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [center][center]That, and the fact most cards are Beat-down oriented.[/center][/center] [center][center]No creativity, nothing special.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 these card effects are WAY too plain most of them you should give them each another effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [quote name='Remnants' timestamp='1312776622' post='5424200'] Yea, so there's a lot of errors here: 1) Almost none of the pics match the names of the cards you chose. There are a few that go with the dragon theme, and there are almost no good pictures. The ones that are good are all stolen from well known games. Truthfully, I count, at the most, 3 good pics that are original. 2) There are a TON of OCG errors. Too many for me to count really. 3) All of the effects are either unimaginative, or just plain bad. Overall, this set is really bad, and it looks like it had close to zero work put into it. I recommend putting more time into finding better pics and thinking of effects that take longer than 30 seconds to think up. As for the names, they aren't great, but I do understand that it can be hard to think of great names sometimes. Though I'd work on that harder too. [/quote] [quote name='Therrion' timestamp='1312776955' post='5424221'] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]That, and the fact most cards are Beat-down oriented. [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]No creativity, nothing special. [/quote] [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312805305' post='5424569'] these card effects are WAY too plain most of them you should give them each another effect [/quote] I don't care what you think. If you look at any real pack you will see they aren't all just apart of one theme. So if you don't have anything to post don't post at all.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [quote name='jordan133' timestamp='1312821199' post='5425042'] I don't care what you think. If you look at any real pack you will see they aren't all just apart of one theme. So if you don't have anything to post don't post at all.[/center][/center] [/quote] Uh, wow. U mad bro? Seriously, if you don't care what people think about your cards, then just don't post them. That way, you don't have to hear peoples' honest opinions. However, it seems to me that you do care, which is why you posted them. The only problem is that you were expecting for everyone who sees your cards to automatically fall in love with them because you had a few good pics, some high ATK power, and Dragons. Unfortunately for you, that tactic is seen pretty much everyday from 1-2 stars who are getting in WAY over their heads (no offense to those of you who are actually good at making cards and/or other areas on this site). Let me tell you now, it takes creativity and work to make great things, and plenty of it if you hoped to be noticed and respected. Now, I understand if you have trouble coming up with these cards, and if you want to make cards like these forever, with no hope of improving, that's fine. Just don't post it as if you are looking for replies. This is the Realistic Cards section. People look at your cards and post based on their opinions on how realistic and impressive your cards seem. I'd recommend posting this in another forum section if you don't want people to comment as much. Lastly, nobody likes someone who can't take criticism. Your cards are horrific. Terrible. BAD. And you posted them here to have them commented on. Seeing this, a few people commented on them, giving their share on how you can improve your card making skills. Some of them were even very well respected members on this site, and could easily take you down on this site if you challenged them. Nonetheless, you decided to read their comments, and, being the noob that you are, you could not take their constructive critiscm. In retaliation, you quoted us, and posted saying complete lies about how we had nothing to post, and doing it in a rather rude fashion, even though everyone here was completely professional about commenting on your cards. Let me tell you already, I don't like you. You are like many other noobs on this site who are ignorant to others' advice on projects you wish to dive into, even though you know nothing of how to do said project well. In this case, your project would be card making. I suggest that if you want to keep others from feeling the same way about you as I do, you stop being a baby (both metaphorically, and literally, as your behavior has indicated to me that you are probably very young), and start learning to take advice from people MUCH better than you at the thing you enjoy doing. After all, these people, who may I remind you, are so much better, actually WANT to help you make your cards better. But I doubt that will last forever if you just lash out every time they post their two cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [quote name='Remnants' timestamp='1312823068' post='5425104'] Uh, wow. U mad bro? Seriously, if you don't care what people think about your cards, then just don't post them. That way, you don't have to hear peoples' honest opinions. However, it seems to me that you do care, which is why you posted them. The only problem is that you were expecting for everyone who sees your cards to automatically fall in love with them because you had a few good pics, some high ATK power, and Dragons. Unfortunately for you, that tactic is seen pretty much everyday from 1-2 stars who are getting in WAY over their heads (no offense to those of you who are actually good at making cards and/or other areas on this site). Let me tell you now, it takes creativity and work to make great things, and plenty of it if you hoped to be noticed and respected. Now, I understand if you have trouble coming up with these cards, and if you want to make cards like these forever, with no hope of improving, that's fine. Just don't post it as if you are looking for replies. This is the Realistic Cards section. People look at your cards and post based on their opinions on how realistic and impressive your cards seem. I'd recommend posting this in another forum section if you don't want people to comment as much. Lastly, nobody likes someone who can't take criticism. Your cards are horrific. Terrible. BAD. And you posted them here to have them commented on. Seeing this, a few people commented on them, giving their share on how you can improve your card making skills. Some of them were even very well respected members on this site, and could easily take you down on this site if you challenged them. Nonetheless, you decided to read their comments, and, being the noob that you are, you could not take their constructive critiscm. In retaliation, you quoted us, and posted saying complete lies about how we had nothing to post, and doing it in a rather rude fashion, even though everyone here was completely professional about commenting on your cards. Let me tell you already, I don't like you. You are like many other noobs on this site who are ignorant to others' advice on projects you wish to dive into, even though you know nothing of how to do said project well. In this case, your project would be card making. I suggest that if you want to keep others from feeling the same way about you as I do, you stop being a baby (both metaphorically, and literally, as your behavior has indicated to me that you are probably very young), and start learning to take advice from people MUCH better than you at the thing you enjoy doing. After all, these people, who may I remind you, are so much better, actually WANT to help you make your cards better. But I doubt that will last forever if you just lash out every time they post their two cents. [/quote] Well I post because I need help with the ocg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [quote name='jordan133' timestamp='1312823151' post='5425105'] Well I post because I need help with the ocg. [/quote] Well then say that in your opening post. Or, better yet, just say, "Thanks, but I'm only posting this for OCG fixes, so could you please help me with that instead?" Another thing you could do is seek out help. Look at examples of other cards, or just talk to others about making them. Here's a place that would probably help you out with something like this: [url][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/254233-card-maker-academy/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/254233-card-maker-academy/[/url][/url] And sorry about that whole rant thing. I tend to do these long-winded speeches when I'm annoyed, but you must understand that what I am saying is very true, and could easily happen to someone who isn't willing to at least treat others with respect, especially when they are trying to help you improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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