LRPXD Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 [center][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/710/260988k.jpg[/img] Lore: You can discard this monster from your hand to select up to 3 cards with "Toon" in it's name from your Deck and add it to your hand. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Uprising Of A Demented World". When this card is successfully Ritual Summoned you can banish atleast 1 card with "Ritual" in it's effect from your Graveyard and select 1 card from your Spell/Trap Zone, that card is treated as "Toon World". If you control "Toon World" on your side of the field this monster cannot be effected by card effects your opponent controls and can attack twice in the same battle phase. While this card is on the field OR Graveyard inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each time your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card, Special Summons a monster from his/her Deck OR Extra Deck. [spoiler=Ritual Spell] [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/7479/260988.jpg[/img] You can banish this card from your hand OR Graveyard to search through your Deck and select 1 "Toon World" and add it to your hand. This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Rulers Of The Demented World". You must also banish monsters on your field or hand whose total Levels equal 8 or more [/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 (remembersthetwopoststodayabouthowRCforumsucksandthatallwethinkaboutistheoriginalityofthecardanddon'treallycareabouthepicture) Hmm....the pic doesn't look very toonish to me. For the actual card: effectively stops Special Summoning and locks your opponents Spells and Traps. And I assume by the first effect that you can also move "Manga Ryu-Ran" to your hand as well? If so, prepare for an OP flame!! I also think having a Level 8 Monster with 3000 ATK/DEF is a bit much. There was already that mistake with RDA, we don't need another good YCM falling into that trap of "oh, I really like this card, I'm gonna copy it's level and it's stats, give it some blatant effect and call it a card" (we've already seen too much of that today). Especially since it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. And before you say anything, I am fully aware that all the toon monsters can attack your opponent directly, and I just want to say, thank goodness you didn't have that effect. 8/10 (Good!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 great, free Toon World "While this card is on the field OR Graveyard inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each time your opponent activates a card's effect OR Special Summons a monster." that seems a little bit too easy to pull the burn effect off you might want to make it slightly more specific Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 [quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1311740624' post='5390689'] (remembersthetwopoststodayabouthowRCforumsucksandthatallwethinkaboutistheoriginalityofthecardanddon'treallycareabouthepicture) Hmm....the pic doesn't look very toonish to me. For the actual card: effectively stops Special Summoning and locks your opponents Spells and Traps. And I assume by the first effect that you can also move "Manga Ryu-Ran" to your hand as well? If so, prepare for an OP flame!! I also think having a Level 8 Monster with 3000 ATK/DEF is a bit much. There was already that mistake with RDA, we don't need another good YCM falling into that trap of "oh, I really like this card, I'm gonna copy it's level and it's stats, give it some blatant effect and call it a card" (we've already seen too much of that today). Especially since it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. And before you say anything, I am fully aware that all the toon monsters can attack your opponent directly, and I just want to say, thank goodness you didn't have that effect. 8/10 (Good!) [/quote] Well it's very hard for me to find a pic that fits the toon monster model, so I chose this pic instead so it can relate to the name "rulers of the demented world" (toon world). I fixed the card's damage effect for more specific requirements so I can hopefully avoid the dreaded word "op'd". Also to your effect question no I don't want this card to add "Manga Ryu-Ran" I don't want to make the effect any longer than it needs to be. I could just say add 1 card with Toon OR Manga but unfortunately I'm too lazy. To your ATK/DEF point complaint it just seems fitting for this card to have 3000 it's a ruler I can't have it be weaker than "Blue-Eyes Toon Dragon" . Anyway thanks for the rating and comment you'll get a rep for sure 2morrow. [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311745024' post='5390896'] great, free Toon World "While this card is on the field OR Graveyard inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each time your opponent activates a card's effect OR Special Summons a monster." that seems a little bit too easy to pull the burn effect off you might want to make it slightly more specific [/quote] "While this card is on the field OR Graveyard inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each time your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card, Special Summons a monster from his/her Deck OR Extra Deck. " Better? Or do you want me to lower the damage inflicted? If so just say the word. I think it's fine the way it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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