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Naruto: Akatsuki Rising (pg-16/started/accepting)


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[quote name='ANBU' timestamp='1312955923' post='5429621']
@Subzero: actually it's four lines..
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ohh woops i may need to go back but i was still close

id make the whole infiltrate and rock through longer by adding in what the other chars are doing or like "the rock hit the tree barely missing alice" or something

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Name: Amusie
Clan:
Unique Ability: Fused with the wolf demon Ammut in extreme situations he gets ammuts power his chakra turns black, eyes turn red, grows fangs and claws
Age: 19
Gender: male
Village: Hidden Cloud
Ninja Rank: assassin
Skill(s): sight of the wolf and slowly heals his self
Element(s): air & water
Appearance/Description: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/33334361/pics/ninja.jpg[/img]
Personality: is hot headed, also a strategist, also quiet type
History/Background: Amusie grew up in the village hidden in the cloud. When he was 6 he was possessed by Ammut a powerful wolf demon. It was Ammuts attempted to enter the world of the living. Amusie embraced Ammut and their souls were linked together. At the age of 9 he graduated the ninja academy and at the age of 16 he became an assassin for the village hidden in the cloud killing traitors and enemies of his village. He has 251 kills from contracts .
Jutsu(s) :(
1.Instant transmission- the user is able to teleport to wherever they can see or picture in their minds eye.
Type- Nunjutsu
2.Air Jutsu- the user can manipulate but not create air any way they want
Type- Nunjutsu
3.Water Jutsu- the user can manipulate but not create water any way they want
Type- Nunjutsu
4. Soul death ball- the user creates a black ball of the charka and thrust it in to the enemy (a powerful attack takes most of the user’s chakra )
Type- Nunjutsu
5.Demon powers- Amusie uses his demons powers to become faster and stronger and all his senses are heightened (used only in extreme situations)

Type- Demonic


sorry it took so long i was tryin to [size=2]figure [/size]this but is this ok

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1st is way too op (considering this is naruto not dbz..), and since when did naruto have spirits other than those of the bijuu? (only referred to as spirit for the shukakku as far as i know, be easier for custom clanj with heightened senses and abilities similar to a wolf anjd usiong them wouldn't it? [also wouldn't leave a plot hole in the naruto universe xD])...

just pointng out the two obv. things, second one probably isnt that much of a problem ^^"

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anbu already got the justu things exept soul death ball seems way to close to the rasengan you can call it death beam or death touch so its not so close, he looks way to much like naruto even if you did edit him and has an akatsuki coat on... nunjutsu? didnt know nuns used jutsu its spelled "ninjutsu"... not much else to say other than hes kinda overpowerd in an rp like this you need to keep all the characters in sort of a balance

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@Subzero: he didn't mention how the death ball was used (might be thrown.. rofl DBZ reference)
his only OP bit is the teleport.. raised senses as with normal senses could be fooled (would just need a bit more work) the strength and speed well with the stronger hits he'll have to move slower to put the full power into it allowing the opponent a chance to counter-attack if thry are fast (or they could just lure him into a closed area or trap).. his air and water jutsu are basically the starting principles of nature trasformation using water or air arent they?.. and his regen ability would depend on what he means by slow..

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ill take out a coat or mabe your charater will keep mine warm lol ninja pics are hard to find well good ones any way but im goin to remove the wolf form thing because it seems to were wolf like think its better now?

i got skool so ill be on after i get back but to day is the day im only their for about an hour so ill be on around 9 or so about 4 hours from now

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[quote name='warzone214' timestamp='1313179963' post='5436719']
ill take out a coat or mabe your charater will keep mine warm lol ninja pics are hard to find well good ones any way but im goin to remove the wolf form thing because it seems to were wolf like think its better now?

i got skool so ill be on after i get back but to day is the day im only their for about an hour so ill be on around 9 or so about 4 hours from now
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he is better now... and you better wear a coat i dont want warm you im about to take on the akatsuki by myself (my tree will help me though) >:3

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