3 random Xyz monsters

[~British Soul~]

Seiyaruu, Dragon of the East
WIND/Rnk3/Dragon/Xyz/Effect
2 level 3 monsters
Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to negate the activation of a Trap card and destroy it
2300/1800

Freezok, Glacias Dragon
WATER/Rnk3/Dragon/Xyz/Effect
2 level 3 monsters
When this card is targeted for an attack; you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to return the attacking monster to its owner's Hand.
2200/1600

Spellmage Archlord
DARK/Rnk4/Spellcaster/Xyz/Effect
2 level 4 monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Show your Hand to your opponent and inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each Spell Card in your Hand. This card cannot attack the turn this effect is activated.
2300/2000

[{Galvantula}]

Spellmage is UPed. I suggest increasing the damage to 800.

[~British Soul~]

i thought so...*changed*

[BFG Studios]

some ocg errors... but they're minor

[b]2 [u]L[/u]evel 3 monsters
Once per turn[u], y[/u]ou can detach 1 Xyz [u]M[/u]aterial from this card[u]: N[/u]egate the activation of [u]1[/u] Trap [u]C[/u]ard[u];[/u] destroy it[u].[/u][/b]

[b]2 [u]L[/u]evel 3 monsters
When this card is targeted for an attack[u]: Y[/u]ou can detach 1 Xyz [u]M[/u]aterial from this card[u];[/u] return the attacking monster to its owner's [u]h[/u]and.[/b]

[b]2 [u]L[/u]evel 4 monsters
Once per turn: [u]Y[/u]ou can detach 1 Xyz [u]M[/u]aterial from this card[u];[/u] inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each Spell [u]C[/u]ard in your [u]h[/u]and. This card cannot attack [u]during the turn this effect is activated.[/u][/b]

i like the first two, not so much the last one... maybe add a "show your opponent all Spell Cards in your hand" type of an effect to it so they know you're not lying

i like xyzs, they're cool... and i like these card
8.5/10

[{Galvantula}]

Actually most of it was right, if you know the new OCG. Most of it is slightly shortened. I don't think card is capitalized, but hand is.

[BFG Studios]

[quote name='Evolution-Emperor' timestamp='1311664819' post='5388242']
Actually most of it was right, if you know the new OCG. Most of it is slightly shortened. I don't think card is capitalized, but hand is.
[/quote]
card is only capitalized when when talking about a specific type of card...
"Spell Card" "Monster Card" "Trap Card"

[~British Soul~]

what i'll do is add a "show your Hand to your opponent" effect to the 3rd one

[~British Soul~]

bump, any more commments?

[Doom Chaos]

I like these. Nice job.