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Dimensional Rift (pg-16/not started/accepting) Co host= Me and my home boys


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just think detail. Tell them everything about the plot, How did it start? What has happend? Whas is going to happen? WHY SHOULD THEY JOIN? These are the questions you need to ask yourself when your writing a plot. Somepeople like me can do it off the top of their head, others have to sit down and think about it for weeks.

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I will finish this later.
Name: Eclipse Rakonash
Age: 52
Race: Marain
Abilities: (transformations) paragreen falcon for speed, Snake for thermal vision, Chimera for strength, Chameleon for stealth, multi-venom hydra for tourture.
Bio: Even from first born Eclipse has been born for destiny. He has had over 50 near death experiences from being care free and people trying to kill him. Marians are not a widely accepted race and have been driven from their homes for many millennia. When Eclipse learned of this he vowed to punish all who discriminate against his kind. When he heard the legend of the former dark lord he had only just begun to enact his vow. When everyone feared the dark lord had returned he made another vow. He would rid this world of evil and then the world would love his race and then his race could live in peace.
Description: Being of the Marian race he never has a deffinate form but in his human form which he takes most often he stands 5'8 and wears a t-shirt with a picture of a human changing into an animal and then into a half human half animal form then into a blob of goo. That is the symbol of the Marian also he wears blue shorts. He has a stunning crystal blue eyes along with silver-gold hair.
Personality: Carefree, yet sadistic. He won't mess with you unless u mess with him. Make him and enemy and prepare to die a slow painful death. Befriend him and be scared of his evil mind. He is carefree most of the time, but if someone gives him reason to get even slightly mad he will not hesitate to kill. He always fulfills revenge, for himself, and for others.

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