❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 woot kay gunna go post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven des blutroten Mondes Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 YAY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 2nd char. finished i think..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='Raven des blutroten Mondes' timestamp='1312955457' post='5429605'] YAY [/quote] i just posted and i i said ooc: you need to have at least three lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 @Subzero: actually it's four lines.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='ANBU' timestamp='1312955923' post='5429621'] @Subzero: actually it's four lines.. [/quote] ohh woops i may need to go back but i was still close id make the whole infiltrate and rock through longer by adding in what the other chars are doing or like "the rock hit the tree barely missing alice" or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Advanced clause states four lines doesn't it? not three.. as the minimum for the posts Edit: gah.. ninja'd and your post glitched? anyway to make it longer describe the surroundings/characters more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='ANBU' timestamp='1312956054' post='5429623'] Advanced clause states four lines doesn't it? not three.. as the minimum for the posts [/quote] i thought it was three but i dont know i always seemed to pull of 4 or more lines so i dont know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven des blutroten Mondes Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 i fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='Raven des blutroten Mondes' timestamp='1312956388' post='5429627'] i fixed it [/quote] sorry if i seemed bossy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven des blutroten Mondes Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 its ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 @Raven:..so er.. is my 2nd guy accepted? ^^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven des blutroten Mondes Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Yes he is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warzone214 Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 can i join Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven des blutroten Mondes Posted August 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warzone214 Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 Name: Amusie Clan: Unique Ability: Fused with the wolf demon Ammut in extreme situations he gets ammuts power his chakra turns black, eyes turn red, grows fangs and claws Age: 19 Gender: male Village: Hidden Cloud Ninja Rank: assassin Skill(s): sight of the wolf and slowly heals his self Element(s): air & water Appearance/Description: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/33334361/pics/ninja.jpg[/img] Personality: is hot headed, also a strategist, also quiet type History/Background: Amusie grew up in the village hidden in the cloud. When he was 6 he was possessed by Ammut a powerful wolf demon. It was Ammuts attempted to enter the world of the living. Amusie embraced Ammut and their souls were linked together. At the age of 9 he graduated the ninja academy and at the age of 16 he became an assassin for the village hidden in the cloud killing traitors and enemies of his village. He has 251 kills from contracts . Jutsu(s) 1.Instant transmission- the user is able to teleport to wherever they can see or picture in their minds eye. Type- Nunjutsu 2.Air Jutsu- the user can manipulate but not create air any way they want Type- Nunjutsu 3.Water Jutsu- the user can manipulate but not create water any way they want Type- Nunjutsu 4. Soul death ball- the user creates a black ball of the charka and thrust it in to the enemy (a powerful attack takes most of the user’s chakra ) Type- Nunjutsu 5.Demon powers- Amusie uses his demons powers to become faster and stronger and all his senses are heightened (used only in extreme situations) Type- Demonic sorry it took so long i was tryin to [size=2]figure [/size]this but is this ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 1st is way too op (considering this is naruto not dbz..), and since when did naruto have spirits other than those of the bijuu? (only referred to as spirit for the shukakku as far as i know, be easier for custom clanj with heightened senses and abilities similar to a wolf anjd usiong them wouldn't it? [also wouldn't leave a plot hole in the naruto universe xD])... just pointng out the two obv. things, second one probably isnt that much of a problem ^^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warzone214 Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 im not naruto i just like that pic i will edit it tomarrow with photo shop to not look like him so much and change the head band i jusy called my first juzu that because itr seemed like the bested name not conected to dbz at all teleporting is a gay name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 i didnt sy you were naruto i said this is naruto a power like that could only be non op if it was limited range in a mutant/superhuman rp or a power in a DBZ rp in the naruto universe it's too easy to abuse/OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 anbu already got the justu things exept soul death ball seems way to close to the rasengan you can call it death beam or death touch so its not so close, he looks way to much like naruto even if you did edit him and has an akatsuki coat on... nunjutsu? didnt know nuns used jutsu its spelled "ninjutsu"... not much else to say other than hes kinda overpowerd in an rp like this you need to keep all the characters in sort of a balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 @Subzero: he didn't mention how the death ball was used (might be thrown.. rofl DBZ reference) his only OP bit is the teleport.. raised senses as with normal senses could be fooled (would just need a bit more work) the strength and speed well with the stronger hits he'll have to move slower to put the full power into it allowing the opponent a chance to counter-attack if thry are fast (or they could just lure him into a closed area or trap).. his air and water jutsu are basically the starting principles of nature trasformation using water or air arent they?.. and his regen ability would depend on what he means by slow.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warzone214 Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 i fix some things by slow i mean its not fast like wolverine or someone like that say if he had whole in him it would take a day or two just a little faster than normal what else do i need fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 looks pretty good now ^^, lol at burnet looking sasuke guy wouldnt he get cold in only a mesh top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warzone214 Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 ill take out a coat or mabe your charater will keep mine warm lol ninja pics are hard to find well good ones any way but im goin to remove the wolf form thing because it seems to were wolf like think its better now? i got skool so ill be on after i get back but to day is the day im only their for about an hour so ill be on around 9 or so about 4 hours from now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
❤ Lovely Warrior ❤ Posted August 12, 2011 Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 [quote name='warzone214' timestamp='1313179963' post='5436719'] ill take out a coat or mabe your charater will keep mine warm lol ninja pics are hard to find well good ones any way but im goin to remove the wolf form thing because it seems to were wolf like think its better now? i got skool so ill be on after i get back but to day is the day im only their for about an hour so ill be on around 9 or so about 4 hours from now [/quote] he is better now... and you better wear a coat i dont want warm you im about to take on the akatsuki by myself (my tree will help me though) >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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