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Witch Archtype *Finally Finished*


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there are cards with effects like Effies (parasite paracide, exchange) Idk if their banned though...

and I wasn't trying to make flareshot op'ed, i guess I wasn't thinking of the possibilities... will fix soon!

and for Youki, I'm making another card to go with her DIRECTLY so her crappy effect will make sense later

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Well Sky... you don't need me to say that it's a wonderful set, because it is and it is because of their effects, so unique and juicy
I will start my review (like i said) hope you like it :)
[spoiler='Silf']
[b]Picture[/b]-Picture is good but it seems a bit stretched to me.</p>
[b]Effect-[/b]Alright, I like this effect a lot because with some card's effects you have to move a card to your bottoms Deck so this is helpful if it's used properly, now from the Tails part i would said you rush in this part it seems a bit out of context with the Heads effect IMO maybe it could be better something like: "Add 1 card from your hand to your Deck: shuffle the Deck" and for both players too, it's just i think it would be a combined effect over the other and the other thing I like its that is balanced i mean you [b]must[/b] flip a coin. [u][b]One more thing, what if I don't have spell/trap cards, and if the card I'm about to banish can't be banished?.[/b][/u]

[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture. [/b] 8/10
[b]-Effect.[/b] 9/10
[b]-Use. [/b] 10/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 10/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 10/10
[b][u]Overall 9.4[/u][/b]
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[spoiler='Driff']
[b]Picture-[/b]Like the "Silf" one, its stretched.
[b]Effect-[/b]Hey something like "Lava Golem" nice but i feel its a little OP'ed beacause your opponent cannot Tribute or do anything with it. At least with lava golem you are able to Tribute and payment of 1000 LP doesn't seem fair to me but its okay.
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture [/b] 8/10
[b]-Effect[/b] 8/10
[b]-Use [/b] 9/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 8.5/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 10/10
[u][b]Overall 8.7[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Rilfy]
[b]Picture-[/b]Ohh I like this one :) xDD
[b]Effect-[/b]Hmm the effect it's okay IMO but you would use something like "both players must select 1 card from their Graveyard; add selected card to their owner's bottom Deck" just to make some play with "Silf" but the way it is, is fine, you didn't take care of the OCG here right? I'm not good at this neither but I'll try.

[s][b]OCG correction:[/b][/s]
"When this card is Normal Summoned: both players must discard 1 card from the top of their Deck. This card gains x100 ATK for each Spell Card in your Graveyard."(Yeah it's not a big change but there is a change >.<)
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture[/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect[/b] 8/10
[b]-Use [/b] 8/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 10/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 9/10
[u][b]Overall 9[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Sabrif']
[b]Picture-[/b]Love it <3
[b]Effect-[/b]it's a good idea but I might rise that LP payment to 1000, nothing much to say here though.
[b]-Picture [/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect [/b] 8/10
[b]-Use[/b] 8/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 7.5/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 10/10
[u][b]Overall 8.7[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Spellbinding Projectile]
[b]Picture-[/b]looks more like a Spell/Trap Card's Picture to me but its good.</p>
[b]Effect-[/b]Now I like this one but again to play with "Silf" the last part "add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to the top of your Deck."should be to bottoms Deck just saying... now I've got 2 questions here why did you put "Max2" if this card doesn't hold the Spell Counters or you mean that I can only put 2 Counters on the field by this effect? ( it's kinda weird because if you mean Max2 on the field, in card's text we are talking about the monster) the other question is: does the Spell Counter's effect means that other cards with Spell Counters (not coming from this one) cannot attack too? Still.. I like it.
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture [/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect[/b] 9/10
[b]-Use [/b] 10/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 10/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 10/10
[u][b]Overall 9.8[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Kilfie]
[b]Picture-[/b]Love it <3 :3</p>
[b]Effect-[/b]Wow something tricky xDD I like it. Minor OCG errors, this is my try:

"While this card is face-up on the field: both players must play with their Decks upside-down."
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture[/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect Wicked[/b]! 10/10
[b]-Use [/b] 10/10
[b]-Balance [/b] 10/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 9.5/10
[u][b]Overall 9.9[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Fefe']
[b]Picture-[/b]I like it :D
[b]Effect-[/b]Hmm it's okay. Minor OCG error, my try:

"While this card is face-up on the field:Trap Cards and Quick-Play Spell Cards cannot be activated."
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture[/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect[/b] 8/10
[b]-Use [/b] 8/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 10/10
[b]-OCG[/b] 9.8/10
[b]Overall[/b] 9.1
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Effie, Youki's Advocate']
[b]Picture-[/b]Amazing
[b]Effect-[/b]Wicked effect!! i love it it's somethig like "Return from the Different Dimension" what if a monster cannot be Special Summoned? you keep it? also this could be a little OP'ed IMO, maybe, make it that card's effect are negated when monsters are summoned. Minor OCG error, my try:

"When this card is Summoned: shuffle all banished monsters into each others Decks. If either player draws a card belonging to their opponent: it is Special Summoned to the owners side of the field; Summoned monsters cannot attack during the turn they are Summoned."
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture[/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect [/b] 10/10
[b]-Use [/b] 9/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 7/10
[b]-OCG[/b] 9/10
[u][b]Overall 9[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Youki Head Witch']
[b]Picture-[/b]It's a little blurry but i like it.</p>
[b]Effect-[/b]UP'ed IMO, "Patrician of Darkness" is way better than this, you don't pay LP, if you wanna leave that LP payment you should drop it to 500 I think. Some OCG errors, my Correction:

"Once per turn, you must activate a Spell Card if you cannot: Destroy this card. While this card is face-up on the field: Decks are not shuffled. Once per turn, when your opponent declares an attack: You can pay 1000 Life Points; the controller of this card selects the attack target."
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture [/b] 9.5/10
[b]-Effect[/b] 9/10
[b]-Use [/b] 10/10
[b]-Balance [/b] 6/10
[b]-OCG[/b] 8/10
[u][b]Overall 8.5[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Youki's Untamed Male']
[b]Picture-[/b]I like it.
[b]Effect-[/b]3 Cards cost is too high even more if you're payin' 1500 LP, but if this has some use like effects from being discarded it's okay, you'll say.
[b]-Score-[/b]
[b]-Picture[/b] 10/10
[b]-Effect, I hope this gets some use[/b] 10/10
[b]-Use [/b] 10/10
[b]-Balance[/b] 8/10
[b]-OCG [/b] 10/10
[u][b]Overall 9.6[/b][/u]
[/spoiler]

Well, this is my review so far, I'm gonna make another one for Spell/Trap Cards soon :)

<3 the set [b]-OVERALL on monsters- [/b]


[u]-Silf 9.4[/u]
[u]-Driff 8.7[/u]
[u]-Rilfy 9[/u]
[u]-Sabrif 8.7[/u]
[u]-Spellbending Projectile 9.8[/u]
[u]-Kilfie 9.9[/u]
[u]-Fefe 9.1[/u]
[u]-Effie, youki's advocate 9[/u]
[u]-Youki head witch 8.5[/u]
[u]-Youki's untamed male 9.6[/u]
[b][u]OVERALL 9.1[/u][/b]


EDIT: damn I had to erase some annoying codes :l YCM is crazy.

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well, your response got screwed in the end but thanks for the feed back! I'll fix what needs to be fixed, but to justify myself...

[spoiler=SpellBinding Projectile]The max is for the counters on the field, otherwise we'd have a limitless Swords of Revealing Light! *scary things man!* and yes this can slip into any Spell counter deck and stop everything! mwahaha!I didn't think about playing Silf...hmmm[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Youki] Her effects seem crappy, but I'm making: 1 Lv seven monster, 1 fusion monster, and 1 synchro monster to maximize it.
Patence young Padawan![/spoiler]

[spoiler=Youki's Untamed Male]This card was ment to be a modified version of Jira Guma, but I didn't wanna OP him...*sigh* back to the drawing board...[/spoiler]

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Yeah I know but it's fixed now :)

@Spellbending... :o in that case you're evil >:) xDD
@Youki so I think the set isn't over right? damn... >.< anyways I'll be glad to see those.
@Untamed Male so yeah but now its UP'ed >.< hahahhaha but it doesn't matter if those 3 discarded cards are discarded for good? know what i mean?

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