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[quote name='Yu-gi-oh PWNED... Josh' timestamp='1312238853' post='5405867']
Ill join oh wait to late?
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send in your submission and ill add you in a sec

[quote name='Tymur Shayk' timestamp='1312239833' post='5405911']
Okay do we wait for the other judges? And after you've all come to a mutual agreement, will you say when and who are going into the second round?
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once all of us has had a chance to grade, then yes the users for the second round will be notified

[quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1312249566' post='5406249']
Wow...
My 2 cards got a low ass score.
And what do you mean that my Card Picture doesn't match the title. He's supposed to have like a power-like structure.
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don't worry about it just yet, your final score is the average of the three judges scores. and don't mind kitty too much, she is still learning the game. last time she played the tv series was about half way through duelist kingdom lol^.^

[quote name='catlover2011' timestamp='1312246070' post='5406130']
i cant belive my score was so high

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it was supposed to be your monster attacking there's
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ok so when your monster attacks then the effect is active right?

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the third judge has finally gotten around life's roadblocks, and is getting his scores in, i warn you, i will try to be as thorough as i can in the good, the bad, and the horrendously ugly... as well as what could be fixed to make the cards work better so the post will be rather lengthy when it comes

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i am posting this as i do it, i judge the set, and write my opinion, and since i feel you deserve some proof that i am working on it, here is the first set:


Malebolge, exarch of light and dark

If you have a deck specifically for this card, then you are losing almost three quarters of your deck, because it takes two cards played to summon, and once either is destroyed, you lose it, about half your deck will have to be strategically defending these two cards, and you will spend about a quarter of your deck trying to bring him back from the grave. The other quarter of your deck will focus on summoning him the first time, I.E. monsters that you can tribute, and monsters to attack with.
If you do not have a deck specifically built for him, you have essentially shot yourself in the foot; as he is more trouble to get out than say, a blue eyes white dragon, who has one hundred less defense, but two hundred more attack, and takes half the tribute in monsters, which are not removed from play, as well as not having to rely on two magic/trap cards, which when destroyed, kills it.
Also, on a note as to the two cards, if you have both in play, with this card being a divine attribute, it would suffer an attack decrease for not being a dark attribute, and since it is not a light, it takes a double whammy, which pretty much makes it a very expensive distraction. A suggestion would be to pick an attribute, or have it like homunculus the alchemic being; in that he shifts attributes to whatever the controller wants.
On a positive note, I do like the pay 500 life points to destroy that is something that I would keep after revamping this card.



Suggestions for improvement:
* You could split and have an exarch of light, and an exarch of dark, which would have to have their respective card in play.
* If you split, make them sort of like a summoned skull with an effect that makes them worth paying the tribute to pull out.
* Have the exarch have an effect that states it is not affected by the power drops of the two cards.
* Reduce the payment to one light, and one dark removed from graveyard (see chaos sorcerer) to special summon.
* Have it so that as long as one of the two magic/trap cards is on the field, he remains.
* Reduce the level to seven or eight

Fear of the dark and righteous reluctance:
Both are an intriguing twist on continuous cards, each by itself would work in almost any deck structured around that attribute. I personally see no problem with these two cards, and how they work independently.


STRATAGY: 4.5/10 - Note: unless you have a deck specifically built for drawing and using these specific cards, then 7.5 / 10. As a standalone, the rating stands at 4.5.

ORIGNALITY: 8.0/10 - although similar to real cards, it has a unique twist to not have epic Op-ed cards, but still usable.

LIKED: 5.5/10 - personally, I wouldn't use the monster, but if I had a light or dark themed deck, I would definitely put one of the other two in, but they have potential

ADAPT: 4.5/10 - Note: unless you have a deck specifically built for drawing and using these specific cards, then 7.0 / 10. The monster pretty much dictates the way that you play this deck, leaving little room for the unexpected


Malebolge, exarch of light and dark:


Artwork: o: I see no artwork, just a white square

Balance: 4.5: to high of a payment

Lore (Effect) : 5.5: good because of the destroy effect, bad because it is destroyed in the event of your opponent destroying a magic, or trap, they don’t necessarily have to overpower your monster.

OCG (Official Card Grammar): 6.0

How it all fits Together: 8.5: the magic and trap cards pull this score, the monster needs some work, but there is a great promise held in it

Card: (total Score) 24.5

Fear of the dark:

Artwork: o: I see no artwork, just a white square
Balance: 9: good effect, but not staggeringly overpowered
Lore (Effect) : : 9: good effect, but not staggeringly overpowered
OCG (Official Card Grammar): 8 the grammar is good, but as the saying goes, nothing is ever perfect
How it all fits Together: 8.5: the magic and trap cards pull this score, the monster needs some work, but there is a great promise held in it
Card: (total Score):34.5

Righteous reluctance:

Artwork: o: I see no artwork, just a white square
Balance: : 9: good effect, but not staggeringly overpowered
Lore (Effect) : 9: good effect, but not staggeringly overpowered
OCG (Official Card Grammar): 8 the grammar is good, but as the saying goes, nothing is ever perfect
How it all fits Together: 8.5: the magic and trap cards pull this score, the monster needs some work, but there is a great promise held in it
Card: (total Score):34.5

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[img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1927/ritual1.png[/img]

[spoiler='Lore']Activate when you Ritual Summon a Ritual monster, you can activate this card, thtat card gains 200 ATK, and It's Ritual Summon cannot be negated.[/spoiler]

[img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/3125/dragoncall.png[/img]

[spoiler='Lore']This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Bahmut the Dragon Lord". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon.[/spoiler]

[img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/4421/bahmutthedragonlord.png[/img]

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[center][center][img]http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6210/6059818236_7c083de365.jpg[/img][/center][/center]
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[center][center]Call of the Decayed:
"You can only activate this card during your turn when you control no monsters. Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Zombie-Type Monster from your hand in face-up Attack Position. During your End Phase, destroy that monster and increase your Life Points by that monster's ATK."[/center][/center]
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[center][center]Kriva the Deathless:[/center][/center]
[center][center]"This card is uneffected by Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects during your Battle Phase. Each time your opponent's monster(s) are destroyed by a card's effect, increase this monster's ATK by 500 for each monster destroyed."[/center][/center]
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[center][center][img]http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6203/6059270019_832818df22.jpg[/img]
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[center][center]Conducting Flesh:
"You can only activate this card when you Special Summon a Level 3 or lower monster to you side of the field. Destroy that monster and all your opponent's monsters whose ATK is higher that your monster's ATK."[/center][/center]
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[center][center]Here are my cards. My objetive was to make cards that could not only perform a good combo BUT ALSO be used with any other card. Not that kind of combos of "Invicible monsterrr", "Spell to Summon Monsterrr" and "Trap to Make your Monsterrr Inmortal". Something more realistic.
Hope you like!
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[quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1313798808' post='5456081']
That doesn't even answer the f***ing fact that the host of this contest hasn't talked about this contest in a long time and that judging already begun a while ago.
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for the record, we are here and continually check back rather daily, granted my internet decided to nap over the past few days, but we finally fixed it and are coming back to the game. and also, we go over each card individually and as an entry set and as you have noticed are rather thurough in making a call. just because we haven't said anything doesn't mean that we arent here. we are already working on all submissions, and adding the newest competitors to the list (which ill do in a sec.) and then once all of the slots are filled we can start doing the final scoring for the next round. just please be patient with us as we live in Idaho, and internet service is at the mercy of the weather.

[quote name='jkheoift' timestamp='1313798227' post='5456064']
can i join?
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yes

[quote name='toonbob20' timestamp='1313521506' post='5447987']
I've noticed that this contest was posted quite a while ago and I was wondering if I could still enter? I noticed there was a few slots left open, so I didn't know.
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yes

now that the list is full, any new contestant requests will be added to the Level 2 Roster.

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Alright since I'm entered I'll post my cards,
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[img]http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/1156/220858.jpg[/img]
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You may only activate this card when a Beast type monster you control is destroyed by battle. You gain 800 life points and may search your decl for one Level 4 or below Beast type monster with 1,500 ATK or less and special summon it to your side of the field. When you play this card, you may tribute one Beast type monster you control. If you do then you may search your deck for one Level 6 or below Beast type monster and special summon it instead.
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[img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2233/220858v.jpg[/img]
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Only play this card during your battle phase. Select one Beast type monster you control and one other monster that your opponent controls. The opponents monster loses 1,000 ATK and DEF until the the end of the battle phase. Attack the enemy monster with your selected Beast type monster. If your opponents monster is destroyed as a result of this battle, then negate all damage that the battle would inflict to your opponent, then deal 1,000 damage to your opponent.
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[img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/1156/220858.jpg[/img]
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Whenever card attacks, you may search your deck for a Level 6 or below Beast type monster and special summon it to your side of the field. Then The King of Lions ATK is increased by 3,000 until your end phase. Switch this card to defense position during your end phase.
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