Rapidfire Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=wind%20fox&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Wind&level=4&magictraptype=None&rarity=Super%20Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/308720/884132465.jpg&set1=wind&set2=fox&inset=true&type=wind&description=trap%20cards%20do%20not%20affect%20this%20fox&circulation=4&atk=2100&def=2000&creator=Rapid%20fire&year=2010&serial=04836619[/img]sorry it is my first time trying this so i think i messed up . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]While in the card maker screen, right (or left click for some people) the card you wish to post. [/center][/center] [center][center]Go to the top option (Open Link) and click it. [/center][/center] [center][center]A url will appear under the card, copy and paste that url into the topic [/center][/center] [center][center]It will turn into the card's image when you post or preview the topic. [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▼AlcaNdeR▼ Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]Here is your card (I've uploaded it to tinypic, since idk why it doesn't appear)[/center][/center] [center][center][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2pp0hev.jpg[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Well first things first: -Name must start with caps = "Wind Fox" same for monster's type -There is no such thing as "wind-type", remember Wind it's just an Attribute, for the monsters type, it seems a "Beast" monster for me. Picture is pretty bad and has LQ, you can find better pics here:[url="http://www.deviantart.com/"]http://www.deviantart.com/[/url] just search for something you would like. -There are some OCG errors. Correct OCG (Original Card Grammar): "This card is unaffected by Trap Cards". -Card is way to simple, you need more dynamic effects and remember if there is something that benefits you, there should be some drawbacks too. -Card is OP'ed (overpowered) beacuse it's a Level 4 monster with 2100 ATK and 2000 DEF and with an effect without drawback; make it Level 6 if you wanna leave the card that way (I mean the effect and stats) OR add 1 drawback, something like:[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] -"During each of your End Phases: this card loses 300 ATK" [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]OR -"This card cannot attack directly." [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] OR [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]-"If you control another monster: destroy this card." Things like that, but i prefer changing the card's Level. I'm guessing this is your first card, so welcome, if you wanna stay in Realistic Section, take in mind what i said here. 5/10[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 if that's the card, it is WAY too plain just trap immunity isn't enough give it something like trample damage or something plus 2100 atk is a bit too much since there's no drawback yes Goblin Elite Attack Force has 2200 atk, but it has to go to def position after attacking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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